#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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riyana7

@riyana7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1001

1st of all sorry dear I had got your pm the very day u posted but couldn't read as I was very busy with my newborn niece 😃 so I forgot to read all the stories
..Today I got a chance to read & tysm for pm...

Back to the story

Rulayi gi kya pagli 😭 Manik ne nandu ko pain diya now he deserves it..But the was he apologized to her it was commendable pinned down...well done ashna 👍🏼 Manik ka to hogaya now nandini... Pls make her forgive him & pls we want Manan scene. pls so quickly cut this sad sequences..
Awesome part
Do enjoy in your cousin's marriage
Update the next part soon...

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mona

@cmamona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1002

Hey
Nice update
So much of events happened...
Yet manik was so deeply stuck with his insecurities that he never ever realise what was he doing

Nandani was right at dat that don't hurt me to the extent where u can't heal me...

And happy realisation to Mr malhotra...
And hospital Wala idea was just awsm...
Nice guesture to say sry
1st step is taken...
Waiting for the reaction...

Update soon

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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Ash1117

@Ash1117

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1003

Hey i m new n read ur ff now n its awesome i loved it n best part is it has a new story than others so its awesomee

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1004

awesome update. ...
loved it to the core. ...
maniks realisation was good. ..
The way he reminiscing past was just blissful. ...
I feel pity for him, but still he deserve punishment. ..
I wonder what will happen when manik will know about nandini's pregnancy. ...
The way he seek apology was heart touching. ..
A single sorry can be so beautiful. ..
waiting for nandini's reaction. ..
continue soon. .
stay blessed nd take care. ..

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ssweta

@ssweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1005

hello...

sry for the late reply...😊

bt update is awesome...😊...

apology of manik just...awesome..😃...

but now i am despretly waiting for the next update...

and lastly mast update...loved it...👏.

but ab jaldise next update karna...we r waiting...😭

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riyasharma1112

@riyasharma1112

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1006

This was such an awesome update loved it to the core.. Waiting for nandini's reaction.. Update soon..

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Mouni Rao

@M_R3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1007

Wow What An Update Superb!! The Flashback Made Me Cry All The Old Memories ❤️ Manik Self Talks & The Way He Apologized In Front Of Every One It Need Guts To Do This. His Apology Was Writen Very Well. Its Good He Not Only Apologized But He Mean It Too & Wants To Prove Wants To Regain Her Trust Her Love And Will Put Efforts For That. Now I'm Really Very Excited To Know Nandini's Reaction & What Efforts Will Manik Put. Loved The Update!!

Stay Blessed

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littlesnow

@littlesnow

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1008

It was nice chappie...
Your hard work is reflecting in update...
I had already told you n here once again you penned every angle of emotion n that to very effectively...