#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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devilkhushi

@devilkhushi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

It was ultimate romance I loved it manik love nandini so much then why are they falling Apart

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: sri_valli

such an intense,steamy,hot,romantic update dear...but trust me it doesn't sound any vulgar through out the update...manik really make nandini feel that she is the most beautiful girl on earth...this was the first love making episode I ever read which contains so much of passion but without vulgarity...hats off to U gal...and the humourous writer in U is back...i liked the convo between manik and lil devil...loved jelousy manik...waiting for next morning in ur next update...

i am glad that it doesnt sounds vulgur i was afraid like did i explain it too much
well glad u like it and thank you so much for your complement

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abcxyz24

@abcxyz24

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Awesome story...

The chapter is beautifully written...

I have become your fan...

Waiting for another chapter...

Plz update soon...😛

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

awww...beautiful <333

update soon...BTW I love the length of your updates !

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MahimaSankhla

@MahimaSankhla

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

OMG!!!!! It was hot, passionate, intense n wat not...but not vulgar... B'fuly penned dwn thr POV's... Loved it... U r making us crave for more n more...plsss update soon :))

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Wow awesome...

Thr was a mixture of love...passion...madness...want...

Desires...everything...

But dear it was not vulgur...

It was soo wow...

Manik talks during make was wow...

No one can beat jealous manik...

Luved it...

Pls pm me if possible...

Update soon...

Edited by Pari_mananholic - 10 years ago

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ashi1995

@ashi1995

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Hats off... U nailed it... This was super awesome and hot... But it showed the enormity of love between them continue soon

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

romantic update ...manan love each other ...true love stories never dies

made for each other

ty for pm

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51083alishashah

@51083alishashah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

I seriously don't know what to say after this hot n steamy update 😳 😳 😳...well i will come to the party scenes 😉...i always like to see jealous n possessive manik...he just can't see anyone around nandu...now i m despirately waiting for next chapter...i hope u will update soon n thanks for pm