manan ss:- Mein Tera Sarmaya Hun...(chap 29 /pg 109 updated ) - Page 60

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Finally like finally confession happened...
Update was soo beautiful..
Manik was soo happy...
Can't wait for Manan Union...
Luved it to the core..
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manan to come back from
Darga
Dad to get 2 know abut
Nandinis past
Manan cute breakfast seen
Nandini to tell manik
Abut her love
She shares it with Navya
The outfits were very pretty
Lovely
Manik give all his credits
To his family
Soha jelouse of Manan
Nandini to express her love
To manik in front of everyone
Amazing update
Loved it

Waiting for the next update
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God...wow.. Amazing Update. Literally. Finally Manan Confessed. yipeee. Manik award credit goes to nandu. how cutee. Ohh navya helped nandini. how cute she confessed. amazing update. Manan Moments were mind blowing. waiting for next update. Thanks for pm. !! Stay blessed !! !! Keep Smiling !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
who wants chapter 23 now in 15 mins...?
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Posted: 9 years ago
I want 😃 ..

please update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
surprise surprise...!!!chapter 23 is here...do like and comment and yes plz as i had already said earlier i want lambu comments atleat for chap- 22 and 23...and yes spelling mistakes ho toh maff karna...
happy rearing...!!!😆

Chapter 23-

They all started congratulating them and kept them busy and in all this fuss manik couldnot speak his heart... but there was no single second that manik did not look at nandini with thw corner of his eyes...people were also congratulating nandini but she was also least interested in it she was also busy in looking at her manik...and as usual soha was already on the verge of becoming half poha so she decided to chipkofy with manik...

Soha- hey manik...omg you look so hot today...

Manik-(trying to keep a distance)ummm...soha I think I should go...wo I have to meet others...

Bloody chewing gum soha...totally trying to gue herself with him...she is such a chipko I tell you...

Nandini was not liking it at all...but god was so generous this time he send help at right time...

Mr.ahuja- mr.malhotra...why are you here why don't you join us with miss moorthy on the dance floor...

Manik- no...sir we are gud here...

Nanini also agreed but...

Mrs ahuja- no no no...this wont do...after such a cute and romantic confession ek dance toh banta hai...come come...

They drag them to the dance floor...where other couples were also dancing...leaving soha behind to rot...

Dance floor-


As soon as they step on the floor mrs .ahuja pushes nandini a little towards manik and she stumbles towards manik a little and manik holds her and both look into eachothers eye...totally lost...and music starts...

Bg music-

Oooh ho...
Tum ho


Slowly he slids his left hand on her waist and with his right hand holds her other hand in his and don't know when looking in eachothers eyes they starts moving slowly with the rythem of the music...

Bg music-

Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon
Tuning...

He then sends her away still holding her hand and again pulls her closer and she gets pulled back only to again bang in his chest...


Bg music-

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tumko main jeeta hoon

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
ahmmm...
Aaah haa aa...


they move slowly with the music...he again sends her back and pulls her towards him...and this time he lifts her off the ground...while her hands are on his shoulder...


Bg music-

Kahin se.. kahin ko.. bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile

He puts her down ...while nandini places her one hand on his shoulder and sher looks into his eyes and he keeps his hand on her...


Bg music-

Bandishein naa rahi koi baaqi
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Then nhe pus his one hand behind her head and they dance in slow moments...its like love is in they air...



Bg music-

Oooh ho ho...


They then spread their hand s together and nandini leans back on manik to feel this moment...

Bg music-

Kis tarah chheenega aa
Mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
Tum bhi ho main
Kya fiqar ab humein

again he sends her away and pulls her close and they dance with the rythem...they keep looking in eachothers eye with passion...


Bg music-

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

he spins her around a little...then finally...

Bg music-

Oooh hoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa...


Manik- nandini...i..

But befor he could say...the loud clapping sound stoped him...hay...phir izhaar hote hote rehe gaya...

Then after that manik tried many times to do his dil -e- izhaar but something or the other happened...

Soon manik had to meet someone so he excused himself for a minute and went he didn't want to go leaving nandu alone but she forced him so he went and taking the opertunity...soha came to nandini with her nasty girl gang...

Soha- hello nandini...long time no see...

Nandini made bad faces...

Nandini- look babe...seriously just go and eat other peoples brain... I am seriously not interested...she was about to leave...when..

Soha- omg...!look tina what attitude she has even after doing such a dirty job she has the guts to talk back...

Nandini stoped at her place...and truned around...

Nandini- what are u trying to say...

Soha- awww...poor baby..i know...which type of girl are you...no need to get shy and all...if you want I can send more clients to you...you will have more income...

And her chamchies start laughing...

Nandini- what do u mean soha...?

Soha-oh no need to act so innocent and all...I know your dirty little secret...waise what are your charges per night..?

Nandini looks at her in disbelief...and becomes more hurt as she only knows what pain she has gone through ...and how she had recovered from all that trauma...not again...

Soha- arre...ok see you leave manik for me and I promise there is a friend of mine who can give u as much u wand...and ek secret bataun..he is really gud in bed...

Noew she was badly in tears as it was now on her dignity ...don't know how but soha had got some info about nandinis past hence is is making fun of her...but befor she could proceed more soha received a tight slap ...and the persone who slaped was none other than manik himself...nandini was now feeling so humiliated...

Manik- just shut up! Just shut your bloody dirty mouth u bi**h...how dare u...how dare you say anything about my nandini...

The whole party was quite actually shocked watching this drama as manik malhotra never misbehaves with any female...but today gosh...

Soha- manik u...

Manik- shut up!!!shame on you...being a woman yourself you don't know how to respect other woman...tum ne kabhi khud ko ine mein dekha nahi...u are bloody not even close to nandinis toe nails...tum usse kya bol rahi ho...tum khud kya ho...har waqt rich ladkon se chipakti rehete ho...i very well know about what king of a charachterless girl are you...do u want me to tell everybody about your one night stands...and how you reached here..how you are so successful in such a short time...tell me do you...

Soha- toh galat kya kaha meine...she is a bloody..

Manik- she was a victim god damit...!!!goddd...i cant bare you now...guards...

Guards come running...

Manik- throw her out of this place...

Soha- what ..u cant do this...

Manik- I can...

And they throw her out and while all this drama nandini felt so humiliated that not able tp bare anymore she runs out of the party...

Manik sees her running out...and he also runs behind her leaving the party...

Outside the party

Nandini ia running on the roads... while manik is following her...she is crying endlessly...and it starts raining...but who cares...she keeps running the pain...its killing her from inside...one incident changed her entire life...

Manik- nandini...plz stop...

A tturck is coming in full force towards nandini but she keeps running towards it ...she does not want live anymore the pain is killing her from inside...

But and the right time manik pulls her aside...

Manik-nandini!! Yeh kya karne ja rahi thi tum...

Nandini- nai manik..tum chod do mujhe mere hal pe...chale jao...go go...I am dirty...mein tumhari life bhi barbrbaad kardungi...go away...(babbering like a mad person trying to free herself from his grip...)

Manik- nandini listen to me...

Nandini -(keeps babering crying )chodo mujhe ...I will make you dirty...i..i..i am bad...bad..very bad...see I am dirty manik...chod do mujhe...marjane do mujhe..warna I will aso make you dirty...

Manik- nandini...look at me...nandini...

Nandini- I am drenched in dirt...leave me...(trying to free herself)

As she was not listing anything...

Manik-nandini!!!!!(shouting)hosh mein aao..(jerking her)

And nandini stops struggling and looks at him...

Bg music-

Tuning...

Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera

Manik-(looking into her eyes)tum mere liye kabhi galat ho hi nahi sakti...never...and I cant let you go...no matter what ...because I love u damit..!

Bg music-

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

manik- I love u idot...nahi janne de sakta mein tumhe...

Finally nandinis burst sinto tears and hugs manik tightly sobbing in his chest ...and he also reciprocates while it keeps raining...they keep hugging eachother for a while standing on the middle of the road...in the rain...

Bg music-

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

then they break the hug and both keep looing into eachothers eyes drowning in the passion of love...manik removed his blaser and adjests it on their heads...holds nandini by waist...

while feeling each other hot breaths they close their eyes in anticipation...resting their foreheads on eachothers...


Bg music-

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho



Feeling eachothers presence...they melt in eachother...slowly the closeness starts increasing...

Bg music-

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..


Bg music-

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


Finally their lips meet..sparks fly...they kiss begans slowly...with manik sucking her upper lips ever so softly and nandini reciprocating the opposite...it was their first kiss of love...tears start making their way from nandinis eyes...not of sorrow but of happiness ,happiness of feeling fulfied...complete...with each passing minute the kiss deepens and now andinis arms make their way around maniks neck ...her toll weinght is on him now...





Edited by abhilashaS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow finally confession hogya or yeah soha to sach me poha hi h
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry 4 not commenting on d previous chapter...
Both d updates r excellent...
Navya & nandini's convo was awesome...
Wow!!!Manik got best businessman of d yr...👏👏👏
Manan's understanding is amazing...
Nandini proposed 2 manik in4nt of evry1...😛😛😛
& manik's dumbstruck...
Manan's dance was superb...
Soha insulted nandini...
& is rewarded wid a slap by manik...
& is kicked out of the party...
Nandini wntd 2 die...but manik saved her...
Wow!!!Manik proposed nandini... & dat 2 in rain...
Wow!!!manan kissed...😳😳😳
Y is soha such a poha???😡😡😡
Totally luved both d updates...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
Edited by shaan... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee...amazinggg update
Manik ne rain mein confess kr diya...manan romance...lovd it...continue soon

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