**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
just lvoe it
it was aweosme
it is really cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
i very much like ur story
n wants to read it till end in one go
I know its not possible for any writer to write whole story in one go
😆
so m waiting for all ur nxt chapters😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
I'm loving this story...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
it's superb
plz cont soon
plz pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Plz update soon
And update long one ...plz 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Part 5b

Manik and manan get ready and reach downstairs
Manik and manan sitting on dining table Manik was busy with his phone and manan with his psp
Nandini:stop it..tumhe humesha samajana padhega
Manik and manan:(keeping their accessories) sorry
Nandini: Tumhe nahi kaha..
Manan:bye mom ..i going (and he moves out)
Nandini: So u r leaving (making him to leave)
Manik: No..vaise mujhe kuch kaam hai I'll access from here..
And he walks upstairs after a while she hears a music and she walks upstairs and just peeps and Manik jerks her inside..singing

O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan
Teri ada
Jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana
Mein hoon fida (kneeling in front of her and holding her by one hand and other spreading wide)

Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
o
[Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de]4
(Manik pulling her cheeks)

[Gussa tera jhootha
Jhoothi moothi berukhi hai
Jaanu main to jaanu
Teri naa mein haan chhupi hai]2

Aye sanaam na kar sitam
Tujhko khuda ka vasta
(running all over behind her)
hey..
Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
o
[Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de]4

[Tanha na kategi zindgani jaanle tu
Meri hi zarurat tujhko hogi maanle tu]2
Mar ke bhi na chodunda Teri baahien tera raasta
(holding her and manan's photo)
gu.gu.gu..Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
o
[Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de]4
(kneeling before her)
Nandini: Stop it Manik ..plzz stop it and just leave
Manik: May I know kise baat per gussa Ho...r u still stuck on dhruv thing...
Nandini:no..mujhe bhaut kaam I'll leave for hospital
Manik:(jerks her hand pin her to wall) let me ask u in my way...what's the problem?
Nandini: Fine let me tell u ...Manik I am hurt...i knew Ki tum Dhruv ko chuno gey..but what abt us ..u again choose to decide our fate...maine voh bhi maaf kiya ...main jab chali Gaye u didn't even bother to enquire about me..fine...but mujhe diye Hua saarey promises u broke that hurted me the most...aur (and manan enters and Manik leaves Nandini)
Manan: Mom!!
Nandini: Yes..baby
Manan: Leave me at Sameer's home plss
Nandini:lets go
Manik pov
Tuney bhaut badi mistake ke hai.. I have to get her back in my life
Pov ends
Manik: I'll drop him ...vasey bhi main usse taraf ja raha Hu

Outside
Manik: Shit...mere car chalu nahi Ho rahi ..can I take urs..
Nandini: Fine...u take main Karan ko kehte Hu he'll pick me up
Manan: No way...(Manik was abt to say the same) ..manik will drop u..
Manik: Ya.. Chali
Nandini: Fine Maine abhi aye(and goes inside)
Manik: Yeh Karan kon hai..???
Manan: Mom ka friend hai..i just hate him he is chipku kind..
Manik : What the ?
Nandini: Lets go
And they leave her



At Dhruv 's place
Mukti:guys Nandini single hai aur Manik bhi..
Alya: U r right ..hum kuch karna chahiye...for them ..what say..
Dhruv: Ya..u r right
Cabir: I have to leave..station par kuch kaam hai..
And Manik enters and manan leaves towards Sameer
Cabir : Manik ..tera phone Dena...(go through) yeh kya hai. .
Manik: Voh..manan ke parents sujata aur Samarth ka pic hai...
Cabir: Chal yeh ley...bye

Cabir's pov
Station ka kaam hogaya...let's meet Nandini vasey yeh aa hi Gaya hai hu toh
Pov end

Nandini's cabin
Nandini: Sujata samarth u...yeha...first lets move to canteen

In canteen,
Nandini:yaha aachanak...
Samarth: Hum yaha kuch kaam tha..we just arrived yesterday..and leaving today..
Sujata:and thought lets meet u and ur little monster...but unfortunately we have to leave nxt time soon jarur milu gi just tell him I met
(and they hug and leave)
And whole scene is watched by cabir..
Cabir: Excuse me..
Samarth: Yes...
Cabir: U r manan's parents right
Sujata: Unfortunately..no...voh Nandini ka beta hai..
Samarth: U got wrong info...btw we have to leave..bye buddy
Cabir : Ya..



Precap: Cabir confrontation to Nandini

I know it's bore...but soon there is manan and Manik bonding and Nandini manau scenes
Thanks everyone
Actually due to some reasons my Wi-Fi is down...i can't access it so update my story from my dad's cell so ...sorry for late update
Edited by epicangel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Amazing update
Waiting to see manan and Manik bonding
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Hey its a wonderful story...grt going...but I think derz some prob with the Chap no., Actually I got confused so just...ne ways caarry on wid ur story...waiting for ur update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
awesome..loved it..pls continue soon...take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
so chuto saa..
but it was amazing..
hope manik gets to know the things soon..
plz cont soon..

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