#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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Sabahfatima14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

Finally manik came to knw the truth...ab nanadu ki jaan bhi bach jaye bas...n manik ko forgive kar de..

Sweety i srsly love ur work...dont give adamn to the bashers...there is nothing wrong in writing about sex in detail...n there many other ff which describe it...so plz..stop all that nonsence...n if u have a bloody problem then dont read...but u cant talk about others character like this u have no rights...

We love u dear...n are always with u...continue the amamzig work...

Love u...

Stay happy

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Rita_gurung43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

It was awesome update I don't know whether Nadhini forgive or not I'm so worried

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neeharika__

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Ill just say one thing that i lyk d ksot

Abt u that u dnt give a dam to such ppl

N yar agar nahi pasan snt read bt poitnting

Om someones charester is pathetic

Slf respect pe ni jana chaea

Coz jb slf respect pe baat ati to dekho aisi taisi kr denge

Nw update chalo sabar ka fal meetha hota h manik ko

Sach atlast pata chal gaya bt i guess

Manik ke liye ye fal meetha ni hoga

Ek to nandu ki complicated pregnency upr se dis revelasion

Dam excited

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urvxshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

amazing update dear..you are a great writer..

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shonkhonil

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

heyyy...1st...awsssmmm..update...
2nd...plzzz...update.. soon...preety plzzz 😳

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

Awesome. .

Finally like finaly he is aware of misunderstanding. .

Had it been possible to write with costly metals (like gold and silver)on forum i wish this chapter to be written in silver

dnt get me wrong coz golden is saved for manan reunion. .lol

But still one secret is left

nandu k complications. .

I hope he does his job well i.e asking for forgiveness. .

Anyways continue soon. .

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paradise..fall

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

yipee itni jaldii update...wow...wht a surprise...

Update wad midblowing...superrb...
Manik came to knw evry thng...

Now the big qus is wud nandu forgive him
Dont knw

And sbout bashers
Seriously the grl have no se.se..it feels bash whn u bash by someone..

Dont be sad ashna. We all are with u.u r a amazing writer...
Devils bride
Is vry close to my heart
I love the stry frm
Bottom of my
Heart..

If anyone dont like the stories pls dont read..stay away..

Update was superrb
Waiting for
Manan
Faceoff..

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Apoorva Rath

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Just Wow Awesome Amazing Loved the surprise Plz deti rehna aise surprise Hehehe Finally Manik realized his mistake !!! M so happy ... Updt soon !!!! Eagerly waiting for the next chappy !!!!! N yeah happy new year Keep Writing