#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 102

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Posted: 9 years ago
Suprb update...love ur writing...with u always...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go. You write so well. How you described each and every emotion is really not an easy task to do. Loved it
Keep smiling and continue soon
Will be waiting for your next update. Take care :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome FF
Post the Part Super Soon
Do PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey plz update plz plz waiting very very eagerly plz update plz plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik's pov

"Manik please don't take my baby away manik please "i heard her murmuring something in her sleep.

"Nandini"i called her but no response.

"Manik please don't no i won't be able to live don't don't take it "she said i could see The jolt of fear and terror she felt. I kept my hand on her face.

"Nandini what happened utho kya hua "she jerked my hands away from her i got scared.

"Nandini utho kuch nh hua wake up "i tried every possible way to calm her down but it didn't worked.

"Manik don't please "she again shouted
Dread begin to wash over me, a cold sweat started to form on me. I closed my eyes my mind went blank.

She started shivering my body went numb when she woke up with the sudden jerk while shouting my name. sweat was all over on her face.

"What happened to you are you ok "i asked while cupping her face.

"Manik i saw i survived i survived manik me zinda thi but you took ...you took my baby away from me you took it please don't take please "she blurted out whatever was inside her. It made me confuse.

I survived me zinda thi "her words echoed in my ears what does she meant by this ? Still something is hidden from me.

Ohk many of you said i don't give promos so here you go god i know how much you all are going to crib after reading this promo ohk so tell me you update will be there on sunday happy now i hope u like the promo. Ohk i know its kinda rubbing salt on your wounds fine i will update soon. I wanna ask you something i got pms regarding that letter scene my some readers want it back well i don't repeat my scenes but i can if you all want how many of you want the letter scene back.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow interesting promo
Pls manik ko jaldi we complications ke bare me pata chal jaye
And yes I want the letter scene again
Aur shayad wo letter manik padh me and he would be able to get to know about nandini

And u r too bad yaar itna wait nahi hota itni suspense wali story me
And pls update the stranger story also na pls pls pls
Edited by sadiya51 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.



aaj promo aaya.


hureee.
m soo happy..

but I wish manik ko jaldi pata chale...



n I also want letter

scene again..



Will wait for next update eagerly impatiently. .

update soon yr..




Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome promo...eagerly waiting for your update...pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice updt plz plz updt soon plz plz pretty

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