MANAN OS: HER WISH IS MY COMMAND...Updated pg 6...10/12

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

This is soo soo cute!

The last part was definitely what Manik Malhotra wants though!

I loved it thank you

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shami810

@shami810

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Omggg... this was adorable

Aahaa my MaNan.. they are so so so cute

U have penned down each and every emotion very gracefully

Right from their nok jhok, their phone conversation to the conversation in car.. and MaNan together in OT everything was just beautifully written

I seriously have no words left to describe this work peice of urs... totally speechless

Please keep writing something this sort of

Stay blessed 😊

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Nandini and her crazy wishes... Haha 😆

It was awesome. ..

Loved it

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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JiyaRajput

@JiyaRajput

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

nice os it's totally unique wish and top of that manik fulfills it lovely os

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

amazing ..

so cute love it ...
u penned it superb...

keep writing..

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Wow its damm cute

Just love it

Nandini n her crazy ideas

Only manik can fulfil her wish

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

hey di...
wow sch a cute one shot...
realllyyy lvd it...
it ws awsm...
nandu is too cuten... hr this wish is so cute..
aww manik sch a sweethrt...
n hr expressions description ws awsm...
n atlast ...
manik bina naughty hue kha reh skta h...
heheh...
mr naughty malhotra...

reallly reallly lvd it...
it ws awsm...
bye ..
keep smiling...
loads of lv...
tc...
simran...

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

IT WAS SO HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL... I SWEAR I ALSO HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES... ARRE!! TEARS OF HAPPINESS AND JOY... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE WONDERFUL ONE-SHOT... LOVE YOU...