manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB)

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hi frnds i am prathyusha i am a big fan of manan so socha y cant write a story on them
and i hope i will make up to the mark
and its my first time writing it



PROLOGUE:

Location: SPACE ACADEMY
the popular band of mumbai is Fab 5 and they are more than a family. They are sitting in canteen and chit chatting when they heard a announcement abt the party to be held in clz. Then cabir said to the lead singer of band i.e. Manik
C: ab tho bolde ki u love her
M: kya? thu kya bolrahehey mey kaise bolo vusko
A: manik isme dout kya hey. bcoz of her only today i am so happy na
M: yes alya ur case is different than mine
MU: bhai plz bolo na vusko
M: acha theek i will say to her but i should first find out her feelings for me
and they discussed on various topics and two girls entered the canteen and manik instantly looked towards the girls and he immediately started to blush and this is noticed by cabir and he spoke
C: kya yaar u wont say anything but u will keep starring towards her
manik just rolled his eyes.
the girls who entered the canteen are discussing on various topics and finally they came to discuss about fab5
Girl1: when r u going to say to him abt ur feelings
Girl2: wht ? i am not going to say u know na how will i say that to him
and wht if he says no i will loose the frndship also with him. so let it be here only.
i should do something to get them together thought girl 1



now who is the girl manik loves and who are those two girls
so here it is
tell me how it is and i should continue or not



INDEX
character sketch-- page 2
part 1 ------ page 2
part 2--------page 3
part 3 (A)-------------page 5
part 3 (B)--------------page 7
part 4 (A) &(B)-----------page 9
part 5 (A)-------------------page 11
part 5 (B). 6(A),6 (B)----------------page 12
part 7 (A)----------------------------page 14
part 7 (B)-------------------------page 17
part 8 (A)--------------------------page 22
part 8(B) & 8(C)-------------------page 27
part 9 A----------------------------page 32
part 9 B----------------------------page 36
part 10 A--------------------------page 41
part 10 B-------------------------page 45
part 11 A-------------------------page 49
part 11 B------------------------page 55
part 12 A------------------------page 61
part 12 B-----------------------page 66
part 13 A-----------------------page 71
part 13 B-----------------------page 75
part 14 A----------------------page 80
part 14 B----------------------page 89
part 15 A----------------------page 98
part 15 B----------------------page 107
part 16 A---------------------page 111

CHAPTER 16 B


CONFESSION PART

part 17 B-----------------------------------------page 139



THREAD 2


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear Congo for story
It seems too interesting
Manan love each other but they don't want to lose friendship

Continue soon
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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intrsrtng concept..
do continue it..
wud love to read more..
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Awesome story both love each other I think manik n nandu love each other waiting for their confession n manans romance
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing concept
Manik nandini ek dusre ko pyar krta hai pr confess krme se drte hai...lovd it
Continue soon
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Do update soon ...
Amazing 👏
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CHARACTER SKETCH:

MANIK MALHOTRA: A young arrogant and handsome guy. The lead singer of the famous group Fab 5.He is in deep love with Nandini but didn't want to lose her friendship so he had decided not to tell her till their studies are completed.

NANDINI MURTHY: A cute girl and famous for her attitude and helping nature in SPACE. She is sister of cabir but it is not known to anyone except navya. She is madly in love with manik but cant able to express to him.

NAVYA NAVELI: she is best friend of Nandini and she is in secret relationship with cabir from 3 months but decided to disclose it till manan are together.

CABIR DHAWAN: He is the drummer of fab 5 and in relation with navya. He is helping manik to disclose his feelings to his sister.

ALYA SAXENA: She is the hot girl of SPACE. She is in relationship with Dhruv. She along with mukti tries to find the feelings of Nandini.

MUKTI MALHOTRA: She is the sister of manik and loves him a lot and will always be side of him. She has feelings for abhi and can't accept it as he is Dhruv brother.

DHRUV THAKKAR: He is the guitarist of fab 5 and in love with Alya. He is so cute and shy guy. He loves her sister a lot.

ABHIMANYU THAKKAR: He is a group member of NH 3 along with Navya and Nandini. He spreads happiness where he is. In fact he is also called male version of Nandini. He loves mukti.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice cs
Now can't wait to read next part pls update the next part soon
Waiting to know how everyone will react after knowing nandu is cabirs sister n how manan gonna confess their love
So pls update soon
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thank u guys for the support so here is the update


Part 1:

Location: Malhotra mansion

It was morning 8 AM and every one are in their own work but two heads are still sleeping and not in a mood to getup so their mother, neyonika came to wake them. She entered manik bedroom and site infront of her was mesmerizing and she saw manik sleeping on his stomach and hiding his face with pillow to hide from the sunrays.

Neyonika loves both manik and mukti very much and can do anything for them. She knows about his feelings towards Nandini and often helps him in this matter. Even manik father, raj knows about this matter and they are ready to accept Nandini in always.

She went sat beside him and caressed his hair and he smiled and kept his head immediately in her lap. She with so much love spoke

Ne: Manik beta please wake up na

M: Mom please let me sleep na just for 15 mins

Saying this he started to dig his face in her lap and neyonika smiled seeing his son's innonence and cute face. Seeing him no mood to wake up she thought of a plan and came near his ears and started to speak

Ne: manik see Nandini has come to see u early in the morning

On listening this manik immediately woke up and started to rub his eyes and searched for her and then he spoke with a cute baby face

M: mom where is she?? I cant see her.

Neyonika immediately smiled seeing his son reaction and this made manik understand her prank

M: mom what is this y u did this ??

Ne: its simple to wake u up

Now manik was irritated due to early morning teasing and he immediately got up and went to get fresh and leave for college. Neyonika went to wake her daughter.

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Nandini being punctual girl is all ready to go for her college but her main interest is to meet her love of life i.e. manik and took blessings from her chachi and chacha and after talking to her mom and dad who stays in London and started to leave for her college.

Nandini's parents ( shilpa and viren ) are very co operative to her and loves their one and only daughter very much. They are business partners with Malhotra's in their London branch and manik and Nandini both don't know this fact. they don't know about Nandini feelings towards manik.

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Manik and mukti after having breakfast left for the college in their car. Manik was fully engrossed in his thoughts and this is noticed by mukti

Mu: kya hua bhai???? Kya soch rahi hey??

M: mukku mey yeh soch rahihu ki kyu humesha mey Nandini ki sath hi stuck ho jatahu?

Mu: matlab??

M: mukku we got an album chance but we have do it along with NH3 and Nandini is the lead singer of the group and mey uski sath hi kaam karna padega na

Mu: but bhai u should be happy na and this is done by destiny

M: hmmm

And they reached the clz and went to canteen to meet their frnds

CANTEEN:

Fab 5 is busy in their conversation when they heard a boy saying about Nh3 entry so they look at the entrance of the canteen and manik is completely concentrating on nandini and nandini felt his intense gaze on her and started to blush and then cabir starts the prank

C: looks like someone is not in this world

All look at manik and started to laugh while manik just rolled his eyes. this is noticed by Nandini and she sends a message to cabir in their CaVNi group

N: bhai meri manik ko thang mat karna

C: ladoo maine kya kiya manik ko and abhi realise hi hua hey propose tho abhi baki hey and now abhi meri manik haaa

N: bhai with an fake angry look

Na: mollu plz stop it na

C: wht is dis meri behen and gf both are supporting him and not him and tollu what is this ????

Navya calls cabir as mollu and cabir calls navya as tollu and Nandini as ladoo.

When they are talking manik started to pull cabir leg.

M: cabir thum humesha phone pe chatting kartaye kya chakar hey??? Kya thumne ek ladki se pyaar tho nahi kiya na????

Cabir gets shocked immediately and see here and there and NavNi smiles seeing him and to change the topic cabir gets an idea

C: thu mujhpe jhassusi karke time waste mat karo, think abt ur love

And with that cabir goes to NavNi and asks them to join them and they agreed happily

Mu: where is abhi???

N: he is on the way

And by now abhi enters and says hi to all and sees mukti and asks

Ab: looks like someone is missing me

Mu: so funny if u come then lets discuss for the song to perform

Ab: kkk what about romantic one

All agreed and then thinking about lyrics of the song. And they left for the practice

Precap: manan convo on love

That's it I hope its up to the mark

Plz say how is it by ur comments and say whether I should continue or not.

Love

prathyusha

Edited by prathyushaeluri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Damn interesting ..!
Pls update soon
Loved it

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