MANAN OS: HER WISH IS MY COMMAND...Updated pg 6...10/12

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

awesome OS di..
it was so cutee..

nandini's wish is manik's command..
loved the way you potrayed their relationship
nandini's reaction in ot was cutee...
every feeling of nandini was depicted very well👍🏼
manik teasing nandini and nandini's answer to him😳
loved it

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Wow very nice Nandinis antics were so adorable... Manik is cute when he smirk... Loved this OS

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Loved it
Nandini's cute antics
It was awsm
Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

OMG... update is soo soo cute.. totally loved it... nandini's bucket list. . or wish pr wish add kre.. hehehe.. poor manik. but finally .nandu apni bucket list puri kr rahi h... . n baby talk.. loved it... .. Awesome. . Amazing. .. Fabulous. . Fantastic. . super. . wonderful. mindblowing. . so over all. update was mindblowing. . nandu ki bate.. manan talk. wow so beautiful di... n lastly their talk.. abt baby.. hilarious. . A big hatts off. . love to the core. . vaise to I like it very very much... thanksss for this beautiful story. . more write likee this. we would love to read. . I hope now ur health is fyn.. take care.. Stay blessed Love Geet

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Hi dear it is so awesome os and wat a feeling to so birth of a baby it is so amazing feeling and nandu expressions were superb and write frequently different os u wrtting is just outstanding and u mentioned Dr.name first sunitha and last saritha iam mentioing this thing i read fully every word to word and u didnt pm me

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aishaph

@aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

It was beautiful
Nandu was so cute
Baby birth scene was magical
Love it

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Very very beautiful os dii...

Love each and every bit of it...

They way u describe na its beautiful...

Its always pleasure to read ur work dii...

simply amazing... beyond words...

Keep writing...

keep smiling always...

Stay blessed...

Loads of love...

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aahanaK

@aahanaK

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

marvellous os di

nandu n her out of world wishes

it was awesome

cant express in words

so sorry for chotu comment

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kavyach

@kavyach

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

It's so cute story like Nandini

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

OMG..!😃

It was freaking cute..!😳

Loved it..!❤️

Like pehly her bucket list hahaha..!😆

Manik ki frustration but eventually Manik babu maan he gya..!😉

Phr Manik knows his girl very well late night jaag rahi hehehehe..!😃

Then morning..! Time to fulfill Nandini's wish..!😊

Cutest scene was when she held the baby..!

Ok the tiniest baby of our family is my niece..! You know when i kiss her na i felt like m eating a sugar pot..! She tastes like strawberries so i can understand what must be Nandini's feelings..! When i first saw my niece na i was OMG she is so choto c..! And my Appa was like 20 days ka baby choto he hota hai hahaha...! Funny isn't it :P🤣

But seriously I loved it..! So cute it was..!

I think you must have felt the same na?😊 You have two cutie pies..! :)

Sorry for this crapy comment..! :P

You want long so i tried to make it long with my bak bak..! :)

LOts Of LOve..!

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago