manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 9

Originally posted by: sws2

Nice updates.

Liking ur story.

😊

awesome update...

loved it so much...

maybe nandu will spill the beans now...

tell the reasons bout hating stars and her relations with cabir...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Nice update dea. ...

Awesome update jab sabko pata chalega ki nandu cabir ki sis hai.
Update soon

awsome ..

whts the suspense ...
wht thy r hiding from fab4 ..

cont soon..

I read all your parts today it was awesome manan confession jaldi plz aur emotional encounter waiting

PART 7 (A)

I HATE U STARS'

This is the thing she was writing continuously

Manik put hand on her shoulder. Nandini thought it was cabir

N: bhai I am fine don't worry

But the voice she heard made her shocked and she immediately turned around

M: wht??bhai??

Nandini just stood up

N: woh I thought it was...

She was stammering with words. Manik then made her sit down and kept his hand on her and spoke to her lovingly

M: nandu kya hua?? Thumko stars se kitna nafrat kyu hey??

Nandini didn't expect this question and kept looking in to his eyes which were looking towards her with utmost love and asking to share her pain.

M: nandu u can share anything with me anything means anything

Nandini felt happy listening to his words and decided to share it with him

N: I was only 5 years only when my own brother rishab died that too because of this stars

She said between her sobs and manik was shocked but kept on listening to her

N: our family went for a picnic and rishab stood under a tree while playing hide and seek and same at that time only one white light came from the sky like falling stars and fell on the tree and it caught the fire immediately and rishab too died in that accident

Now nandini tears were not stopping while manik kept rubbing her back.

N: it was all because of me if I didn't ask rishab to play he wouldn't hide behind the tree and died..its all because of me

Manik now decided to speak and to cool her

M: nandu job hi bachpan mey hua issmey thumari koi jhalti nahi hey and aur rishab ki baat hey toh hey kismet hey hum kuch nahi karsakthi hey issmey

Manik said all these words looking deep into her eyes and wiping her tears. Nandini felt relaxed after listening to him. She immediately hugged him and manik was shocked initially but he too hugged her. Both found solace in each other arms. After some time nandini realized her reaction and she broke the hug. She was at guilt and manik understood that and to change her mind he diverted the topic

M: waise nandu thum toh bhai bolatha na???who is it??

N: woh kya hey na when ever mey esa behave karthihu tab only my bro can make me calm

M: thumko ko kitna bhai hey??

N: rishab ki alava only one

M: who is he??

N: my mom's sister son

M: hoo what is his name??

Nandini gets shock and to stop him from asking more questions she thought of a plan

N: thume meri family history chahiye hey kya?? and CID join karna hey kya??...aur vaisebhi thumko appreciation dena padega

M: kyu???

N: voh isiliye kyu kit hum mujhe cool kiya na...iss situation mey u r the second person to cool me and only my bhai can do that

M: toh I am also special na and for this I need reward

N: kya chahiye????

M: your beautiful smile which is very precious

After listening to him she smiled whole heartedly and seeing her smiling manik too smiled to the fullest.

M: milgaya reward and this is my nandu who always smiles and make others to smile

N: acha manik mujhe thumse ek baat puchna hey she said in a serious tone

M: pucho

Nandini thought of asking about MukBhi but stopped thinking that first she should get conformed. Her thoughts were stopped by manik who shook her by shoulders.

N: haa...kuch nahi manik time aane per batavunga...and mujhe neendh arahihey so I am going...good nt

M: haa good night

Nandini stood up to leave but manik holds her hand and stopped her. Nandini turned and saw towards him.

N: kya hua manik??

M: r u fine na??

Nandini smiled to his question and bent down and kissed his forehead and smilingly spoke

N: I am fine

Manik stood up and kissed on her temple and looked into her eyes as if reading her emotions.

N: manik I need to go

Manik smiled and left her hand. Nandini left from there and manik kept looking at her till she disappears

M: kitna pain chupake rakha hey vuske andhar mey mujhe vusko sambalna padega

He said with a determined voice and left to sleep.

finally done with the update

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prathyusha

Originally posted by: Waghalekar

I read all your parts today it was awesome manan confession jaldi plz aur emotional encounter waiting

Nice update...liked the emotional talk...

superb update ..

love it ...

thr emotional talk manan find thr solace in each other .
so mesmerizing

cont soon ..
stay bless .