manan FF linked by destiny part 17 B/pg 139 (23 FEB) - Page 8

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abt whom navya was talking ..
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Nice update waiting for their confession

PART 5 (B)

Next morning all met directly in the jam room, except navya and Nandini.

M: yeh dono soul sisters ko kya hua???dono nahi aya??

Mu: bhai thumko dhono ki barimey information chahihey aur sirf Nandini ki barimey haa???

M: mukku stop it na...navya bhi humari sath practice kartha hey na

Mu: haa thume yaad hey navya bhi humari saath perform karthaye???

M: stop it na...abhi do u have any information???

Ab: nahi manik they didn't say anything to me

Now cabir enters to the jam room.

C: thum sab ke liye surprise hey!!! He shouted

M: cabir mujhe abhi mood nahi hey thumari surprise ke liye

C: kya hua???

Mu: bhai is missing Nandini

C: arey I am also saying about them only na

M: do u know where is she???

C: off course I do

M: tho batav kaha hey??

C: nahi...first get ur luggage for 6 days and come to clz at evening 5 they will meet u at that time

M: kyu???

C: mey ney kaha na no questions any more

With that cabir left from there, leaving angry and curious manik behind.

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Cabir reaches his home and goes to Nandini room and navya is also present there with her luggage

C: I said to every one they will come there and u both leave now

Na: thanks cabir

C: hey mollu thum thanks kyu bolrahihey...its my duty to protect my friends and u

N: aur mujhe nahi?? With a sad pout

Cabir kissed on her cheeks

C: meri ladoo ki bena mey jehi nahi sakthey toh obviously thum tho mey protect karunga na

Nandini smiled and hugged cabir. After some time they pulled navya too and trio hugged.

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Navya and Nandini started to leave from there. But cabir is really worried because of that person who called navya.

C: mollu plz be carefull till I come

Na: haa tollu we will be carefull

N: haa bhai thum koi tension mat lo

They left from there after giving a hug to cabir. Cabir left for clz to pick his friends and leave from there to navya and Nandini.

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Cabir reached clz and found all waiting for him.

M: cabir where is nandini??

C: they have already left

M: where??

C: where we r going

A: cabir say fastly no suspense yaar

C: suspense ki bena life me maja nahi hotey alya baby

They all settled in car after understanding is waste to argue with him. They started to move to their destination.

Part 6 (A)

Its 8 in the evening and the whole gang came to their destination. All stepped down and were surprised to see a big mansion.

M: cabir y r we here?

C: to make music

M: wht nonsense and say where is nandini first?

C: thum vusko dekhne ke bina ek din bhi nahi rehsakti kya??

M: nahi tujhe kya problem hey??

C: off course mujhe nahi toh kisko hogi woh tho behen hu na meri

He murmured slowly which was unheard to everyone

M: thune kuch kaha??

C: nahi...andhar chale nandini se nahi milna hey kya??

M: haa chalo...

All entered inside and found nandini and navya sitting and talking to each other. Nandini was laughing her heart out and manik was just seeing her smiling.

C: andhar chalega ya nahi??

M: haa kyu nahi

They entered inside the house. Seeing them both NavNi stood up to welcome and before any one can speak nandini took the charge

N: I know u want answers to many questions, so plz get freshen up and u will get ur answers during your dinner

All agreed and went to get fresh. Cabir and NavNi was left in the hall

C: thum dono theek ho na??

Na: haa tollu ek dum theek hey

C: koi nahi aya na?

N: bhai kuch nahi hua hey so just relax and go get fresh

Cabir too left

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It was 9.30 and all gathered for dinner.

M: guys my phone is not working??

A: haa manik mera bhi

Mu: bhai mera bhi

M: what?? Sab ki phone karab hey ??

C: its because iss mansion mey koi phone kaam nahi kartey

M: wht???but y??

C: who isiliye kyu ki...yeha jammers hey

M: cabir thumko kya lagthaye thum hum sabko beena kuch bole yaha lekar aaye aur ab toh phone bhi nahi kya hua sab theek hey na??

C: haa baba sab theek hey

M: toh hey sab kya hey??

Cabir looked at nandini by sensing manik anger. He knows only nandini words can cool him. Nandini came to rescue her brother

N: woh isiliye kyu ki hum ko practice karne keliya zyada time milegi and don't feel humne sab ki parents sey permission le liya hey ki u wont contact them for a week

M: sirf isiliye na kuch aur nahi na?? his voice is softened now

N: kuch aur reason nahi hey manik

A: koi bhi reason ho hum sab saath mey spend karnekeliye time milegi naa

Ab: u r right we can get closer to each other more

Abhi said these lines looking towards mukti who listened to his words and seeing his gaze on her started to blush while abhi just smiled. This was observed by nandini. Nandini thought to her that there is something between these two she should find it. All finished dinner and went to sleep.

PART 6 (B)

Cabir and manik shared a room.

M: cabir sab sachem theek hey na??

C: haa sab theek hey...kyu puch rahi hu???

M: thumne esa kabhi nahi kiya na isiliye puch rahihey

C: haa baba kuch nahi hua hey...mey abhi aatihu

Cabir came out and went towards to NavNi room

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Druv and abhi are in a room

D: bhai can I ask u something

Ab: thu kabse formal hone laga pucho na

D: will mom and dad agree for my marriage with alya??

Ab: wht??? Y r u asking that

D: no its just ki alya is very modern and completely opposite to me na and u know mom na she doesn't like such ultra modern girls

Ab: beta druv thu yeh bulgaya ki mom ko achi ladki chahiye...aur alya se achi ladki thume nahi milsakti samjhi

Druv smiled and hugged abhi.

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MukLya are enjoying in their room. When someone knocks their door and mukti opens it and finds druv

Mu: I think ab yeha meri zarurat hey...so I am leaving

D: nahi mukti ruko na

Mu: just shut up okk and byeee

Mukti leaves from their giving love birds a good time

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Cabir reaches NavNi room and enters the room without knocking

N: bhai wht is this u should enter the room after knocking na??

C: ladoo yeha koi aur nahi hey na its u and my gf only

Na: so kya hua tollu u should have manners na

C: yeah I have a lot of manners want to see them???

He started to approach near her and navya shook her head in no.

N: bhai I am also here so plz stop these adult films infront of me

C: just stop it ladoo

N: wht u can tease me but not me haa??

C: acha chodo

Nandini excused herself from there giving the beautiful couple their alone time.

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Manik was searching for cabir in the balcony when his eyes fell on nandini who was sitting on a chair in the balcony. He went near her and found her crying and writing something on a paper. He was shocked to see nandini in that condition and more over at this odd time. He stood back of her and saw what she was writing. He was shocked to the core after reading what she wrote. It was

"I HATE U STARS"

i am really sorry guys for the late updates

but what can i do that college has stucked me with lots of work

seminars, conferences,records assignments and what not really these 2 weeks were really hectic

and i promise to update the next part very soon

and plz forgive me for this

next part will be full of manan emotional encounter and do comments and say your views

love

prathyusha

Nice updates.

awesome update...

loved it so much...

maybe nandu will spill the beans now...

tell the reasons bout hating stars and her relations with cabir...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Awesome
Amazing update
Cabir sbko kiss se protct kr rha hai aur kisne call kiya navya ko...lovd it
Continue soon

Originally posted by: cutypie04

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