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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Lovely update...manan conversation is good

thanks a lot for ur words
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks a ton for ur support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Hey..I think manik is dreaming about nandini

u were right
and u can read the full story on the update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Read last 4 parts in a go

It was just beautiful
Amazing lying described
Thanks for all those pms
Continue soon
Take care

Love you
Ekta

thank u ekta
to say frankly i was waiting for ur reply
and i read ur magical love its superb
its too good
amazing keep going dear
will read todays chapter and comment on it
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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 7 (B)

It was morning 8:00 and manik is still sleeping. All are ready and waiting for him near the breakfast table. Seeing him no where around cabir was dying due to hunger

C: hey manik ab nahi aya na toh mey vusse maar dunga and mey vuski grave pey bait kar kana kavunga

Mu: stop it cabir and don't say such words her voice was anger

N: stop it cabir y r u talking like this

C: sry mukti but mey karu kitna bhook lagrahihey mujhe na mey ee sari nasta kalunga and nandini plz stop defending him now atleast dekho how much time he is sleeping

Mu: anyone go and wake him up na

An idea came in cabir mind immediately

C: nandini y cant u wake him up???

N: wht????

Mu: haa yehi theek hoga

Nandini initially opposed but all insisted her to go. So finally she agreed to go.

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After nandini left from the table

Mu: yaar cabir superb plan yaar iski vajeshe toh vo dono ek dusreki kareeb ayega

C: u don't need to thank me mukti

A: seriously cabir thum na bhilkul nandini ki jaise kiya

C: wht???kya kiya nandini ne??

D: she planned nearly the same way when she bought me and alya together

C: hooo...toh iska matlab hey I am her junior naa

All laughed to his words

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Nandini entered manik room and what she saw made her stand still and just admire him. Manik was sleeping hugging a pillow and covering his face with a blanket to save his face from sun rays. She went near him

N: soothe vakth kitna cute lagatha hey

She started to stare him and didn't want to wake him up but the situation is demanding her to do it. She sat beside him and started to ruffle his hair. He smiled when she touched him. Nandini smiled seeing him smiling and the next step he did made her shocked. He kept his head in her lap and started to adjust his head more comfortably in her lap. She was feeling ticklish but just sat there smiling. Manik thought it was a dream and started to murmur and to listen to him carefully nandini bent a little and he said

M: nandini thum roj esa hona mujhe thumari baho mey sona hey roj and when I woke I want to see ur face first

Nandini smiled with his words and just cant able to control herself more she bent down and kissed his forehead. Manik again smiled but now opened his eyes and he was shocked to see her infront of him.


M: agar yeh sach hotha toh kitna acha hotha na

Nandini smiled at his innocence and spoke while ruffling his hairs

N: manik yeh sab sach hey ab toh uto na

M: nahi yeh sach nahi hey

he behaved like a kid. nandini was all time smiling seeing his behaviour.

N: dekho i am here and its true

manik was shocked to listen to this words from nandini

Manik was so shocked and sat straight immediately and touched her cheek to check whether it was real or not.

M: thum sach mey yeha hu

N: hogaya thumari checking ab vutogi yeh nahi

M: haa...just give me 5 I will come

N: I will wait near the table come fast

M: kk I will

Nandini left from there and manik entered the washroom all the way smiling.

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Nandini came back to table from manik room. Seeing her face expressions cabir started to pull her leg

C: nandini thum itna late kyu aya...vusko vuthane gaya aur vusko...kissi aur kaam karne gaya tha hey kya??

Nandini started to blush and all smiled seeing her reaction and abhi came to her rescue

Ab: stop it cabir thum na humesha kyu isko tease karta hey

C: agaya nandu ki MV

Mean while manik too came

C: thank god thu agaya warna thumari breakfast bhi mene khane vala tha

M: so funny cabir thum mujhe vuthana chahihey na??

C: arey mene toh nandu ko begatha na thume vuthane ko

Manik just smiled but inside his heart he said a thousand thanks to cabir and settled down to have breakfast

M: thum nandu ko beja mujhe vuthane keliye isiliye I am leaving u

C: do u think I am scared of u

M: haa if I punch u tightly then u will be afraid

C: haa abhi vohi baki hey na

M: haa

He started to move his hand forward while in this process his hand touched nandini hand who was sitting between them. They both were starring at each other.

C: guys thum dono ko site nahi hey kya??

M: kya

He spoke leaving her hand.

C: ese dono ki eyes ko dekogi toh site toh ayega na

All smiled and while nandini was blushing and manik rolled his eyes and after having breakfast with lots of fun all decided to practice and left for the jam room which was specially created for them in the mansion.

updated finally

thought of updating yesterday but i slept

and attended my cousin marriage

so @ruchi116 thank u for ur suggestion

loved it

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prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
friends i need ur help
can u tell me how to upload photos
i am not understanding
and manan confession and in
the upcoming photos there were many photos to be uploaded
so plz need ur help
love
prathyusha
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Posted: 9 years ago
I dont know but the.update was awesome too good waiting for.manan confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous chapter
Dream come true
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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update...

loved it so much...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update manik KO believe hi nhi ho RHA tha k nandu hai ur story is awesome dear
Update the next part soon n long one

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