Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
The update was super enjoyed it alot
This cabir and his ideas the way nandu nd cabir played with abhi nd interupted his romance just loved it
Entry of arayaman gud manik is being jealous how can cabir miss this chance this is gonna be fun
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Awesome update...
Luved it...
Make him more and more jealous...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ha ha super update.
Manik deftly deserve this.
And from ur last line am sure there is much more on the way.
Waiting eagerly for ur next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
oooh..new entry and manik is already jealous..love it... can't wait to see how this all gets him to admit his feelings...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
CHAPTER 13
(In my story,nyonika loves manik and his frnds,especially nandini,but being a working woman,she cud not give enoigh time to manik which eventually led to manik believing that his parents do not love him)
Pricipal and nyonika were already on the stage when fab5&gand entered
Princi:ok,ok now,every one settledown plz,over there,the grt fab5,plz settle down so that we cud procede,thanq so much,alritw students,as we all know that it has been a month since our new academic year has started and yet u have not been given ur freshers party,since our trusty was out and acc to the rules,such parties cannot be thrown in absence of the teusty,so now our trusty will tell u about the upcoming activites
Nyo:gud mor students,i wud like apologise since bcoz of my absence u all cud not have ur freshers party,well as most of us know,every year on 1 sept we celebrate our founders day amd thia year we will complete our 10 glorious years,provided SPACE. Has once again been judged as the best music&arts college of india,so to celebrate these two occasions we have decided to organise a musical fest,the musicana,in which bands ftom our college will participate,provided every band shud have a lead male and female singer,after this the top four bands will perform a solo,the leaders,be itmale or female are suppose to participate in it,after this we may procede for our freshers party,which,this year ia being organised as a prom,i hope this cud compensate for the delay,and yes,the bands interested to participate must give their names by tmrw,thanq everyone
Nyinika's announcement excited evryone but tensed fab5 who now had to find a new female lead singer
JAM ROOM
Mu:shit yaar,ab kahan se laye yeh female lead ham
C:achha dont worry,koi toh mil hi jayegi
S:guys,i know u all r tensed,isiliye i have decided that i will become ur female lead
Fab4:WHAT!!
C:soha iss..
S:no need to thank me cabir,u all r my frnds,tum sab ke liye main yeh toh kar hi sakti hoon
M:um..um...guys,i think soha is rite,ussi ko bana dete hain lead
D:r u even in ur senses buddy,i have a better option,nano
M:what,nano,woh gaati bhi hai,i didnt know,but buddy,hamne usse kabhi gaate huye nai suna hai,icant trust her,nai soha is perfwct
Al:but ma..
C:haan,ok,badia,soha is done
S:thanz cabir,chalo manik lets go,we r getting late fkr our class and soha dragged manik out,not wanting to risk cabirs decidion
Mu:tu pagal ho gaya hai,yeh kya kiya
C:wahi kiya jiski zaroorat tgi
Al:mtlb
C:mtlb yeh ki ab ek naya grp banega,jiske lead singers honge,nano aur aryamann
D:what,cabir tu yeh kya bolra hai,kuchh bhi
Mu:nai dhruv,samajh gai,manik is jealous of aryamann,aur nano ko uske saath dekh ke,i hope u understand
Al:ohh,nice,chalo agar haar bhi gaye toh bura nai lagega,in fact aur achha lagega
C:but pehle we need to convince nano,aur yeh ham kal karenge taki nano ke paas na bolne ka chara hi na ho,and yes inform abhi and navya about this,they r gonna be her band member
Al:grt
The college came to an end,the whole day manik was with soha but his mind was with nandini who was givinv aryamann an all over trip,seeing his frnds ignoring him,started bothering,he now wanted to spend time with them and hence asked them to join him at his house,cabir saw this as the best way of troubling manik and agreed provided soha was not there,manik had no choice but to agree with cabir
MANIKS HOUSE
everyone was watching the avengers,as recomanded by manik,since no one was interested in giving a suggestion,they no longer felt any enthusiasm in spending time withanik,they haf become pronw to his absence,where manik was teying to watch the movie everyone was busy chit chatting,finally manik gave up and proposed to just talk,even then he cud not understand most of the talks since they only talked about their recent hangout,of which mabik was not a part of
C:bahut mazze aaye thhey yaar
N:haan yaar
Nav:waise maze toh aaj subhe bhi aaye thhey,indicating at the prank,with this everyone got into fits of laughter leaving a fuming mukti and abhi
Abhi:kya maze aaye thhey,huh!!sara romance kharab kar diya mer
M:ausa bhi kya gua tha
Mu:kya hua tha??and mukti explained manik everything,eveb manik was laughing on this but somewhere in his mind a voice said
WE USED TO DO THIS TOGETHER,ME CABIR AND NANDU,AUR AB,INHE MERI ZAROIRAT BHI MAI HAI,AISA BHI KYA HO GAYA ISS EK MAHINE MEIN KI NOW M NOMORE A PART OF THEM,if only manik cud understand,this was the yeild of the his very own sowed seeds
Muk:waise prank se yaad aaya,aaj kya mast timing pe giri na nano aryamann ke upar,ek dum filmy style mein
Muktis comment made manik tigjten his jaw and vlench his hand into a fist
Nav:waise hai toh bahut hot,i mean manik ke baad ek wohi hotty hai pure college mein
Though cabir knew all this was being done deliberately,yet heafing navya calling aryamann hot diaturbed him
C:what do u mean,m not hot
N:arre mere cabir,dont u knkw,we r the hottest,u know,m sexy and i know it and with this cabir and nandini started dancing on party rock anthem
Mu:waise main kya sochri thi,u both make a grt couple huh!!
M:what,kya bolri hai mukti,r u out of ur mind,he is just a classmate
Mu:haan toh aise hi toh luv storiws start hoti hain
M:mtlb
Mu:ohho manik,tujhe bhi na sab ecplain kafna hita hai,chal aliya isse explain karre
With this both of them stud up and in a cheezy melodramatic voice said
Al:pehle milti hai nazre
Mu:fir hota ha ikrar
Al:fir
Mu:fir
Nav:fir
N:fir parta hai chamat,just shut up and sit down,ais kuchh ai hai ok
Both aliya and mukti made a grumpy face,when andinis phone ramg
N:unknown no?yes,who is this
Ar:hi,its aryamann nandini
N:oh aryamann hi,on listening afyamanns voice evrryone started making different noises and hoothing,much to the despai of manik and nandini,afraid that he mite hearvtheir comment nandini excused herself
MANIKS POV
arymann ka phone,woh bhibiss samay,hadd hoti ai,aur yeh bahar jaake baat karne ki kya zaroorat thi
finding th perfect time aliya spoke
al:guys i think we shud patch both od them up
m:ehat??,no
mu:what do u mean by no
M:i mean aise kaise kisi ke saath bhi tum nandini ka patch up karwa doge
Abhi:mabik darr mat,aryamann achha ladka hai
M:parr patch up karwana hi kgi hai
D:buddy all of us r in a relationship,even nano deserves to be in one
M:but cabir toh nai hai
C:haan..hhh...aan toh maine pfan liya hai na ki nano ke relationship mein aane ke baad hi main bhi relationship mein aonga,akhir ek bade bhai ka farz jo ada karna hai
M:what!!!!
Mu:the main point is,nano and aryamann
M:no
Nav:what no we r not listening to u
Abhi:haan
D:yes
C:of course
Mu:so mission naman on
M:naman???
Al:haan,na from nandini and man fron aryamann,naman
n:what,kya hua
M:luk na...
Al:arrs kuchh nai,wase kyu phone kiya tha usne
N:oh woh usse ku hh notes chabiye thhey,bechara itna sorry bolra tha,cute guy
Abhi:cute huh
Fab4&gang:awweee,wooohhhooo,ooohhhooo
N:shut up guys,and they shifyed on to some other topic,but manik was stuck on one point,hiw to stop his friends no no enemies from pat hing both aryamann and nandu
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Nice update enjoying it very much
Soha female lead of fab5 oh God ab kya hoga
Wat manik is thnkg his frnds avoiding him but wat abutvhim he spends that much time with soha that he doesn't hav time fr his frnds nw
Cabir has always his plans to take things in his way the whole gang is amazing just love thm
They r wakng up the jealous in manik up by taking abut patchng up nandini nd arayaman
Watng fr nxt
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
I enjoyed the update a lot...
And the prank was sooo damn funny.. still I can't get over that prank.. I'm thinking on doing this on someone... the way u described the prank... it broke me into uncontrollable laughter..
Waiting for such more incidents..

Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Very Good!! Manik ko na aur tadpana chahiye for what he did. He left his friends for that soha. He could totally not find anytime for them in past 1 whole month. Nd d result is now he is feeling odd one out even though he is with his friends. He has no idea whats going on in their lives nd thus he deserves these tortures.
Nd ab nandu nd arya nd abhi nd navya will make one hell of a band. And nandu will prove dat she is d best singer nd soha wud be put in her rightful place.
I love your story. Whatever u hv written uptill now is superb. Waiting 4 d next update. Cheers!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
love this... it seems she is not in on the plan so lets see what happens, looking forward to jealous manik... and loved how he felt left out...hope he realizes things soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved the group scenes...dont want soha to be a part of FAB5...
hope nandu and aryaman win the musicana to prove to manik and everyone that nandu is a better singer than soha...
jealous manik was hilarious to watch...
keep up the good work and continue soon...

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