#2:LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL-Jny frm MsMurthy 2 MrsMalhotra PromoCH19-PG141

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#821

Amazing part. Nandani n aryaman story was funny

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

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Posted: 9 years ago

#822

The story is going perfectly..

No need to change anything

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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Dhingli44

@Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#823

That Manan part is as always amazing n needs no change.Bohot romance bhi thik nai hai..as far as arranged marriages are concerned.
But show them talking to each other more. They do...n for any normal person who reads it's just amazing.
But main normal nai hoon na 😆
Ignore Otherwise... 😊

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Boomchelesa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#824

Nice update..!!! Rakshabadhhan was Amazing..! Liked Aryamann entry..!

UPDARE SOON..!!
God bless u

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musicismylife

@musicismylife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#825

Dear the way you're proceeding with the story is perfect...
Without fab4 MaNan can't happen so giving them importance is a must...
Romance between MaNan is fine... and we can get our heavy dose after the wedding...
The sweet and slow pace in which the story is proceeding is its soul... I mean the story is the journey from Ms Murthy to Mrs Malhotra... so the courtship period is really important and you're showing it beautifully...
So just relax and continue with the way you've planned it...

Edited by musicismylife - 9 years ago