MaNan SS||Darbadar Dil|| chapter 5 (5/4) - Page 6

Superb update
Sorry i lost track of the earlier one so i am reading it as a new story
MaNan is pain ... Dammm
The flashbck super hottt
They were so cute
Seperation kyun hua
Thnkz 4 the pm
Wow u r gonna give daily updates yehhh

Heyyy ... Here I read back to back two updates of this story ... Nd memories taza ho gyi ...

Awesome update..

Wow outclassed totally awesome update

I am loving it and its more intense but don't make it too dramatic and manik didn't know why she left then why is he apologising for it

Both are cold and ruthless now which makes it more interesting how they will cope with each other

Continue soon and thanks for pm

yeah it was going good yaar ... she taking care of him in last update

what made you change this story

lets c in 1st part is like same before

Awesome update... Nice...
She still love him...
Both love each other.. .
What happened in past?? ?
Please update soon... 😆

like the update...thanks fr the pm

Mishi baby chorry ha kaan pakadke I kw am late... Was stuck up wid some work baby... Jus read both chapters in a go... Jus wow baby Manik being an arrogant monster crying awww mujhe bhi Rona aa raha hai... N how can se reject him awww n the song n title jus wow n awesome dil ko chu
Liya... N can feel evry word u wrote jus wow baby... N the way Manik expressed hi feelings uska pov after seeing her was so emotional n happy at a time both the feelings u portrayed so damn well n jus awesome... N the kiss Hayeee Manik kabhi nahi chodtha apna haak jathana... N jus wow but they both married shit dis I dint expect at all... But jus wow n unka falshback s jus blissful n specially their romantic n cozy moments awww jus bliss it s... Awww NM s Nandini Manik jus wow the name s superb... Perfect name... N aise kya hua nandu shud run away from Manik n portray ki he s dead... Aab u kw patience nahi hai jaldhi update kardho next part... Hahaha arya ka last dialog hilarious tha I salute u Manik hehe too good...
Aab it's an awesome n loving start n long way to go baby... Mishi update jaldhi dho NA pls... N sorry ha next time se time peh comment kar dungi I kw am late chorry... Love u baby n god bless

Thanks for pm
Lots of love
Pravallika

Superb update

I loved it
Nd flashback scene's were awsum

Waiting for the next update
Update soon dear

sorry for commenting late
I was shocked and happy that
you are continuing
my favorite story
awesome updates
cont soon