**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Manik always sacrifices Nandini for Dhruv. It's so unfair to her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi there, ur ff is just awsum...plz break d suspense nd upload d nxt part soon...eagerly waiitng👍🏼👏
Edited by zooni.shah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Plzzz update next part can't take this suspense anymore...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
continue soon...
i really like ur update..
update soon.. am eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
SO HERE IT GOES

part 5

Manan: Lets it eat...i love ice cream
Manik: No..no tumhare mom chilayegi...
Manan: No she won't (making puppy face)
Which melts Manik
Manik: Bhai issey ice cream Dena
Manan: Bhai butterscotch wali..
After taking ice cream they move towards the car...
Manik picks him up makes him sit on car ... Manan eating ice cream with his finger(like Nandini does)
Manik keeps looking at him...
Manik: Hogaya...lets go...
Manan: Chalo..
Manik: Thanks bolna nahi sikhaya...
Manan: I don't owe I'll return ur ice-cream after reaching home
Manik: Pehle iski suno...aur mujhe par hi rob jhad raha hai..
(they reach home)
Manik: Nandini kaha hai..(to maid )
Maid: Ma'am aate hogi...
( and he lies on sofa... And puts his legs on table)
Manan: Oo..hello(glaring at his legs..signals to remove it...and Manik agree)
Manik: U go and sleep
Manan:( Looks at his room door and it's dark)voh..okay
He moves up stairs and is scared...gulps his saliva...
Manan: Voh...manik mere room ka darwazz nahi khul raha ..help na
Manik: Pointing fingers at him...me..
Manan : Yes...pretty please
Manik: ( opens the door which was not lock they move ahead..and turns on the light) toh...manan Murthy ko aandhere se daar lagta hai..
Manan: No...but I hate darkness..mom kehte...when god life darkness se ghar deta hai...toh voh ek angel bhej ta hai...joh 440watt ka bulb jalata hai...
Manik: (smiles at his innocence) chalo go to bed..I'll also go..
Manan: (catches his hand) u r going...
Manik: Fine I leave when Ur mom comes
Manan: Mujhe kaam hai..
Manik: Ab kya..
Manan: Wait..his goes washes his feet's brush his teeth
Manik: Hogaya...
Manan: Wait aiyaappa ko pray karna...varna mom will shout
(while his praying Manik remembers how Nandini said he'll remain always in her prayers)
Manan: Aiyappa!! Plzz dad ko jaldi Lao..mom ke life Mein bhi angel with bulb send Kari
(Manik smiles) and his off to bed...
Manik waits for Nandini 's room (manan is sleeping in her room)
Slowly Manik too dozed off lying on bed

Nandini reaches home
Nandini: Manan kaha hai...
Maid:upar hai...(ma'am Mai jao) Nandini nods ask her to leave


Upstairs
Nandini: Sorry baby...(and sees Manik and him sleeping peacefully)
She caresses manan and kisses him
Nandini: My sona bacha...(and looks at Manik and tear rolls down) kash tum issey family ko complete kar patey Manik...
(she also sleep beside him..(Manik manan Nandini) )


In morning ,
A ray falls is about fall on them Manik keeps his hand so it doesn't disturb their sleep and slowly gets up removing his Hand from Nandini which below hers on manan and closes the curtain and comes again sleep keeping hand on her hand
Nandini wake's up and gets freshen up and Manik to gets up and sees Nandini in front of mirror
And clutches his hand in her
Manik: It's so good..to see ur face when ever I wake up..that's good morning
She pushes him away. And goes towards manan
Nandini: Baby..get up..
Manan: Good morning mom..pecks on her cheek
Nandini:get ready fast...breakfast lagati Hu...and u too
And manan rushes towards. Bathroom...and holding a photograph
Manik:yeh kon hai..u look so happy
Nandini: Yeh ..sujata aur Samarth hai...manan ke parents ussey Hu jab ghar kaya they tab Ki hai...(cleaning it and keeps there and walks away)
Manik: Tumhare best smile hai iss main...ek toh pic merey pass hona chahiye and clicks pic of it(it's pic Nandini holding manan and sujata and Samarth by her side)

Precap: Manik singing and making Nandini dance...and cabir sees sujata and Samarth

Sry for late update I was bit busy...I'll update nxt part tomorrow for sure...and thanks everyone for their comments hope u like it and plzz ignore grammatical mistakes and plus sry for not sending pm..it's late aorry 🥱
Edited by epicangel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
amazing update
waiting for manik to realize manan in his son
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Veey interesting
Cont soon
Waitn curiously fr yur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Sweet update:)

I wonder how Cabir seeing sujata and Samarth will help MaNan
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Super Update .. Cutest one .. I love your story .. just wanna request if you could update a little longer .. We readers being a whole lot of greedy bunch and itna chotu sa update in 24 hours .. Bahut Na Insafi hai na :P so please if you could update a longer one :D will be the happiest :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Wow!!! 👏 What a story!! 👏 👍🏼 Please PM me the next part!! 😃

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