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Hetal.D

@Hetal.D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#811

Hey abha u going perfectly fine. Romance is thr as much as it is needed. For now trust,honesty, belief, understanding n making their rltns strong is wht needed for Manan apart from romance. N well though Manan is d highlight but fab4 navya n abhi r also imp characters. Pl include their part too.just don't rush to marriage. Dat my view. Bye

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kavyach

@kavyach

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Posted: 9 years ago

#812

U r perfect...

Option 3 is fine for me...

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#813

No dear the story is going nicely...

update soon..

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sreesri

@sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#814

Amazing update..

Bro sis bond ws beautiful..

Manan as usual perfect..

Ur stryz perfect..no need 4 chnge..

Luvd it

Thnkz 4 d pm

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naziasiddiqui

@naziasiddiqui

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Posted: 9 years ago

#815

awsmmm
amazinggg
superbbb
fab update
loved it very much
too much funny scene specially mukti and abhi one
abhi is best brother
cont soon
THNX for pm

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#816

Amazing update

Full of affection and masti

Sumtym love kabhi hassi

Mixed emotins

Loved it

Update aoon

Take care

Ty for.pm

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#817

Originally posted by: absnads
Hi guys,

Sorry...Im not back with an update.. wanna some suggestions from you...

1)Am I going too slow with the story? U wanna me to make it fast and go straightaway to wedding n all?

2)U wanna me to include lot of Manan romance???

But trust me, jitna possible hai in this story i'm adding it... Cant add more as it will make the story awkward..bcoz in arranged marriage, before wedding romance will be limited...tats y...pls try to understand...

3)Is it OK for u guys as Im giving importance to FAB4,Abhi & Navya too along with Manan...

pls come up with your suggestions..I need ur suggestions on all the three points... I'll write the next update accordingly and will try to post it by tomorrow...
so pls jaldi se clear my confusions...as I need to start writing next...

Love u all,

Urs,
Abha..

Hi Dear Abha,

Recently Only i started reading dis story...

Story line s really awesum and u r penning it very well..

I am loving dis stry more n mre after reading each prt..

Coming to ur first question, whether it s fast or slow, in my view it is going perfectly..D plot s vry suprb...

Ab seedha wedding pe mat jao..

Manan ko unke courtship period enjoy krne do..

Make both more comfortable wid each other...

Den ur second question, whether need to add more manan romance or not..

As u say it s an arranged marriage..so thoda limit hona chahiye...

Romance abhi jjo bhi he usi tarah follow krna...

A small suggestion,if posible Include some incidents dat can increase their trust on each other and make dem more supportive to each other...

And ur third question whether any pblm in givin importance to Fab4 along vid navbhi..

Now also u r tring ur maximum to include othrs vid manan ..

No pblm dear..Bcz, Manan Fab4 aur Navbhi ke bina cmplete hi nhi he..

Infact i am sayin along vid manan if possible show more about cavya, dhruvlya and mukbhi's relations also...it will be really gud if we cn know abt dem along vid manan...

Dis s solely my POV. Hope u will take it as a positive way...

Do continue dear... Waitin 4 nxt prt...

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago