#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 14

wow hot update
super duper fantastic and marvelous update

u said he is devil but he is so caring n protective for her.

Lucky couple 😉

tom nd jerry fight
jealuosy

oh my god .
i hve no words to describe.. ist their fight ..
then party ...
and romance

it was so beautful ...

and long haan ... thankx ..
amazing. plz update next part soon

Sexy sultry seductive beautiful update

Manik was losing himself looking at Nandu all hot and sexy all he want to hold her and kiss her like every second and jealous manik was too awesome what a punch as no one can touch his Nandu and after all the realization he kissed her madly deeply insanely and the wild intense and passionate love making moments

He was not that drunk that he dint realise what he was doing so how can he blame her for taking advantage of his condition and call her names poor soul only bearing coz she loves him and their baby

Continue soon and thanks for pm

nice update...but ab age kya hoga re baa baa?

That was really awesome... No vulgarity... BT at th same time too hot... I m still feeling so shy... U r just amazing... Waiting eagerly for th next part... 😳 😛

such an intense,steamy,hot,romantic update dear...but trust me it doesn't sound any vulgar through out the update...manik really make nandini feel that she is the most beautiful girl on earth...this was the first love making episode I ever read which contains so much of passion but without vulgarity...hats off to U gal...and the humourous writer in U is back...i liked the convo between manik and lil devil...loved jelousy manik...waiting for next morning in ur next update...

Originally posted by: HTA111

Sexy sultry seductive beautiful update

Manik was losing himself looking at Nandu all hot and sexy all he want to hold her and kiss her like every second and jealous manik was too awesome what a punch as no one can touch his Nandu and after all the realization he kissed her madly deeply insanely and the wild intense and passionate love making moments

He was not that drunk that he dint realise what he was doing so how can he blame her for taking advantage of his condition and call her names poor soul only bearing coz she loves him and their baby

Continue soon and thanks for pm

i will soon open the mystery than you will came to know what was the reason of all behind this well glad u like that hot and passionate update

It was so hot,intense and passionate...
Manik love her so much then what happened between them that he said all that to her...
Update soon...

Originally posted by: abhutani0311

This was HAWT! Seriously...mujhe toh padh ke he kuch ho raha tha how you managed to write i dont know :P continue soon and thanks for the PM!

kya kya ho rha tha muje bhi bta do wese i can write more than this but i didnt want to make this part like po*n so yhi khtm kar dia or about my feeling i cnt tell you secret hai