Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Nice update
Nano is so determinant fr herself tday I like her confidence the way her frnds support her
Manik was just blowed by lunkg at her
Cabir is right manik shud know how wrng he is nd to wat extend hhe had hurt her
Continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
It was an amazing update...nandini carried herslf pretty well.
Now let's wat will be soha's reaction..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
awesum update
continue this look of nandu and plz plz bring some guy who is close frnd of her...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Omg... that was something... read whole updates in a go...
Really amazing it is...
I want to see soha's reaction on seeing nandini...
And plz cont soon... and pm me of possible.. when u update...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
ok hi i dnt knw how i landed up on this story but as i started reading it really attracted me allot it feels like its a real story now its like coz i also look like bad and ugly well thats wht i think but i dnt hve a sis like soha n a frnd like manik but i still belive ki i have an ugly face n no one can like me so yaa its like relating to my life not completly bbut yaa some wht so i just wanna tell u it is sooo grt n nyc story after sunsaathiya i have loved this story it is really affecting me aloot so pls update soon n b it in a long n vry long update desperatly waiting for this sach mai wht a grt job n a thoughtful story u had piined itg very well coz its like a real kinda story not a lovely dovely or like that i hope u continue it for soo long as i really wanna c wht actually happens it might help me to grow to so yaa n pls can u pm me whenever u update the next chp n ya coming to todays update it was nyc but small :(((((((( i want manik not to realize it soon coz i really wanna c soha n all the fiscoo n nandu emotional plus confident towards herself i want manik n sohas relationship for somewht long i knw i m sounding stupid but i m like i wanna c like how manik relize it when soha is nt able to understamd n do like as nandini always do n yaa somehwt like that but i knw its a stupid idea as u r a writer u must b knowing wht to write so yaa that all sorry for the long comment but i loved this story i hope it continous n lets c how it goes btw if possible pls reply n pm me whenevr u update its a request!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Nice update. Now I want nano to maintain the distance between manik. Every one in the gang shld maintain the distance. Manik should realise his mistake and bring out the true face of soha. Waiting to see soha reaction on seeing this new nano.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
awesome update...
loved nandu's clothes...they suit her really well...
glad manik got his senses back...he doesn't deserve nandu if he is being with her only for her looks...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Chotu tha but acha tha
Cont Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
CHAPTER 11

As soon as everyone walked out mukti spoke
Mu:maine apni zindagi mein kabhi manik ki aisi shakal nai dekhi,and with this everyone burst into fita of laughter
D:sach,buddy ne toh kabhi aisi tab bhi nai banai jab ham sabne class 11 pass kardi thi,he was too shocked
Abhi:but on a seriois note,nano,really,believe me,maine kabhi nai socha tha ki tum itni hot bhi dikh sakti ho,i mean i knew ki tumhare new avatar se manik ke hosh ud jayenge,bit i cud have never even imagined ki tumhare iss new luk se ham bhi shock ho jayenge
N:tysm abhi,but the credit goes to aliya,mukti for the dresses and navya for the specs
C:aur hame kaun thanq bolega,asked cabir who just joined them
Muk:tumhe kis liye thanq???
C:ACHHA,itni jaldi bhul bhi gai,short term memory loss
Al:what do u mean cabir
C:this cud not have been possible agar main aur abhi ne kal nano ko bhaagne na diya hota
N:point
Aliya & mukti:haan haan ,thanq
Abhi:yeh hui na baat
C:achha chalo ab itna ehsaanmand hone ki zaroorat nai hai i know m awesome
N:cabir,be serious plz,woh dono mazak nai karri hain
C:achha mazak nai karri hai,ruk,mazak toh abhi main karta hoon,with cabir ran behind nano who trying hard not to fall down,nano was luking behind and runing when she bumped into soha
S:what the...kya,dikhai nai deta,aise kya bhaagri ho tum,ho kaun??
C:hi soha
S:hi,guys,yeh kaun hai??
Muk:soha tumne isse nai pehchana?
S:how wud i recognize her,i dont even know her,soha's comment made everyone giggle whichw as irritating
S:what????aisa kya hasro ho
Al:nothing,come i will intro u to her,soha meet her,she is nandinj vashishth,popularly known as nano,and nano this is soha khurrana,come on now shake hands,with this once again everyone started laughing whereas soha went out of her senses
SOHAS POV
yeh,yeh nano hai,parr yeh kaise ho sakta hai,yeh itni,itni hot kaise dikh sakti hai,i need to do something,main apni repitation aise nai ja sakti,i need to convince nano not to wear this,aur yeh toh mere liye ek min ka kaam hai,bass ek word and voila,my work will be done
Nav:soha,kahan kho gai,r u even in ur senses,asked navya luking at the small grin that had appeared on sohas face
C:senses hote toh baat hi kya thi,whispered cabir,which was audible enough to soha
S:kya kaha tumne
C:nai bass yehi ki kya hua soha,tumhati tabiyat toh theek haina,dekho tumhara chehra kitna flushed nazar arra hai
N:kya,soha tum theek ho na,asked nano concerned about soha
S:main toh theek hoon,but ir seems tumhari tabiyat kharab ho gai hai,yeh kya pehna hua hai,i mean itne chhote kapde,nano whats wrong with u,and u know na these cloths doesnt suite u,tum pw toh wahi kapde achhe lagte hain,purane wale
Abhi:ulta chor kotwal ko daatein,abhi's comment made everyone laugh
s:what do u mean huh,kehna kya chahte ho,said soha coming in front of abhi ctossing her hands over her chest
m:woh yeh kehna chahta hai ki doosron ko bolne se pehle khid ko dekhlena chahiye,mukti said this coming in between abhi and soha
S:excuse me,mtlb kya hai
al:waise soha tum itni stupid dokhti toh nai
S:how dare u,main manik se...
C:manik ki dhamki hame mat dena soha,ham uske dost hain,college ke doosre students nai hain ki jo college ke trusty ke betein ki gf se darr jayein,tumse pehle se usse jaantein hain
Nav:and yeah,a suggession for ur peanut sized brain,pehle apne kapde theek karo fir nano ko bolna,indicating at the dress that soha was wearing which seemed to have trying its best to at lwast reach her mjd thighs
A:aur haan,jab tak kuchh bolne ko kaha na jaye tab tak apna muh nai kholna chahiye
S:u m gonna...
D:behave urself soha,dont u dare say anyhing to aliya or any if my frnds,with this dhruv covered aliya
S:nano,what r u luking at me,say something
N:its quarter past 10 soha
S:what??,so!!!!!!
N:ur late for ur kuchi ku moments with manik,he must be waiting for u,u shud leave
S:but na...
n:leave soha
This was it for soha,her planned flopped,but with this,she also understood that she can no linger control nandinis life,the only way left now was to gather the remaining parts of her brutally murdered respect,a crime committed by no one else but her sis and her frnds and control manik rather than nandini
Soha without any other word left,giving a deadly stare to all of them
Abhi:thanx cupcake,for saving my life from this soha,said abhi intenly luking at mukti and pulling her close
Al:thanz to u too,my muffin said aliya hugging shruv
On the other side cabir,navya and nandini were staring them as if they just saw some extinct species right in front of them
C:muffin???
N:cupcake???
Nav:r u guys serious???
Abhi,muk,aliya,dhruv:WHAT!!!!!!
C: i.need.to puke
N:m joining u
Nav:i will also join,with this all three of them went away to give the couples some time with each other and to get over the cheezy lines which they just heard
CANTEEN
C:Waise aaj agar manik ka reaction priceless tha then soha ka reaction kya tha woh main describe nai kar sakta,i mean it was 10,no no100 times better than manik's,with this cabit stuffed another momo into his mouth
n:shut up cabir,she ia my sister
C:nano,u need to understand ki not everyone in this world loves u,alrite,there r some ppl close to u whi will always be jaelous of u,and soha is that one peraon in ur life
N:haan haan theek hai,achha only momo is left and m not feeling like eating so finish it
With this both cabir and navya held their hands out to garb the momo when their hands touched and they luked at each other,both of then were lost in each others eyes,none wanting to withdraw,and nandinis eyes as usuall caught their six hundered and fifty seventh eyelock,she was now pronw to this and as usuall she faked a cough to bring them back to senses
N:ahem ahem,ho gaya,jhak liya ek doosre ki ankhon mein,aaj kota complete ab jaldi se yeh finish karo coz we need to bring those four love birds out of their lovey dovey moments
nanos comment left both cabir and navya red,navyas blush was not something surprised nano,but to watch cabir blushing was a seen she always loved and therefore never left a single moment of doing this
Cabir was going to grab the momo when he noticed navya and signalled her to have it
Cabirs action brought nandinis eyes out of the her sockets,she was luking at cabir with wide eyes,in the last two years of knowing cabir,and as the fab5 tales suggests,a foody like cabir can never leave something tk eat for someone else,as soon as cabir noticed nandinis face he understood what she was thinking and without giving her a chance to speak gave her a stern luk,leaving nano with an angry pout and navya in confusion
C:chalein??
N:haan haan chalo na maine kab roka hai,and with this all three of them left to conquest their unquenchable quest of disturbing the romantic moments of their best frnds and enjoying their grumpy and pouty faces
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
wow nice update
i like nandhini & that bitch confrontation
continue like this
like confident nandhini
plz make manik feel d worst like how it will feel if our close ones leave us in the time we need them most
And plz in english dr

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