Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Nice update
Soha is so jealous of nano that she thinks of tryng to change her mind but that nt possible nw because she has a super support system behind her fr supporting her under any condition nd she has become confident
All wer super tday wat nicknames u hav given thm super
Cabir nd navya wer gud cabir sharng fud that's fr the first time nano is so surprised by this
Watng fr more continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Hahahahaha...i laughed so much.
Soha ke sath jo hua it was worth reading.
Specially nandu's comment dat she should go coz it was time for her coochie-coo moments made me laugh so hard.
Lovdd d update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
plzzz post the nxt part soon i m egraly waiting...plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
CHAPTER 12

c:yaar yeh luv birds kahan hai yaar,m so bored,inko leke na bahar ghoomne jayenge,whats say
N:ha ok but pehle yeh sab mile toh,pura college ghum liya magar yeh log hai hi nai
They were roaming around to find mukbhi amd dhrulya when navya said
Nav:woh dekho,woh rahe mukbhi toh,pointing towards a couple who were sharing an ice cream
C:HAAAWWW 😲,MERE BINA ICE CREAM,ab toh yeh gaye,i have an idea
N:what,asked nano enthusiastically,cabir explained the plan and all three of them smirked
Abhi and mukti were lovingly eating their icecreams wheh abhi's phone rang
Abhi:hello
N:hello,yeh sahil rathore bolre hain,said nandu changing her voice while cabir was gaging the guy from whom they stole the phone and navya was helping him
Abhi:sorry wrong no
N:arre wrong kaise ho sakta hai,mujhe pata hai aap mere sahil hi hain
Ab:luk,i told u na,main sahil nai abhimanue hoon,abhimanue thakkar
N:oh,waise i wont mind abhimanue either,nice name,mujhe toh waise bhi koi naya chahiye tha,iss sahil se bore ho gai thi
Abhi:kya???r u crazy,who the hell r u,m telling u,disconnect the call right now
N:but baby listen na wo...and before nano cud complete her sentence the phone was disconnected
Mu:kaun tha??
Abhi:koi ni,lets continue,they were again eating the ice cream and only last bite was left,abhi and mukti were just going to claim each others lips when
RING RING RING!!!!!!,Once again abhi's phone rang
Abhi:who the hell is calling me at the perfect moment,ho kaun tum,what do u want
N:sahil baby,its me,abhi abhi toh baat ki,itni jaldi bhul bhi gaye
Abhi:u,m gonna kill u,murder u,how many times do i need to tell u,m not sahil m abhi,abhimanue thakkar
N:oh haan,so mr abhimanue,so sorry,woh itne ladko se baat hoti hai toh bhul gai thi,haan toh ham kahan thhey
Abhi:ham kahin nai thhey,got it,kahin nai,nowhere,abhi was flabbergasted,first an unknown girl was hitting on him second his romantic moment with mukti was ruined and now this girl once again had the guts of calling him,that too sahil
N:sweetheart,dont be shy,bass ek ghante ki hi toh baat,lets meet na
Abhi:meet?kahan ka meet,kaunsa meet,meet my foot,m not gonna meet u,and dont u dare call me again,with this he again disconnected the call
Cabir navya ,nano and that guy too were having grt fun
C:chal ek baar fir mila,last time
Mu:abhi kaun hai yeh
Abhi:idk,pata nai kaun hai,and once again
RING RING RING!!!!!!
Abhi:what the hell,what is ur freaking prblm,luk miss,whoever u r,m not gonna leave u,stop calling me and troubling me,got it,JUST STOP TROUBLING ME,everyone around abhi were staring at him,who wudnt when a boy wud shout on the top of his voice
C:kyu be sahil,meri behan ko chhedta hai,hadiya na tod doon teri hain
Abhi:luk y...ek minute,yeh toh ladka bola,bhai ab tum kaun ho,aur isse pehle ki tum kuchh bolo,main bata deta hoo haan,main sahil rathore nai abhimanue thakkar hu
C:chahe abhi ho ya shubby,meri behan ko chhed kaise diya tanne and then nano tuk the phone and said
n:honey,i know u wanted to meet me,toh dekho main khud hi aa gai,peechhe toh mude
Abhi:the moment abhi turned around,his face turned red
Abhi:nani,U R SO GONE,and rhen he ran after her,while mukti finally a hint of what happened ran behind cabir knowing and this prank was not planned alone by nano to take the revenge of their ruined romance,whike navya stud there laughing like a manic,soon dhrulya joined them and when navya tild them what happened they joined her in the laughing session and then went behind them
Abhi:ruk nano,kahan bhaag rahi hai,tujhe toh aaj main chhodne nai wala
Nano was running and manik and soha noticed this
M:yeh kya horra hai,come lets check
Nano turned her face and showed her tongue to abhi and the very next moment she bumped into a giy and was going to fall when two strong hands held her waist firmly,nandini closed her eyes out of fear,and when she opened them,she saw a pair of smokey grey eyes,straight nose,with a firm jaw line,the face was extremely handsome and she was sure she hasnt seen it earlier
N:sorry,woh actaully main...
Abhi:yeh kya horra hai?
Listeneing to abhis word nano realized herbposition and stud straight,but her romantic posture did not go un noticed by a pair of eyes
MANIKS POV
WTH,yeh nano dekh ke nai bhaag sakti kya,kya zaroorat thi uss ladke ki baho mein girne ki,aur yeh ladka,himmatvkaise hui iski nandu ko chhune ke,mauka mila nai ki aa gaya line marne,luk at yhe way he is holding her waist,just not ready to leave it,thanq abhi,thanq so muvh,zindagi mein mukti ke saath pair up hone ke alawa ek yehi achha kaam kiya hai tune
Guy:hi,m aryamann,ur frnd,woh girne wali thi so i just...sorry if u didmt like it
N:no there is nothing to be sorry about,m nandini vashishth
Ar:hey,nice meeting u
Abhi:thanx dude,fir saving my sis,aur nano dekh ke bhaaga karo an
N:sorry,nandini said while she cutely hold her ears like a child
ARYAMANN'S POV
awe,sge is so cite,nano,funky name,she js so cute and hot,god,is this live at first site,i have never seen a girl as cute as she is
C:bachao,bachao,bachao and with this cabir hid behind aryamann
Abhi:cabir ky karra hai,pagal ho gaya hai kya
C:pehle yeh apni sikhandi ko sambhal jo mujhe bhishm pitama samajhke mujhe maar kar alna badla pura karna chahri hai
N:what!!!!
C:arre mtlb mujhe yeh mukti se bacha
Muk:tujje toh main chhodongi nai,bahar nikal,yeh,yeh kaun hai?
C:jo bhi hai mujhe bahut pasand hai,thanx for being here bro,agar aaj tum mere aur iske beech chattan banke na kharre hote toh main toh kab apni kabr mein pahuch chuka hota,fir aate yeh sab meri kabr pe selfie kheechne
N:shut up bir,mukti yeh aryamann hai,aryamann meet my frnda and she introduced him to everyone,but as she approached manik,manik's face had some kind of a fierce luk and he just fir the sake of nandini sheked his hand with aryamann,provided he pressed his hand as much as he cud,and aryamann returnes the favour happily
D:waise,tum new ho?
Ar:haan,woh actually ek month late ho gaya aane main,aaj hi join kiya hai
C:oh,tumhare aub kya hain
Fortunately for aryamann and unfortunately for manik aryamann's subjects were same as nandinis
Al:kudos,nano ke bhi same hai and right now tum logo ka free period hai
Cabir was intently observing manik,his every expression openly showed his dislike fir aryamann and cabir very well knew the reason for this
c:nano,y dont u do something,jaake aryamann ko college ki site seeing kar wao
Cabirs words fell like a cloud burst on manik
MANIKS POV
kya,site seeing yeh cabir ka dimaag kharab hai kya,what is he trying to do,cabir u r gonna pay for this
Mu:haan idea bura nai hai,replued mukti when cabir signalled her to luk at manik and she understood whst she meant
N:ok,then i will leave
MANIKS POV
nai mujhe kuchh karna hoga,soch manik soch,tu nandu ko aise iss aryamann ke saath nai bhej sakta,SOCH
Manik was trying hard to think of some excuse and prevent nandini from going when there was an anouncement
Anouncement:all the students are required in the audi by the next 10 minutes
d:ab kya hua,chalo guys lets go site seeing baad mein kar lena
And all of them went inside while manik was luking up and continuesly thanking gid for his wonderful miracle,if only he knew,his wonderful miracle was soon going to be a dreadful curse for manik
Edited by deepanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
wow superb revenge mukbir.really like it
continue like this
give pain to manik as much as u could.
becoz of him nano suffered a lot
more than her he have to suffer
i really luv u dr for this update
expecting more from u
thanks a lot
cobtinue soon
cant wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Applause!!
Too good yaar. I hope to see some chemistry between aryamann nd nandu...nd some more scenes such as dat fall where arya held nandu. Nd dem to be witnessed by our very own jealous monster malhotra.
Nandu nd cabir's prank was great. I was laughing all the way.
Great script. Great work. :)
Edited by rimsha01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Good going... Jealous Manik is always welcome :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Amazing... Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
awesome update...
loved every bit of it...
cabir's prank on mukbhi was awesome...hilarious...
hope more of these updates are to come...
manik's jealousy was a sight to see...he should know how nandu felt when he left with soha...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Amazing update
Eager to know what is that curse so please update fast

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