Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy dear I read ur story today in one go and I must say that its an amazingly different story...
And the story is getting really veryyy muchhh intresting day by day...
Please please please continue soon Can't wait further for next update...
Love you a lottt for this amazing story And believe me I really wanted to read next part asap...
Keep smiling and rocking as always...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
mbar's dream sequence of nandu and aryaman was hilarious...
soha is just degrading nandu all the way...hope she loses the competition...the face of should be between nandu and soha and nandu can finally show to everyone that she is the better one...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aweeersssooommmeee
It is very very very very very very very very very very nice
Till now I was a silent reader but after this I can't stop myself from commenting and pleased give very long updates😊
Edited by 212121 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE

I just saw and realized that my 13 chapter shud actually be the 14 chapter,i by mistake have two chapters as chapter 7,my next chapter no update will be chapter 15 instead of 14,plz dont get confused,plz and m really sorry for my careless attitude
CHAPTER 15

manik was roaming around and thinking about how to stop aryamann and nandini from going out and practicing together
m:shit!!!kuchh samajh kyu nai arra hai,GOD,do something
manik was getting restless,with every passing second he felt a turmoil increasing inside him,he was thinking hard when an idea struck him
AFTER FREE PERIOD
c:yeh manik kahan hai soha?
s:idk,m calling him since last period,woh bolke ke gaya tha ki kuchh kaam hai thodi der mein aa jayega but woh kbhi aaya hi nai
d:what do u mean aaya nai,kahan jarra hai kuchh toh bataya hoga
s:dhruv maine kaha na kuchh nai bataya usne
mu:ok dont worry,aa jayega
al:woh dekho aa gaya
just then manik came there,he had a small smirk on his face which of course did not go unnoticed by cabir
CABIRS POV
yeh iske chehre pe aise expressions kyu hai,yeh pakka kuchh karke aaya hai,chal cabir pata laga kya kiya hai manik baba ne iss baar
c:kahan tha tu
m:main kahin nai bass kuchh kaam tha
al:what work manik,soha told us u have been gone since the last period?
s:yes baby,where were u,i was so worried,mera phone bhi nai uthaya tumne
m:haan,woh mujhe nyonika se kaam tha
c:kya kaam tha nyonika se manik
m:arre tha kuchh,chalo lets go we r getting late for class,aur yeh hamare NA4 kahan hain?
al:woh aru aur nano ka free period tha toh abhi aur navya bhi saath mein milke practice karre hain
CABIRS POV
manik,aur class,ab toh pakka yeh koi jhol karke aaya hai
s:chalo guys,lets go
m:haan haan lets go
COLLEGE GETS OVER
everyone meets in the parking area,maniks small grin was increasing with every passing second and so did cabirs suspicion,he was sure that manik was upto something but wasnt able to find till then
just then aryamann and nandini came
ar:ok guys then we will leave ok
n:bye guys
fab5&gang:bye
ar:oh freak!!yeh kya hua,tyre punture kaise huya
FLASHBACK
m:kya karoon,just then manik saw aryamann's car and an idea came in his mind
m:jab car hi nai hogi toh jayenge kaise and he smirked
he went to the sick bay,from there he stole a needle,he then came back to aryamanns car and punctured all the tyres
m:happy practice my dear aryamann
FLASHBACK OVER
aryamanns comment gave a hint to cabir but then there was every possibility of one tyre getting punctured so he kept quiet
abhi:what,wait let me check,yeh kise ho sakta hai,charo tyres punctured
and that was it for cabirs ultra fast mind to get all the pices of the puzzle
CABIRS POV
oh toh yeh tha manik baba ka zaroori kaam,tabhi itni der lagai isne aane mein,but my dear manik,tu shayad bhul gaya ki abhi tera loving CABIRA is stilla live jo teri zindagi haram karre bina chaen se ni reh sakta,ab dekh main kya karta hoon
c:oh,chalo koi baat nai,dhruv,tu apni bike aryamann ko dede,tu hamare saath aajana,hame toh waise bhi kisi ke ghar pe jana hai,yeh log chale jayenge,aur fir aryamann baad mein teri bike wapas kar dega,and then cabir winked at dhruv who got the plan and sid
d:haan yeh sahi hoga,tum log meri bike le jao and he handed them the keys
m:lekin bud...
c:ok chalo chalo jaldi,warna late ho jayega bye,go go and cabir pushed aryaman and nandini away on the bike not givng manik any chance to speak
MANIKS POV
SHIT!!!yeh cabir ko toh main...sara plan flop kar diya,god,ab kya karoon main
c:chalo guys,i think hame girls ke apartement mein jana chaiye
d:haan,buddy ne abhi tak dekha bhi nai na,lets go
APARTMENT
everyone was enjoying but manik was trying ways to obstruct nandinis and aryamanns practices
m:uh,,guys,mujhe ek imp call karni hai main 2 min mei aata hoon
manik was roaming to and fro thinking of a way to stop their practice,finging no way out he randomly called nandini
ARYAMANNS PLACE
ar:ok,so now like this put your finger on the G chord,yeah great,aryamann was giving nandini classes with an extra guitar,just then nandinis phone rang
n:oh m sorry its manik,ek min,yeah manik
m:kahan ho?
n:manik aryamann ke yaha,bataya toh tha
m:umm..a..haan,kya karri ho
n:manik main na beech sarak kharre hoke disco deewane pe naach rahi hoon
m:what!!
n:maniki guitar seekhne aai hoon toh guitar hi seekhri hongi na,phone kyu kiya
m:woh aisi hi haal chal puchhne ke liye
n:what,bye
m:arre but,phone caat diya fir call karta hoon
n:sorry lts continue
ar:so..RING RING RING!!
n:sorry,ek min,manik kya hai
m:woh main uchhra tha,ki...ki
n:ki what??
m:ki..time kya hua hai?
n:huh!!
m:haan,nai,haan matlab meri ghari kharab ho gai so time kya hua hai
n:raat ke 12 bajre hain,kush noe bye
n:m sorry,wait main phone hi switch off karr deti hoon
m:fir kaat diya,dobara call karta hoon
aapke dwara dial kiya gaya no switch off,kripya thodi der baad call karein
m:switch off,shit ab kya karoon
maniks thought once again went back to the epic aryamann and nandini fall,then the prank
m:yaar agar waisa hi fall dobara ho gaya toh,kya zaroorat thi woh prank karne ki,ek min...prank-call-cabir-nandu-romance disturbed
EUREKA!!!!,milgaya
aryamann and nandini were very sincerely practicing when aryamanns phone rang
ar:um..ab mera phone baj gaya,wait main ek minmein call uthake khatam karta hoon,hello
m:hello sir ham life insurance company sebaat karre hain
ar:dekhiye mujhe koi life insu
m:arre sir zindagi khel hai kismat,aaj hai kal nai,aapke bure waqt mein ham aapke saath ho
ar:dekhiye,maine kaha na mujhe koi life insu
m:sir aaj ke zamane ka kya pata,itna bura waqt chalra hai ki..hello.hello sir..phone kaat diya,koi nai fir milata hoon
ar:lets cont..RING RING RING!!!dekhiye main kehra hoon na mujhe koi life insurance nai chahiye
m:sir aapne meri baat suni hi nai,ham life insurance ke saathsaat bike servicing bhi karwate hai hain,ek baar try toh karke dekhiye
ar:oh god,mere paas bike nai hai
m:no prblm sir,ham uske liye loan bhi dete hain,we r
ar:dekhiye na mujhe loan chahiye na hi life insurance
and he disconnected the call
m:aaj toh nai chhodne wala bachcho,lead singer banega,le ab bann
ar:main...RING RING RING!!!!what the hell is ur prblm,ek baar mein samajh nai aata
m:sir,ham shadi,date yeh sab karwatein hain
ar:luk,mujhe na hi shadi karni hai,na hi koi
m:sir chhokri naukari aur ghar,iss sab ki gurantee hai,aap bass ek baar
ar:GO TO HELL
and he again disconnects the call
ar:nand..RING RING RIN!!!m gonna kill this man
n:wait mujhe dikhao
she luks at the no and says=manik kano,aryamann dont worry,isko toh main theek karti hoon and smirks

Edited by deepanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
We wipp deal it chapter Number... Its not at all a problem dnt be sorry just update chapter soon...plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its ok dear ur story is awesome keep om writng
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jst got catch of ur story n read it in a go. Its jst awesome. I m luving d way story is shaping up. Placement if humorous shots is jst mindblowing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok dear!
But please update next part na.

Can't wait to see jealous Manik.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God am so lovng this story
Maniks plan was gud but bad luck manik wen our cabir is there none of ur plans r nt gonna wrk better luck nxt time
Manik is so jealous that he called thm to disturb thm nt to get thm close with each other
Manik nd nandu phone convo was super nd manik nd arayaman convo was also super
Nw wat is nandu gonna do...am so xited
Update sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭 Why did u stop it there mujhe aur padna tha.. it was going sooo good...
please please ek aur part post kardo. Dekhte hain ki nandini aka Nano ab kya karti hai.. it's going to be fun

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