manan ss:- Mein Tera Sarmaya Hun...(chap 29 /pg 109 updated ) - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm


Awsmmm



Awsmmm


Sooo cute




Aww first kiss

Soha deserve it

Manik is siooo caring


Lovely pics

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
hate that soha😡😡
how dare she talk like that with nandu😡
loved how manik gave her a piece of mind
she deserved that
loved manan moments in the rain
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
finally the confession happened..
Manan were soo happy...
Soha is sch a bitch...
Poor Nandu she was all shattered...
Thank god Manik came on time...
Manan Aashiqui kiss was awesome...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fast Update .. Yeyeye Amazing Update. Awesome Update. Quite Nicee.. 😛 Nandu n Navya talk was nice.. liked it 😃 Ye soha poha na. muh tod dugi me iska 😡 Nandu ki insult ki isne 😡 Huh... Accha hua manik ne slap mara 😆 bdiii aayi... Nandu was so shattered. 😭 Poor Baby. But manik is there for her. Manan First Kiss 😳 Hayeee.. So Beautiful na 😳 Seriously ... Mind Blowing Update ... loved it.. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.. !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep Smiling !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! It was superb. Loved it. Finally confession ho gaya. But i wanna kill that bloody bitch soha. Loved manan. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice cover...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..
so Beautiful n Intense Banner.

Beautiful 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey guys here is the next chappy do read and comment...and ya spelling mistakes ho toh maff karna...😉
happy reading...!!😃



Chapter 24-

After feeling out of breath both brok the kiss...but still resting their forehead on eachother trying to gain control over their raging breath...still in the same position...

Manik-I love u...

Till now her eyes were closed but after hearing him say those magical words again she opened her eyes and raised her head to look at him...

Nandini- I love u too manik...bahut bahut zada...

And soon they started walking while manik entwined their hands...to which nandini looked at him with all her love...the driver came with their car and they sat in the back seat and drove off...

Manik-driver...switch on the heater...

Driver- ji sir...

Manik took his extra blazer which he always keeps in his car in case for any emergency...and put it around nandini ...covering her securely...nsndini did nothing but kept looking at him lovingly...

Nandini- manik...

Manik-hmm...(still adjusting the blazer around her)

Nandini-tum bhi share karlo na...tume thand lag jayege...u are also wet...

Manik- I'm ok nandu...whats more important ki u don't fall sick...(with lots of care and concern)

Nandini couldn't help but smile with tears of happiness ofcourse...

Nandini- manik...

Manik-hmmm...

And looked at her and saw that tears were threatening to escape...and nandini directly looking into his eyes gestured a thank u...

And manik...swiftly wiped those almost flowing tears gesturing a no...and wraped his arm around her while she snuggled more into him resting her head on his chest listening to his heart beats...

Soon they reached the malhotra mansion...

Malhotra mansion-

As soon as they entered all the ladies of the house came running towards them...and hugged nandini...

Geet- finally finally...nandu aapne kar hi dikhaya...

Navya- aawww...bhai...aap kitne cute lagrahe the jab nandu stage pe aapke liye gana ga rahi thi...your expressions were worth watching...too cute...

Nandu blushed while manik just smiled...when...

Maan- aur nahi toh...cute toh hoga hi aakhir bhai kiska hai...

Manik went and touched his feet...

Maan- we all saw...i am proud of you chote...mujhe tujh par naaz hai...

Cabir- are are buddy...itni achi wali news hai and tujhe award bhi mila saath mein meri syappa queen ka saath bhi sotreat toh bante hai...

Geet- uffo kya aap log bhi kya dono ko uljha rakha hai...see kitne gille hogaye hain mere bachhe...let them change and take rest baaki saari baatein kal subha karlena aapsab...manik nandini aap dono upar jayeye..mein...soup bhejti hun...

Cabir-kya bhabi sara maja kirkira kardiya...kahan meinne manik ki taang khichai ki puri planning kar rakhi thi aur ab...sheee...

Geet-koi zarurat nahi mere bhi ko tang karne ki and han...mere nandu ko bhi koi nahi chidaiga...samajh agayi baat...

Manan in unison-thank u di...(hugging her from both sides)

Nandini- oops sorry di humne aapko bhi gilla kar diya...

Manik- hand di sorry...

Geet- koi baat nahi...aapdono jake kapde change kar lijiye...

Manan room-

As soon as they enter manik moves towards the wardrob...and takes out fresh towels...and nandinis cloths...

Manik- nandu...yeh lo...tumhare kapde...and go and take a hot shower...warna u will catch a cold...

Nandini- par manik...tum bhi toh...

Manik- don't worry about me you go ...

Nandini smiled and went into the washroom ...while manik was arranging other things like arranging a warm blanket ,adjusting the room heater etc...etc

When nandini came out of the washroom...she found that manik was still in those wet cloths...roaming around arranging the things...

Nandini- manik...tumne abhi tak change nahi kiya...go and freshen up first...

Manik- nandu...u must bhi hungry sham se u haven't had anything thing come have this soup...

Nandini- nai...pehele u go and change get a shower nai toh I wont eat...

Manik- nandini...

Nandini- manik...

Manik finally accepting his defeat...

Manik- fine...i am going but till then dry your hair they are still wet ...u will catch a cold...

After sometimes when manik came back he saw nandini standing near the window and watching the rain outside...

Then he noticed that she still hasn't dried her hair...and he frowned...

Manik- nandu what is this yaar...tum ne abhi tak apne hair dry nahi kiye...kitni bari bola hai ki don't keep them wet u will catch a cold but tum kisi ki sunte kahan ho...

Nandini was smiling at him ear to ear watching his concern and care for her...

She walked closer to him and whispered near his ear...

Nandini- arre I am toh your baby na...your pumkin...so tumhe kardo na...(cutely)

Then looked at him smiling widely...and manik looks at her surprised...

Manik- tum..tumhe kaise pata...wait..

And realization stuck him...

Manik- u remembered...(smiling too is fullest)

Nandini- each and every detail...all of it...wont u dry your pumpkins hair...(like a baby)

Manik- ofcourse I will...

He made her sit infront of him and he sat behind her with a towel...and started drying her hair...with utmost care ...just like a mother takes care of her child...

Nandini leaned back on him while he kept drying her hair...

Nandini- I love it when u treat me like a baby...amma bhi aise hi mere hair dry karti thi...she used to treat me the same way u do...(with tears in her eyes)

Manik keeps the towel aside and already knowing that her eyes must be all ready to rain again he swiftly truned her around ,wiped the tears which were ready to flow...and holding her chin in between his index and thumb finger he makes her look at him...

Manik- aree...kya hua agar maa...humare pass nahi hain...she will always be their in our hearts na...and rahi baat baby ke tarah tujhe treat karneki toh wo toh me humesha karunga...and you cant stop me with that...aaj se I will pamper u...now smile pumkin...i also become sad when u become unhappy...

Nandini smiles a little...

Manik- areee...yeh kya...baby...smile mein bhi itni kanjusi...very bad...(dramatically)chalo give me your cute wali smile...that 32 teeths wali...

Nandini smaile alittle more this time...

Manik- lagta hai mujhe hi wapis lane padegi...

Nandini looked at him confused...

Nandini- kya manik...?

Manik-yeh...

And starts tickeling her and she starts laughing crazily...

Nandini-ma..manik..ha ha ha...manik..busss...ha ha...

Manik finally stops pulling her close ...

Manik- yeh hue na mere baby bali baat...i love my baby ka this smile...(pecking her cheek lightly)

Nandini just looks at him when he gestures what...

Nandini bends down and gentely pecks on his cheek...

Nandini- thank u for coming into my life...

Manik smiles and kissing her hands gentely holding them between his hands...

Manik- achha chalo chalo...bahut ho gaya...lets make my chotu baby eat something...my chotu stomach will be hungry na...sham se kuch nahi khaya na mere baby ne...

Nandini nods cutely like a baby...

And manik makes her sit on his lap ...and makes her drink the soup...wiping the corners of her lips time to time with a napkin...

Nandini- manik...

Manik- bolo baby...(while wiping the corner of her lips with the napkin)

Nandini- tumhe mera song kaisa laga...i wrote it only for u...

Manik- mera baby mere liye kuch kare bhala aisa kabhi hosakta hai ki mujhe wo pasand na aye...i loved it pumkin...(pecking her cheek)...

Nandini- sacchi...!!(very happy)

Manik- mucchi...mera doll !!!!

Nandini- I love u manik...(hugs him tightly)

Manik- luv u too meri jaan...(reciprocating the hug with equal favour)

Manik- achha chalo abhi so jao...bahut raat bhi ho gayi hain...and kal...remember u have a check up...so in the morning doctor uncle ayenge to check u up...

Nandini- (hearing this she became all quiet)hmmm...

Nandini lied down and manik also settled beside her and nandini hugged him holding him by his waist...and manik puts his arm around her while she rests her head on his chest...

Manik- kya hua baby ko...?(lovingly)

Nandini kuch nai...buss aise hi...

Manik knowing her inner turmoils ...said..

Manik- baby don't think so much na...give some rest to your chotu brain...ab jo hoga sab accha hi hoga...i am there na...infact we all are here for u...

Nandini -(finally gave a satisfied smile)I know...tumhare rehete mujhe kuch nahi hosakta ...never ever...(hugged him more tightly)gud night heroine...

Manik- gud night baby...

Maneet room-

Geet was sitting infront of the dressing table while applying moisturizer...and is in deep thoughts...

Maan notices that...

Maan- shona(maan calls her with this nick name)..

Geet is still in her thoughts...

Maan- geet...(this time a little louder)

This breaks geets trance and she comes out of her thoughts...

Geet- sorry aapko kuch chaiye tha...wo mein...

Before she could complete...maan pulls a chair and sits beside her takes her hand in between his...and...

Maan- shona...kya baat hai...tum itni pareshan kyun ho...aur aise khoye khoye kyun ho...kya hua hai...

Geet- wo mein bus..aise..

Maan- shona...batao...(politely)

Geet- maan...wo...mein soch rahi thi ki...aj nandu ko humne jaise tv pe dekha ...I mean...she was so happy...so content while singing...as if...music ne uska sara pain...sara dard bhula diya ho...toh mein yeh soch rahi thi ki kyun na hum sab nandu ko music ki taraf push kare...wo talented toh hai...saath hi saath...music se...it seems that she is healing faster...so why not hum usse...music se heal karne ki koshish karein...

Maan just looked at her ...geet got a little worried...

Geet- kya hua maan aap aise kyun dekh rahe hain...

Then suddenly his eyes got moist and he instantly pulled her in a hug...geet also reciprocates...

Maan- dekh raha tha ki how lucky I am to have u shona...tum sahi kehe rahi ho..i think humein gudiya ko music ki taraf push karna chahiye...this will keep her mind fresh and calm which will help her recover soon...hum kal subha...chote se baat karenge phir milke nandini se...

Geet- ji..(smiles)

MALHOTRA MANTION -

2:00 am

A girl quietly sneaks out wearing a short party dress... she hides pehind the pillar to check wether the watchmens are asleep or not then after conforming...she quietly sneaks out of the main gate...and walks a little a guy wearing helmeat is waiting on the bike the girl runs towards him and finally her face is revealed under the light of the street light...she is none other than...ALIYA MALHOTRA

Aliya- kahan the tum...i was waiting from so long...

The bikers face is still not revealed...

Ailya sits on his bike behind him...hugging him from behind...

Aliya- I missed u baby...now lets go...before anyone sees us...

The biker starts the bike and they leave...


precap- socho socho...😃thoda dimag lagao...😉

Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Simply love the way Manik treats Nandu like a baby
Hope music heals Nandu completely
Nice update
😊

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