MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4) - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
This was amazing!
I am very excited for the next chappie!
The talk between aryaman and Nandu was very deep!
The thoughts reflected were so good!
I loved it a lot!
Waiting for the story to proceed!
Thanks for the pm!
Continue soon!
Keep writing!

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Posted: 9 years ago
It's amazing update dear..
They both performed in a bar...
Manik came to know about their performance..
He transferred all his shares under her name...
Y nandini is doing all this???
Aryaman is a true friend...
Thnxxx for the pm.
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi beautifully written love reading this story can't wait for next update take care keep smiling and god bless you sweetheart 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...loved it...
manik's reaction on seeing nandini singing in the bar...then nandini n arya's talk about heart...n the song was awesome...love the song...goes with the situation perfectly...n with their talk...
loved the way arya puts the condition of performing with NM only...love their bond...felt bad when nandini talked about hope...she was the one who used to talk about hope n told manik about it n made him believe inti...n now she herself has lost the believe in that word...
liked how arya diverted her mind n stopped her from drinking more...
loved the new change...though there were only two changes...but they were awesome...i.e. the song n nandini's reaction on seeing the article...before nandini only smirjed seeing the article n went to kitchen leaving a confused arya n telling him that its not easy for manik malhothra to forge her signatures...n then getting into the flashback of signature...how nandini complimented him on his signature after their marriage n then how she showed him how she could do his signature almost the same except the tail of m...n him showing her how to make his signature...n him telling n showing her that how perfectly he could copy her signature...n she got angry with him...n she had almost burned arya's kitchen in that process...n then there visit to ad studios where they meet the spokesperson who is none other than manik...
but here it was different nandini got angry on seeing the article...n called manik n him flirting with her though he knew that she would be angry with him after reading that article...n thats why she called but still he was flirting...loved it...cant wait for there meet...n what nandini will do...?? n how manik's reaction...
update soon...will be waiting for the next chapter...n sorry for replying so late got stuck up somewhere...so couldnt read n reply before...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Huffy...!!
M at last done...
Read all in a go today...
Sorry m really late...
U started it on 12 March... N m reading it now...
After more than a month...
Really sorry...
Vse I think this darbadar dil is better than d old one...
That was a lil stretched...
N this is a lil composed with limited no. of scenes which r important fr d situation...
N I like it...
Thank u very much fr sending me PMS fr each n every update although I wasn't commenting...
Luv uh fr that...
N about darbadar dil...
M soo excited fr d next update...
MANAN talk...
Nandini got bankrupt n manik shifted all his shares on nandus name...
That's really interesting...

Waiting fr d update...
Stay blessed...
Stay happy...
Keep smiling...
Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET... (AVI...)
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for manan meet

arymn damn cool frnd

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loving this new side of story...
Amazing update..
Looking forward for more...
DO cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I so love this Manan story of yours Misha especially Manik. I've read this do many times now. Hope u update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
And i am really really sorry for not being able to comment before
I had been runnibg so busy that i could not even read your stories
And then finally today i read it
The updatea are beautiful
And about that blood sample thing, it disturbed me so much because i just couldnt get any idea about
And dear why did you leave the last update there
I so wanted to read it, but its ok, i understand
Plz update as soon as possible and plz send me the pm's

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