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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
lovely update
both r in so much pain💔
loved the flashback
so nm is nandini manik
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Superb.
As u r Gona give us update regularly.
Very soon we will be the same point where u left.
It's realy intersting to read new twists and turns.
Nandu's punishment was hot.
Next part soon please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Wow awesome update mishu..
Luved the flashback and I think it was diff..
So NM is nandini manik hmm...
Again suspense what happened..
Manan were soo hurt and broken..
Aryaman seems to be same as before..
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Waiting for new twist and turns...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wowooo awesome superb dhasuuu update loveddd it awesome tooo good plz cont soon thanks for pm😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Finally read both the chapters... This story seems to be wow... If this is what u wrote when u first started writing... Then god... U have some talent... Gods gift for sure. .
Totally loved the story ... N ager nandini lobes Manik so much... So what is keeping her away...

And NM is nandini Manik... This shows the depth of her love...

Really very eager to know what happens next...

Thanxx for the rewriting the story.. N the pm
N all the best for this new start...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Wow.

ThaT was awesome.

flashback scenes amazing the.
I think its diff. alsoo

I soo liked it ...
Manan r in shoo hurt...
Aryman is just likee before..
Soo with new twist n plot..
I'll be waiting eagerly. .
for a same but little different ride.

waiting for next update eagerly.

thanks for pm. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Beautiful

Flashback was awesome
Lol who doesn't like romance especially manan..

Both r really really hurt..
Wat nandu is hiding

Thank u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Its was emotional & romantic part... Manan were very hurt... Flashback was very sweet... But why nandini left him when she love him so much... Waiting for it... Its really hard for aryaman to handle manik's nandini 😛
THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Wow...there were so many changes...😲
The starting was different...last time manik throwing thinks n getting his hand hurt n the past when he woke up on the hospital bed was not there...infact the mention of fab3 was never there till chapter 12 only cabir was there...n last time he was determined to fight back for them n get nandini back that was what he said...n this time it was showed that he is hurt n angry from her behavior alot...n he is said about getting the answers that n not letting her play with them...last time he was thinking that what had happened that changed her so much...
Last time you dint show about the messages he had sent to her...last time she was seeing there picture n crying...this time she ran out of her room for some fresh air but last time she dint...n then the coffee flashback last time u just showed till he said he will be alright after the cold shower n had some other comments before she had spilled the coffee on him...n she had said alot of sorry for hurting him...n was crying...but this time u had there rommance...
Aryaman's entry was different this time...last time he hadn't come like this...sorry I don't exactly remember but I remember that they dint have the conversation like this...she had told him in some different way that she had met manik yesterday n his reaction was not so dramatic...but her attitude was same...regarding the manager...n his line also about manik...praising him for handling her n loving her...
So in short there were addition n editing in the scenes...Manik was angry were as last time he was hurt...not that he is not hirt but he is showing much of anger than hurt this time...but last time he was not angry he was feeling her pain...the pain she had to go through...n aryaman is going to be more dramatic than last time...last time he was very less dramatic...n I think this time the past will be out little soon...than before...as nandini is being very week when she is alone...but u know the thin kthat I liked in previous plot was manik's behavior... He would not hurt her or take out his anger on her...he would trap her to be with him...n try to get answers but never be harsh on her...
So I have a request plz don't change his behavior with nandini this time also...plz...plz...I loved the way he showed his love towards her...n acted maturely... Dont make him harsh towards her...or make him take out his anger on her...
N loved the chapter n it's changes just don't want a angry hulk manik with nandini...n manik to misunderstand nandu...
Edited by Devanshigupta14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Devanshigupta14

Wow...there were so many changes...😲

The starting was different...last time manik throwing thinks n getting his hand hurt n the past when he woke up on the hospital bed was not there...infact the mention of fab3 was never there till chapter 12 only cabir was there...n last time he was determined to fight back for them n get nandini back that was what he said...n this time it was showed that he is hurt n angry from her behavior alot...n he is said about getting the answers that n not letting her play with them...last time he was thinking that what had happened that changed her so much...
Last time you dint show about the messages he had sent to her...last time she was seeing there picture n crying...this time she ran out of her room for some fresh air but last time she dint...n then the coffee flashback last time u just showed till he said he will be alright after the cold shower n had some other comments before she had spilled the coffee on him...n she had said alot of sorry for hurting him...n was crying...but this time u had there rommance...
Aryaman's entry was different this time...last time he hadn't come like this...sorry I don't exactly remember but I remember that they dint have the conversation like this...she had told him in some different way that she had met manik yesterday n his reaction was not so dramatic...but her attitude was same...regarding the manager...n his line also about manik...praising him for handling her n loving her...
So in short there were addition n editing in the scenes...Manik was angry were as last time he was hurt...not that he is not hirt but he is showing much of anger than hurt this time...but last time he was not angry he was feeling her pain...the pain she had to go through...n aryaman is going to be more dramatic than last time...last time he was very less dramatic...n I think this time the past will be out little soon...than before...as nandini is being very week when she is alone...but u know the thin kthat I liked in previous plot was manik's behavior... He would not hurt her or take out his anger on her...he would trap her to be with him...n try to get answers but never be harsh on her...
So I have a request plz don't change his behavior with nandini this time also...plz...plz...I loved the way he showed his love towards her...n acted maturely... Dont make him harsh towards her...or make him take out his anger on her...
N loved the chapter n it's changes just don't want a angry hulk manik with nandini...n manik to misunderstand nandu...


Lol!!! I was rocking like hell reading it!!!
You are just bit correct in Maniks case has useless bad sadly u weren't correct as I dint change anything in Nandini's part and Aryamaan 's too so yeah! But nice effort I must say!!

And about maniks characters... Yes actually he is gonna have shades... But surely will act mature and not hurt Nandini in any damn way!

Chilled and trust me with it!
Thanks

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