#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Seriously!
Dude what was that?
It was just amazingly fantastic, I mean mindblowing.
You are superb dear, continue soon.

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Iqra

@Iqra1309

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

OMG this was soo hot, sizling,sexy,intence,passionate, and what not ❤️

Am still feeling the hottness 😳😉

Loved the update...👏👏👏

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megha94kumari

@megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

wow... this is dam hottt... now m early y he said those cheap words to her... what hppend between them.. plz update soon... n thankx for d pm dear

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anglechotti

@anglechotti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

This was the most hot or the hottest update till the date dear...

U just nailed it this update and the both manik and nandinis povs u written those veryyy veryyy amazingly u know I m like watching this not reading...

U r such an amazing writer dear and believe me its nt at all vulgar this is the most passionate and firey update...

Nw toh I m so excited to know what will be there reaction in morning..

Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update Please continue asap...

Love you a lottt for this amazing update dear...

Keep smiling and rocking as always...

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

This was freaking hot and passionate update!
don't know what to say
it didn't looked like vulgar!
wrote all moments beautifully

Edited by sheetalky2 - 9 years ago

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Not vulgar at all.

This was beautiful.

Thanks for the update.

😊

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neetimehta

@neetimehta

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

U r amazing

there was cute fighting tom nd jerry romance then jelouse and possediveness then sensuality romance all over and aafter that the completeness of eachother

all were in one update

u r awesome with each emotion

u always makes me amaze by ur writings i never can get over on ur writing

thanx for pm