#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#991

Thank God finaaalllyyy update milllaaa

plzzz add less Pov n add more Actions

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#992

Thank God finaaalllyyy update milllaaa

plzzz add less Pov n add more Actions

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#993

sorry for commenting late dear😳
thanks for pm
update was amazing👏
manik finally realised his mistakes...
flashback scenes were awesome
they were too adorable
but it took soo much time for dumb malhotra to understand his love😉
whatever...now he has got the guts to accept his mistake and apologize to her in front of whole world
loved his way of apologizing
he wants to earn forgiveness
mr.malhotra ku bahut papad belne padhinge
waiting eagerly for nandini's reaction
but still manik didn't knew about nandini's complications in pregnancy
hope he gets to everything before it's too late

loved the update very much...

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aishaa16

@aishaa16

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#994

like finally u updated

it was an awesome update

update soon

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#995

Ohhhk.. There is nothing to criticize about.. Seriously.. In fact I really loved this chapter.. U can guess y.. Coz .. Coz.. There is only manik's POV here..only manik's realisation.. Nandini ki reaction toh baki hai.,, am gonna hate next chapter..lol..
I know as a matter of fact, he should ask for forgiveness ,rather beg for forgiveness.. Yes..and nandini shouldn't forgive.. I agree.. But I have a request dear.. Pls don't drag this Maafi Maangna section.. I mean to say ki, v knw nandini will not forgv him so easily, in fact manik too doesn't want nandini to forgive him easily.. Then y dragging this section.. And yaar, there is lot more to cum na, lyk wen he will cum to know abt her pregnancy issues.. ,,God ,there will be more maafi maagna section.. So pls don't drag..its a request.. Am really exctd abt the healing process,, seriously.. Jab se u said na there will be a healing process than this accusing or shouting or fighting or smthng.,am really exctd.. Coz both needs healing..
And abt manik' realisation, I really loved it.. Coz he took a big step.. I mn, this is not so lyk The manik malhotra. This proves ki he undrstd his mistakes n he is guilty.. He apologized in front of everyone. He admitted his mistakes. Which is really good. I also know ki there is long way to go.. But pls don't drag

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anjali

@purswani50

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#996

WOW WHAT A SUPER AWESOME UPDATE...
puri manan ki journey dikha di happy se leke sad days tak...
Manik ka confession was so emotional n truly from heart... nandini k reaction ka wait h ...
Finally ko realize hui apni mistake... his impulsive behavior 😡 .. sab Uski vajase se kharab ho gya... huh He is an big time IDIOT...
Vaise to he is equally hurt by d separation but Nandu ko use itna jaldi forgive nhi krna chahiye...
I know aap Itna jaldi manik ko Chodoge... so I totally trust u plz make manik suffer...

Thanks for d super Fabulous n Fantastic n Emotional update...
U r really, truly A SUPERB WRITER...
now enough of my Bakwas...
Thanks for d pm...
N Sry for d late comment...

Stay happy 😛

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kavyach

@kavyach

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Posted: 9 years ago

#997

Awesome update...

Manik's pov is very well explained...

Truly truly perfect feelings...

Happy realization Manik...

Nandini should not forgive Manik soon ..

Manik also should find out d complications of Nandini's pregnancy...

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Summie04

@Summie04

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#998

Amazing aashnu baby u always make me stunned by ua update u ssly manage to write so well well well dis part was like finally ssly manik realized n I ssly don wann nandu to forgive him so easily let him suffer dis time n also dea sry again exam pressure sure longer 1 after xam