#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome yaar I am just in love your ff, keep it up and stop reading negative comments because there are many who will make you feel pathetic, because they themselves are insane no knowledge of how speak with anyone
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey fear.. plzx don't feel disheartened bout this comment of some of d jealous ppl.. they bash cauz they don't hv d ability 2 write... itte he agar himmat h toh 4 thread poore kar ke dekhaye... u r doing mind blowing job... we all luv u... luv ur writing... plz don't gve a damn bout those unwanted ppl...
n bout d update.. yeppiiee finally manik ko pta chl gya.. udseusse akal aa he gye... update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Finally manik realised his mistake
Waiting for the next update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
First I told u my experience towards devil.
And this message is for update.
It was amazing .
Finally manik is back. Infact majnu manik is back.
But dear after every update I feel why u finish here. Suspense kills me. 😆
How much u write but still it's not enough for us. So selfish people Na.
Will wait for next update.
Come back soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Update the next part sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik is getting shock after shock by getting the tryths..
but the biggest truth abt nandhu wen will he knw abt it nd his reaction so eagered to read it..
and about the bashers I will say that they r just jealous of ur writing. ..
continue soon dear...TC
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Posted: 9 years ago
Regarding the bashing...I want to tell you one thing dear...Nly those peoples bash who themselves are not capable of doing something extraordinary...dere insecureity,jealousy makes dem do so... So being a mature person I expect you to let go all the negativity. Your writing is one of ur talent which we adore so much and dats y u have so much followers.
Now coming to update u r asusual outstanding dear, m eagerly waiting when manik ll come to know about nandini's pregnancy complications..how he will react??nandini vl forgive him or not?? So many Suspence...update soon I vl be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love it
Love ur writing
Ignore the bashers. ...They don't have work
Continue soon
Next part...waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can I laugh ? She is sick the basher ofcourse.
I know India is free country and evwrybody has a right to express anything but hey girl I just want to ask you one thing ie writing about SEX in detail is NOT wrong. Yes it is a public forum and there are ppl below eighteen but then the Forum let's her write. If they have permitted it so why fuss?
And you are talking about ragging hormones? Umm tell me one thing, there are so f**king many stories on the forum that includes love making scenes (in detail), so are you trying to say that all of them are ragging high on hormones? Hahahaha xD

Criticism is good, for sure butbone must know a proper way to convey it. And surely you are unaware of it.

And the thing you said about ppl below 15 reading about sex...well sweety what about those books that sell in the market which are not meant to be read by these teens. But they do buy them and read. Right?
It is twenty first century for heaven's sake !
I was so amazed to read her comment ..umm not amazed actually disgusted would be the right word that I stopped mid way and end reading it.

No one's stopping you or bashing you about your 'criticism' but hey who are you to comment on someone's thoughts...and tag them as ragging hormones? Healthy criticism..have you heard about it? I guess NO.And if it disturbed you so much so why did you keep reading it. No one forced you to. So just please. And moreover I am not taking the author's side if you are going to think on those lines. I don't even know her except being a reader to her story. I replied because your comment made me gag and it was pathetic. Gawdd!


And no I am not against her or anything but just get your facts clear when you point on someone. No hate. Peace.




And about the update...thank god that douche has finally gotbhis brains back. Someone tell him how big of an arse he was tonhis own wife. Repenting huh? Keep doing it. You so need to man. And please don't freak out Mr. Manik Malhotra when you will come to know about Nandini's troubled pregnancy. Because it was you who unintentionally forced her to take that step. Douche pant. Hmph!




Sorry for ranting but I just couldn't help it.



-Annanya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: apps33

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Woohhooo Awesome update dear
Loved it

Rise and Shine baby

I loved the surprise

And i hope Ms Samajh sevika got a lesson
Now she would think twice before messing with people like us...

Anyways chuck it
no more talking about useless people
Not worth our precious time...😉

So let's come to tge update...

Pehle toh.
M angry with you

Wapas se manan face off miss kiya...

Huh...

But chal koi nai

Am happy anyways

Cause waise bhi...

I know it's not easy to give updates in such short notice😉

But you made it baby... So proud of you...
You go girl...

So Manik finally realized what big mistake he has done...

He sure has screwed it up a big time

And about that dhruv mess...

I knew it would be something like this

That idiot moron Malhotra
He misunderstood her and torched her for this
Aggh... M so bad at him...

I hope he finds out the entire truth soon...

Nandu should not forgive him so easily

He should pay for his deeds...

And
The most
Important thing

Itte badiya lines lati kahan se ho yaar...

Awesome
Like totally

Loved it
Cont soon...

Loads of love...

-Appu...😉


It was a gift fr you Darling and yeah uska koi reply nh aya bhg gyi doom dba ke anyways chod mene socha tha teeno update krungi par do hi kr payi no worry tesri ek do din me krte h or manan face off bhot ayenge aage

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