MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4)

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DARBADAR DIL



Hieee munchkins!
So finally I am reposting my second ever story on if!
Trust me! I really dint know you people are still attached to this story and waiting and rereading it till now!
Ufff! That makes me feel overwhelm as well as nervous!
I really hope I could reach your expectations!
I had SOO much to say but now I am blank!


PROLOGUE
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An extremely infuriated Manik malhotra, owner of malhotra music group and leading and most demanded singer in Asia; banged his fist on his office desk and then leaned back into his huge and comfortable chair, running a frustrated hand through his hair. He exhaled heavily as his index finger and thumb made their way towards his forehead on their own accord and started massaging it nimbly. He hadn't been able to concentrate on his work for a second the entire day. He was getting restless as if he is losing something close to heart. His thoughts wandered to Nandini and nandini only which he lost long back. A Sad sarcastic smile crept on his lips at irony of the feeling that's his heart knows that he doesn't have anything to lose anymore but still feeling restless about it.

He looked at the clock. 6:30 p.m. Half an hour left till his meeting with the foreign clients started and here he was, still thinking of Nandini since morning.

He squeezed his eyes shut and leaned his head back on the chair only to realise a lone tear making his way down his eyes.he cupped his face and sighed out stress to concentrate on his work when His gaze fell on the tiny picture frame placed right in front of him on his desk. He looked so happy standing next to her. Both of them had bright smiles on their faces. It was an unintentional click from there performance at concert... the moment of their victory... Their HOPE... Nandini's HOPE... Their love. He still couldn't believe how things changed around him with a click and till date he doesn't even knows what exactly happened. He is even afraid to think if his Nandini Is even alive!


He gently carsed nandini's face. Her dazzling smile was the only the fuel that kept him alive. Her face shining with happiness and dripping innocence which captured his heart.

Manik smiled as he saw the picture, but also felt his cheeks getting wet, and realized he was crying when a drop of tear fell on the frame he just brushed his soft fingers on the picture he was holding in his hand. "Please come back to me. I still love you." He said,

He hugged the picture close to his chest, hoping in his heart, that his prayers would be heard.

Manik was broken out of trace by continuous ringing of his cell phone. He composed himself and answered the call.

'Mr malhotra, this is Mr sahni senior manager of gold hue music group... I contacted you to inform that We have agreed to all your terms and condition you presented to except our album purposely"

Hearing the voice from the other side... Manik smirked
"Well,you had too" replied manik.

"Sir, management has chosen the singer to sing with you in the album... She is raw talent that can take album to new heights of success" said Mr sahni to which manik listened being bit impress because for any commoner it wasn't an easy task to win their heart and make them praise her like this.

"But there is a miner problem to it" said Mr sahni being bit nervous.

"What!"

"Sir! She rejected to perform or work with you"said Mr sahni in one go.

What!!! who the hell she thinks she is... She
"She had the auducity to say No to MANIK MALHOTRA..." manik shouted out of anger.

"Where she is... Tell me her freaking name..." Screamed manik.

"Sir her name is NM..."

"What kind of name is that"

"Sir, I don't have complete details about it...but I know that she is performing at a concert tonight" said Mr sahni out of fear.

"Text me the address...I will be there... Dont inform anyone about it"

"Let's see who has the Auducity to say no to manik malhotra "He sighed as he stared blankly out of the window of his dimly lit office room towards the setting sun.

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Index

chapter 1: Darbadar Dil ~ page 1
Chapter 2: Kasie Bataoon ~page 6
Chapter 3: All Of Me ~page 11
chapter 4: yaara re~page 15
Chapter 5: PHIR BHI yeh zindagi ~page 20
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CHAPTER 1
Darbadar Dil

As manik was on his way to the concert, he took out his wallet and looked at the picture in it which instantly brought smile on his face. The smile for which he was living for, the dripping innocence which was his stress boaster it was his nandini looking breathtaking in gold orange suit with beauitiful eardrops wearing most beautiful smile and the fact that was delightful was that reason begind that smile was he himself. He doesn't knows where Nandini is how Nandini is... He so wants to hate her for leaving him all alone but still something in him isn't able to hate it because it beats for her.




Manik's car honked as it arrived at the venue and door was opened by his chaffer for him. He could have got sheer great attention as people would die for just a glimpse if they got to know about manik malhotra, the legend himself on the floor between them but he rather chose to seek into the concert not getting much acknowledged by people around.

Manik was about to enter the newly built stadium. As he approached the entrance, there was a small line of people waiting their turn to be frisked. He noticed that there were certain things not allowed into the stadium for safety reasons.

One lady had a large chain that resembled a dog chain in her pocket. The guard told her to take it back to her car or throw it in the trash. He was blown When he saw that lady threw her chain in the trash. That moment he realized how devoted some of these fans really were and they can go to any extend to just attend this particular concert. It was rather like a surprise to him because these kind of incidents do Happens with him too but he was afraid to admit that this girl have definitely got something into her that first she had the audacity to reject the proposal in hand, a bloody life changing proposal to share stage with manik malhotra and how crazy fans are about her concert. He continued through the gates.

As he entered the shiny glass, swinging doors, we walked into the club level with multiple bars, restaurants, and the old fashion hot dog stands. This was the first realization of how amazingly built the new stadium was.
"Indeed London dreamz" manik whispered under his breath fascinated by the venue.



Manik gave a dotted look around the place. He was surprised as The crowd was not what he expected it to be. As The crowd did not consist of just young kids that loved heavy metal, but also older people that were once cursed by their own parents for listing to rock n roll. One question was disturbing him and nagging his braincells out that Why would older people want to come and listen to music with a bunch of crazed young kids that were jumping and yelling.

While the vast crowd waited in anticipation, I was still trying to take in the raging crowd, the stage, and the event that was about to take place when he finally heard the soft and soothing sounds of the speakers pierce my ears. Manik was rooted as his ears absorbed and instantly recognized the voice.

"Darbadar dil..." As soft words came out of the speakers crowd went silent with lighters and hiding in their hand.

"a broken heart is one of those experiences that all of us as humans can share, yet you can only experience alone.

As humans, we're wired to experience incredible love and affection. But for every action, there's an equal and opposite reaction, and when it comes to the ecstasy of true love, that reaction is a gut-wrenching pain, a deep void of sadness, utter lethargy, and feelings of seemingly eternal loneliness.

Amazing part is that heart... Its has been played, stabbed, cheated, burned and broken. But somehow it still works.

That's when broken heart becomes darbadar dil..."

Manik closed his eyes registering her voice he was longing for so long. He could visualise the innocent and dazzling smile. His heart stopped beating and only thought wandering in his mind was 'is it his Nandini? Can that be possible!"

Dil me darare...
Dil me darare...
Ho ho



As Nandini made her way up on the stage while singing as she came in view crowd went crazy. Nandini sang with serene calm on her face as she paused making people yell there lungs out of excitement. Manik couldn't believe what his eyes were showing him. His heart skipped a beat seeing the view in front of him.

Dil me darare hi darare hai Dil me kai hai darare
Yaade teri hai darare

Nandini closed her eyes and sang with immense calmness on her face. Manik was shocked seeing nandini in faded black jeans with thick black half jacket hugging her curves and tank top which was loosely hanging giving her curves funky look but still her waist curved teased coming out of the side cuts of the top with around 5 inches heels which was so not nandini-ish thing. That was first realisation that hit him like bomb. His heartbeat was pumping furiously in his throat not knowing was it really his Nandini.



Tute jo tinka to hawa ka aasra
Tute sitara to dua ka aasra
Dil tut jaye to woh jaye kaha

Nandini sang with sheer calm on her face but it reflected sheer pain in her that her inner soul was going through. Half part of him was screaming him that it was his Nandini but the other logical half wasn't ready to accept it.

Nandini walked forward on the stage till the end point of stage which agitated the crowd and became uncontrollable.



Darbadar hai darbadar khudaya
Darbadar hai bekhabar hai ye dil
Darbadar ka hamsafar na koi
darbadar ki manjil

Darbadar hai darbadar khudaya
Darbadar hai bekhabar hai ye dil
Darbadar ka hamsafar na koi
darbadar ki manjil



As cores manly voice reached his eyes manik opened his eyes to find the cores sung by the man who was playing tabla behind who was non other than Aryamann khuranna and the few others with guitar whose faces were new and unknown to him.

Seeing Aryamaan there, Manik was dead sure that she is non other than his Nandini because so many things cannot be coincidence.




Sa ni ga ma ga ma ga ma dha pa dha ma ga re sa
Sa ni re sa ga re sa ni dha ni
Sa ni re sa ga re sa ni dha ni
Sa ni re sa ga re sa ni dha ni


Nandini bought the mike closer to her tilting her head concentrating on the 'raag'.

The maturity , the serenity and neutrality in her voice kicked him. He was so impressed by the sincerity in her voice which has been improved to no extend in these years. People felt so connected to the voice that made them revive their heartbreaks.

The words came to Manik as Strom hitting his heart hard. He closed his eyes feeling the inner turmoil going in his heart. He didn't know what exactly his heart should be feeling right now. Rational part of him felt cheated for all these years but his heart wanted to drown in the depth of her words which made his heart bleed.


Hai adhure sire jo
Woh khule hi rahe to
Tumse hi the yehi manke ham chale to



Nandini looked aimlessly somewhere in the crowd. Clearly reflecting pain as if crying her heart out. Manik closed his eyes not having the courage to look into her eyes because he don't want his eyes to reflect his inner turmoil. His heart tore seeing his nandini in such vulnerable state. He feel guilty but reason behind he himself don't knew. Many questions were unanswered. A lone tear escaped his eyes seeing Nandini. If she herself is so hurt then why she made both of us suffer all these years.

For crowd around it's hard not to feel like they are part of a big shared experience, so much so that's it's hard to describe to someone that wasn't there. Audience roared between the encores. He saw crowd sobbing silently feeling her words as their that explains him how not only youth but oldies were so connected to nandini.



Tumse hi the yehi manke ham chale to
Ye thoda shikwa hai tera mera gila hai gar hota nahi
Chahe lage ya lage na dil tutne ka darr hota nahi
Socha hai pehle bhi kitna par hota nahi




Nandini closed her eyes making her concentrate back on her present to resist her past memories to haunt her due to which her node went high and making it intense that had the power to heal or reopen any heartbroken wound. Manik felt a lump in his throat feeling the pain the nandini is trying to suppress in herself. But it made conditions even worse as manik was unaware of the reasons behind her pain. He wanted to scream out so loud eyeing Nandini in same pain which he has gone through all these years.

'If you are going through same pain, then why did you left me with one' manik's heart screamed.




Darbadar hai darbadar khudaya
Darbadar hai bekhabar hai ye dil
Darbadar ka hamsafar na koi
darbadar ki manjil

Darbadar hai darbadar khudaya
Darbadar hai bekhabar hai ye dil
Darbadar ka hamsafar na koi
darbadar ki manjil

As chores was sang by back singers. Nandini spread her arms sidways enduring the atmosphere around her with her eyes closed with hear tilted backward.
The crowd was head over heels with the voice and sang along the chores singer in unison waving their hands in the air. As nandini opened her eyes she looked out on a sea of waving lighters and phones in the air making the view magical.


Sa niii
dha pa ga pa dha ni

Seeing the crowd so enthusiastic that nandini straight away picked up with a high node bend more towards the crowd which made concert more dazzling and participatory. Manik couldn't look at nandini's voice was enough to encounter with her pain. Millions of questions and emotions were hitting his so hard that he would explode anytime. Should he be happy that he could finally see his Nandini or should he feel cheated that all these years Nandini never even cared about him even for a micro second..

What changed in them overnight?




Darbadar hai darbadar khudaya
Darbadar hai bekhabar hai ye dil
maula!!!!!!

Darbadar ka hamsafar na koi darbadar ki manjil
maula!!!!!!!


Nandini ended up with the most intense high pitch that made crowd roar in endurance.




Concert was a huge success which could be witnessed by hearing the yelling and screaming ' NM! NM!! NM ' till people could barely breath till long with boards held high in air reading "NM ROCKS" after the concert ended.


Nandini waved and gave a satisfactory smile and posed before leaving the stage. To which Manik smiled unknowingly but the smile don't reached her eyes that could make them shine. Nandini was escorted to backstage completely protected by guards from the over boarded fans.

Manik covered his face with his single hand so that not to get noticed by anyone. He walked towards the back stage and he was allowed in to the members only area of the stadium, thanks to the Mr sahni.

He saw nandini walking towards her vanity. Manik couldn't stop himself and shouted Nandini which made nandini stop in trace. Now he was 200% sure that it was definitely his Nandini.

Nandini went numb as she heard the voice she shut her eyes tight and opening it again wishing it to be a dream but hard luck.

Manik slowly took calculative steps towards nandini feeling lump in his throat. As he reached close to her and whispered ' nandini ' ever so soft that made nandini shiver till spin.
Nandini took a deep breath and turned around with a expressionless face.

"Its NM, not nandini" said nandini coldly without giving damn to manik she continued "You are mistaken SIR!" Said nandini in a civil tone with cold expression.

"Sir?"whispered manik under his breath as he saw nandini turning away and resuming her way back which agitated Manik because he was sure it has to be his Nandini.

"NANDINI MALHOTRA... Stay where ever you are" shouted manik making nandini shiver and turn toward manik as she was shocked hear the name with which he addressed her.

Manik held her by her shoulder and slammed her hard against the wall getting dangerously close to her. Manik cupped her face.
"Its nandini murthy or nandini malhotra"
He whispered on her lips.

"you can't deny the fact that bloody fact that you still carry my name along with you" said manik slamming his lips with hers.

Nandini was so numb to react as she realised she protested trying to push manik away only to make manik's grip stronger around her waist. His tongue ran lightly across the line of her mouth, trailing intoxicating fire from corner to corner. Against her will she felt every muscle in her body relaxing, her arms beginning to slide around his neck, one hand finding the crisp warmth of his thick hair.

Her lips parted voluntarily under the passionate, gentle insistence of his. Suddenly it was as though some unbelievably wonderful firework had exploded in her mind, showering brilliance and colour through the darkness.

Her fingers clenched in his hair and then she was lost in a kiss more utterly sensual, more bone-melting, than anything she had ever dreamed of. His body was fierce and hard against hers, their mouths locked together in a sweetness that was scalding, enveloping like fire. His touch was a sensuous agony. She felt a little moan rising in her throat, her senses clamouring for fulfilment.

He said her name against her lips so softly with all his heart which made nandini come back to her senses only push manik away. Manik looked into nandini's eyes which looked so intense that could burn him alive.

"Its NM ... Only NM... DO YOU GET THAT" screamed nandini at top of her voice and walked away leaving numb manik behind.

Manik took out his wallet and looked at the picture again , caressing her face,as the only question nagged him
"what made my nandini so aloof that its hard for even me to recognise her"
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I have a request to make...

This song is 'DARDADAR' from movie 'I, ME AUR MYSELF'
I want you guys to listen to this number while reading it... You won't regret downloading it... I really want each one of you to hear it... You will feel the chapter I bet on this!!!!

I myself kept song plugged in my ears while writing the chapter that made words to flow automatically...

Please do give lambaa lambaaa comment.
Criticism is more than welcome.

And don't ask what happened in past and all that stuff because for that you need patience for the story to get unfolded.

I will try to reply all your queries and comments do give a look to them once.

Buddy me for further updates... And i will NOT entertain any SILENT READER with pmz... So please... Those who don't like my work or don't comment please unbuddy me yourself...

Eagerly waiting for your views and critics...

And do tell me your experience after listening to the song
'darbadar'

Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill...
Edited by mishshergill - 9 years ago
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Damn! I miss those days back then... But so many memebers left the forum coz of bashing or kyy ending or personal reason!
I was going through my own story and I found sooo cuteee comments there!
Aweee! So I am sharing them with you too!

Wow nhi Kya din thy!!

-: By mawara!!!

First of all m late hehehe..!!
Sholly..!!

Acha coming to chapter yes it's a fiction but in reality aisy awlaaa singers kay liye aisy bohat say crazy fans dkhy hain myny...even i am a damn crazy person for concerts..!! Oh God..!! My friends are always like kay tm concert main ja kar pagl ho jati hoo..!! hahahaha..!! Crazy me..!!

Manik came and saw "NM" singing..!
the intensity of song was awesome..
and then he went backstage..

"NANDINI MALHOTRA..!!" Gosh..! Nandu ka tou jo reaction tha so tha my heartbeat skipped for a second hye..!!

Phr Aa gai THE KISS..!! Which i wasn't expecting at all..!! And i got lost somewhere..! hehehe..!!

Ok now my curiosity is increasing like hell..!! God..!!

Akhir aisy bhi kya hua Manik aur Nandini kay beech kay juda ho gai un ki rahain..!!

Akhir q jany pehchany say do log ban gye ajnabi..!!

Akhir aisa kya hai un kay beech jo itna qareeb hoty huay bhi door hain..!!

Jan'ny kay liye parhty rahye MERI MISHU ka Dil Darbadar..!!
Hahahaha..!!
Thank you for the quick early update..!!
Your Mao Loves You alot..!
Muaahhh..!!


Awe! One of the cutest comment!
Thanx bae!
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Wow tht was awesome...
Welcome back all over again...
With the old chap..
Luved it..
Can't wait for next..
Update soon..
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Originally posted by: mishshergill





Damn! I miss those days back then... But so many memebers left the forum coz of bashing or kyy ending or personal reason!
I was going through my own story and I found sooo cuteee comments there!
Aweee! So I am sharing them with you too!

Wow nhi Kya din thy!!

-: By mawara!!!

First of all m late hehehe..!!
Sholly..!!

Acha coming to chapter yes it's a fiction but in reality aisy awlaaa singers kay liye aisy bohat say crazy fans dkhy hain myny...even i am a damn crazy person for concerts..!! Oh God..!! My friends are always like kay tm concert main ja kar pagl ho jati hoo..!! hahahaha..!! Crazy me..!!

Manik came and saw "NM" singing..!
the intensity of song was awesome..
and then he went backstage..

"NANDINI MALHOTRA..!!" Gosh..! Nandu ka tou jo reaction tha so tha my heartbeat skipped for a second hye..!!

Phr Aa gai THE KISS..!! Which i wasn't expecting at all..!! And i got lost somewhere..! hehehe..!!

Ok now my curiosity is increasing like hell..!! God..!!

Akhir aisy bhi kya hua Manik aur Nandini kay beech kay juda ho gai un ki rahain..!!

Akhir q jany pehchany say do log ban gye ajnabi..!!

Akhir aisa kya hai un kay beech jo itna qareeb hoty huay bhi door hain..!!

Jan'ny kay liye parhty rahye MERI MISHU ka Dil Darbadar..!!
Hahahaha..!!
Thank you for the quick early update..!!
Your Mao Loves You alot..!
Muaahhh..!!


Awe! One of the cutest comment!
Thanx bae!


Seriouly?? Hehehe! I am crazy I know! I even didnt remember that I wrote this haha! Kya boloon itna bara sa smile aa gya mery face pay sachi! So glad that darbadar dil is back..
All the best Mishu! Love itnaaa sara! Dhair sara! :)
Love,Mawara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved the prologue & update...
it was really fabulous update dear...
every emotion u described was PERFECT...
nandini 7 manik separated...
really eager to know that...
cant wait for next update...
do update soon...
thanks for pm too...
the song is awesome...& its one of my favorite number too
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow! This was truly awesome!
I was waiting so much for this story to unfold!
I am so excited for this!
The pain and longing can be felt from ur words!
You seriously are an amazing writer!
I am again in so much love with this storyline!
Thanx for continuing this and pm too!
Continue soon!
Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
luved it...
plz continue soon...
waiting anxiously...
take care...
stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey gal just read ur chp. Interesting story line. Both r far,both in pain,both in love, but mny reasons unknown. Would b looking forward to ur update.tc n gud luck

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