#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..!! super hottt romantic..wonderful update...u just nailed it girl.. 😊
probably the best make out update i have ever read..it was nt at all vulgar... it is so beautifully written...
matlab kaise.. like how u always write this much brilliantly...
u are an all rounder in writing..whether it may be humour, romantic..or dark intense scene...
first of all..the conversation of manik n his lil devil was awesome...how much spell bound he was after lukng at his gorgeous wife..
den jealous drunk manik was a treat to read.. omg he literally dragged her out of the party...he is very possessive of her...
make out was super hott...the sweet little things he was saying to her were jus too gud... 😳
wt i love the most is the way u describe their each n every emotion n feelings... 😊
aur kya bolu...jitna bhi bolu it wud be less...loved the update very much...


take care..!
keep smiling..!
stay blessed..! n thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wohooo such an amazing beautiful hot lovely romantic update. I really loved it dear. It was mesmerizing update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..

it was hot, romantic, stemy & passionate update.

just killer update. ..
n trust me it doesn't sound any vulgar. ..
but itss looking so pure...n trust me its just amazing. .
I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. ..
Thanks for this update
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Thanks for pm too. ..

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Love Geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved it so much...
they are finally one...that was the most blissful experience of their lives...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pure bliss.
This wad beautiful..
Finally Manan.
Loved it.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hmmm !!!
I can just say it was reallyyy hottt 😳
They both were in their best phase of their life.
Finally Manik comlpeted her with is love.
Sizzling, hot romance, u did justice to ur update.
Thks for the PM Aashna.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
Wow...their romance was super hawwwt
You r truly an amazing writer
I loved it when she said you are my last..awesome
Tqvm for the pm dear
Love you so much!!!!!
Take care and always keep smiling:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg! Wat a update I can't imagine it was brilliant I feel shy when I was reading this part but nyways it was dammmnnn awesome 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Loved the way u described it... 😆
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooo so hot n passionate love
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