#2:LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL-Jny frm MsMurthy 2 MrsMalhotra PromoCH19-PG141 - Page 84

it ur story dear.
i love u story the way u writing.
so don't change.
stey blessed keep smiling

Awesome update
Keep up the good work
Waiting for the next update

Hey
Awsm update...

Rakhi gifts were awsm in both the houses...
Specially in murty's ...
Abhi's gift... Was so awsm and the way he got was mind blowing...
And rishu's gift too was beautiful...
Wow...
Rakhi pe Valentine... Hehehe...
Arayaman's entry was do superb...
Loved it...
Continue soon...

Keep smiling
stay blessed

Awsm update nd cute too. .waiting 4 nxt

hey nice update All couples are together Pls update next one soon

Originally posted by: potterhead1234

Hello!!

I'm commenting for the first time on your work.

I must appreciate you for maintaining the pace of the story.

Your story is at the correct pace.

You are dealing and giving space to the topics and incidents as much as required.

You don't make your story seem boring also which should be appreciated.

Continue with this pace but not decrease it.Slow pace few times makes stories boring.

Now,coming to characterization.

You have showed the characters along with their strong and weak sides.But you never showed any character as weak.This should be noted about your work.

You keep on bringing new subplots which keep the interest in your work alive.I like this about your work.You never ponder over a simple thing and write an entire update about that.

This should be appreciated.

The topic on which you are writing i.e arranged marriage is not a new one.

There are and have been many stories on this topic in the forum.

But I find yours the best one after Ritika Di's 'Strangers to Soulmates' on this topic.

You are really bang on with your story.

I am not kidding when I say this.I really meant it .You never lost the flow with your plot.

Hope you take the criticism positively and keep on improving on your work.

You can write a wonderful ff.

ALL THE BEST😊😊

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: LUCKYRICKLY

Aapki story fast nai or slow bhi nai hai,
Manan romance ke bina manan nai lagta!! So chance he to toda romance bhi karwadeejiye
Shadi keliye toda time hai na? To is time PE o dono ek doosereko aur paas and keliye cutesa sweet SA moment hona chahiye
Aur aap only manan ke bareme hi nai ,story PE saara character ke imp de raheho
Is point muje acha laga
So as kuch mat socho, just aap ki style me likho OK na ji

Originally posted by: yajishtha16

whn will u update

Originally posted by: Istandformyself

Hey abha u going perfectly fine. Romance is thr as much as it is needed. For now trust,honesty, belief, understanding n making their rltns strong is wht needed for Manan apart from romance. N well though Manan is d highlight but fab4 navya n abhi r also imp characters. Pl include their part too.just don't rush to marriage. Dat my view. Bye

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Hi Dear Abha,

Recently Only i started reading dis story...

Story line s really awesum and u r penning it very well..

I am loving dis stry more n mre after reading each prt..

Coming to ur first question, whether it s fast or slow, in my view it is going perfectly..D plot s vry suprb...

Ab seedha wedding pe mat jao..

Manan ko unke courtship period enjoy krne do..

Make both more comfortable wid each other...

Den ur second question, whether need to add more manan romance or not..

As u say it s an arranged marriage..so thoda limit hona chahiye...

Romance abhi jjo bhi he usi tarah follow krna...

A small suggestion,if posible Include some incidents dat can increase their trust on each other and make dem more supportive to each other...

And ur third question whether any pblm in givin importance to Fab4 along vid navbhi..

Now also u r tring ur maximum to include othrs vid manan ..

No pblm dear..Bcz, Manan Fab4 aur Navbhi ke bina cmplete hi nhi he..

Infact i am sayin along vid manan if possible show more about cavya, dhruvlya and mukbhi's relations also...it will be really gud if we cn know abt dem along vid manan...

Dis s solely my POV. Hope u will take it as a positive way...

Do continue dear... Waitin 4 nxt prt...