MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4)

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piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

this story is still very much fresh ..like it was..

poor Manik..bhcara have to deal with all this..

but poor nandu too..

make MaNan together soon..let them reunite enough of pain for both of them..

I will be waiting for their talk about the stuff and reunite ..

not make things for Manik more difficult..

update soonish😃

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divtan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

accident wala plot wasnt in the first story that u wrote na ???
this is one minor change...

woh flashback wala scene...
woh coffee wala...woh bhi nai tha na...thats also added in this new version ?? if i am not wrong...

kaise bataaoon tujhe is my fav Manan song...
god i love this song...
lyrics suit them perfectly...
woooww...

so for every update a song again ??? yayyy 👏👏

cz MaNan is music !!!!!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

sorry for the late conmments Misha...
was a bit tied up...

chalo chalo ab tum bhi update dedo :) 😆😆😆

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

this was one of my favrt stories

thanq so much u r planning to continute the story

loved this rewinding trip

awesome updates

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thamannamanan1

@thamannamanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

NM nandini manik

arymns pov was nice

how u handled this lady manik 😊

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Thoshna

@21July2014

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Mish mish mish!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a ton fir starting darbadar dil again!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I heard the song n its mind blowing! ! Love u bohott sara mishiii!!!!!

Manik takin shower n aryamann's reply to nandu for that daily soap expression were the changes made I guess.. I very well remember y nandu was mad at manik.. padhne se pehle hi I started laughin like a lunatic😆 he tore her fav red top while makin out😆

Daily soap wala line bhi I remember well but uske baad aryamann ka yeh line yaad nahi aa raha hai..

Its awesome mishiii!!!!!!!!! Jaldi update kar!!

I'll try to read whenever possible!😊

And manan make out session bhi u added na... I remember till nandu's eyes welled up seeing the rashes.. but I guess pehle wale pe u wrote manik was just kidding.. he was acting.. n as usual nandu got concerned but yahan pe real wale rashes aaye n uske baad wala part u added... I swear maine pehle wala nahi padha abhi..

Oops! Im forgetting so much! Hospital scene bhi added.. im 100% sure about this one.. I hope im right...

Love u mish!!🤗

Edited by Toshna_1522 - 9 years ago

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Khushbu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

awesooome wala update misha...

i am toh new for this story...so no idea about the previous chapters...

koi ni u r here na...toh y worry...usse bhi accha likhogi...

the flashback was to amazing...

u penned down every thing so damn perfectly...

loved it...

suspense h...really getting eager to know that...

superb update...

thanks for pm dear...

continue soon...😊

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mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

hi welcome back i love reading your this story when you left it was sad but thanks for coming back i know that may be there won't be ky2 again but at least through you guys keep ky2 alive for fans who really loved parth and niti at least through you guys stories we have our manan live with us Hamesha for ever and from my heart i appreciate your and all the other writers hard work take care keep smiling and god bless you sweetheart 👏

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mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

hi very nice update manan sweet moments were very sweet nicely done like it love it like always 😛 take care keep smiling and god bless you sweetheart 😉

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: divtan
accident wala plot wasnt in the first story that u wrote na ???
this is one minor change...

woh flashback wala scene...
woh coffee wala...woh bhi nai tha na...thats also added in this new version ?? if i am not wrong...

kaise bataaoon tujhe is my fav Manan song...
god i love this song...
lyrics suit them perfectly...
woooww...

so for every update a song again ??? yayyy 👏👏

cz MaNan is music !!!!!! ⭐️

sorry for the late conmments Misha...
was a bit tied up...

chalo chalo ab tum bhi update dedo :) 😆😆😆

Flashbacks were completely as previous!

Don't over think bab!

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522
Mish mish mish!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks a ton fir starting darbadar dil again!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I heard the song n its mind blowing! ! Love u bohott sara mishiii!!!!!
Manik takin shower n aryamann's reply to nandu for that daily soap expression were the changes made I guess.. I very well remember y nandu was mad at manik.. padhne se pehle hi I started laughin like a lunatic😆 he tore her fav red top while makin out😆
Daily soap wala line bhi I remember well but uske baad aryamann ka yeh line yaad nahi aa raha hai..
Its awesome mishiii!!!!!!!!! Jaldi update kar!!
I'll try to read whenever possible!😊
And manan make out session bhi u added na... I remember till nandu's eyes welled up seeing the rashes.. but I guess pehle wale pe u wrote manik was just kidding.. he was acting.. n as usual nandu got concerned but yahan pe real wale rashes aaye n uske baad wala part u added... I swear maine pehle wala nahi padha abhi..
Oops! Im forgetting so much! Hospital scene bhi added.. im 100% sure about this one.. I hope im right...
Love u mish!!🤗

Aaa!!!!!!!! Tosh is alive!!! LOL

KAISE HAII? Paper sabh vadhiya ka rahe hai?

Only hospital scene was an addition and maniks nature towards things!

Don't over think!!!!

Luv u too princess!<3