#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

Ohk fourth thread god i am so happy now mann its damm awesome thing i completed thread three in just mere 5 chappy wow i must say it feels so good and moreover this time i have nothing to say
Seriously nothing !

This i won't ask what scene you like the most
But i wanted to ask you one question why you love devils bride
What you found in this concept

Now talk about this thread
Next update will be there in present update
One last update to go after than whole devils mystery will come in front everyone
Just one chappy to go
Or yes this thread is also a bit dark as i told u about this but i will try to finish this dark zone asap
Well again thank you guys for this amazing response and love



thread3
part36
part 37
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part39

part40


part41
Link of thread 5
Thread 5

congratulations dear for new thread...
and waiting for the update

Congratulations on a new thread!

I really like devil's bride because

Sorry forgot to congratulate for new thread. Many many congrates for this brand new thread.

First of all
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A big congratulations. .
for new thread



well deserving. .



n ab agar ye btane baitthu..
why I luv devil's bride..

I actually have no words..

bss mujhe out of the limit pasand h..


iski story line.


how to present a beautiful story. .
n specially ur writing skills.

u r soo beautiful n awesome writer. ..

u know first time mene randomly ye story open ki.

phir also me khud bhi nhi janti.

kab me uski addicted ho gyi...

all Thanks to u..


I hope ye dark zone bhi jldi over hoga..
but seriously I also love ur dark zone writing. .

romantic scenes were fab...

n comedy soo super fun.

soo all in one.



a big thumbs up.

u deserve thiss. ..


lotsss of luv to u. .


Love Geet

I love this story so much. It's my most favourite story. There are many reasons.
manik is like a real davil who is lost in darkness and wants to keep a star in his hand. To lighten up his life.
He is monster. He does everything at extreme level. Either it's hate or love.
I love story line and suspense. Every chapter left extreme emotions behind , some time it's rumantic, hatred , shocked, suspens , fun , laugh, tears , lust, love , trust , betrayed , jealousy , helplessness, hope, fears , their weaknesses , scary dark nights, beautiful mornings.
I found every imotion in this story.
Ur manik character is dark cruel but I never hate him just bcz of ur writing style. Even in his worse behaviour u made him beyond limit atractive monster.
Ur nandni character is so innocent, soft hearted, loveable, hot, shy, strongest girl, have power to change a cruel monster into hurt majnu monster. She is love.
I just lovvveee ur story beyond limits.
Keep it up.
Sweetoo Congratulations for new thread. 😊

Congrats for the new thread

Congratulations for the thread !!
And there are several reasons to love devil
The depth if emotions that u potrayed of each
And every character is spellbound
The array of emotions that I feel while I read it
Makes it feel so real and the scene seems like its happening virtually
The perfect combination of humor and darkness is another
Reason to live it
Who told action speaks louder than words in devil I have
Seen contrary of this saying happen!!!! Love it
Pls pm me next u update!!