**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
love it...
so finally cabir kows..
plz update soon ...
i want manik to know ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Part B

Nandini is about to leave.
Nandini: Manan!!
Manan: Mom!! Here's ur love
Manik: Love!!!.. Baby it's only me(in thoughts and gives a smirk)
Nandini:son..plzz
Manan: Yes..mom..I'll behave well will not trouble anyone ( smiles)
Mukti: Awww!!
Nandini kisses him: Bye!! Bye guyzz and leaves

In hospital,
Nandini finishes' her work and leaves ...about to open her car..
Nandini: Hey!! Alya...tum manan ko Chod do ghar I'll be there..bye
Alya: Okay...

Dhruv's house
Alya: Okay..bye..guyzz Nandini ka phone aya tha..so whose leaving manan
Cabir: Manik ja raha hai...hai na Manik
Manik: What!!! ..ha..I'll go(catching cabir's line..to meet Nandini)
Alya: Okay...manan...mom reaching home get ready ..
And they leave...

In car,
Nandini stops her car near a hill top..
Nandini to herself: Can't hold it now
She moves out of her car
Nandini: Kyu Manik!! Why u stepped again in our lives...u messed up everything..and remembers her past
Flashback
Nandini: Manik!! Tum fc ke baad yaha apne ghar kyu chaley aye..is everything fine ( his back is facing her )
Manik turns
Manik: I am fine...come here ( and takes her to her terrace)
Terrace is fully decorated
Nandini: Manik what's this??
Manik: I wanted to make this moment special for us...so miss Murthy ( bending on knee)
. I LOVE U
Nandini: ( makes him Stand) I LOVE U TOO..
Manik: (cups her face and kiss her . They have a passionate kiss..
Nandini: Ab Hume humesha saath rahenge..promise
Manik: Promise ( and hug)
It starts to rain
Manik: Shit( and runs to have shed... She jerks his hand and enjoys the rain)Nandini!! Come over here..
Nandini: Manik..enjoy this moment...( he keeps gazing her and just walk towards her)
Picks her in his arms and take her to his room..
Handover a towel...
Manik: Go ..varna bimar Ho jao gi..
She is drying her hairs ..he pulls her from waist
Nandini: Manik!! Breathing heavily..
Manik:( keeps finger on her lips) shh..don't spoil it..(slowly removing her zip ...)
And they have passionate kiss
She removes his button..
Both r naked ...and fall on bed his kiss her eyes , her ears, moves towards her nape..and kiss on her neck and clutches her hand...she place her hand on his shoulder...and it's best night they had...it's was there union
she was sleeping on his chest...
And Manik's phone ring...
It's Dhruv 's message on grp..he wants to meet him..
Manik: Dhruv..
She wakes up..and holding bed sheet on her chest
Nandini: Kya Hua Manik..
Manik: It's Dhruv..lets go
Nandini is about to leave he kisses her back...
Manik: Ab toh assey bahut se raatey aayangi..( wears of his shirt)
They both get ready..
Nandini: Lets go..( he catches her hand)
Manik: I'll never leave it..promise ( and bends to kiss her)
Nandini: Manik..lets go..assey bahut se moments aayenge..

They reach on spot...where Dhruv informed
Dhruv sees Manik..and hugs him
FAB3 shock..and manan..too
Dhruv: Sorry buddy...
Manik : It's okay..finally we are together...
Dhruv: I know ..yeh sab Nandini Ki galti hai...na voh humare lives mey aati..na sab hoga
Manik (in shock): Buddy kya keh raha hai...tu ussey sabse pehle janta hai na...
Nandini is hiding behind and have tears
Dhruv: I know buddy...i know u love her tujhe dhikae nahi dega...(nyonika has poisoned Dhruv's mind about her)
Cabir: Tu pagal Ho Gaya hai kya..
Manik: Dhruv listen..
Dhruv: BAs Manik..select..( and rest u know)
Dhruv's pov : Buddy tujhe dard hoga...but its for ur betterment)

Flashback ends
Nandini: U broke our promises Manik...u choose our fate again..I'll never let u know about manan..
Flashback
Nandini at sujata's house..
Sujata: U r pregnant...
Nandini: I have decided I'll abort the child...
Sujata: I not ur child ..it's Manik 's too...ussey bataya
Nandini: I called him ..his not ready pick up and reply...it's over
Samarth (sujata's husband) : R u mad Nandini...
Nandini: What I'll do...?
Sujata: Give birth to this little life inside u...you r one most lucky women to conceive ...and don't forget it's our love...
Nandini: But..chacha ..chachi..
Sujata: What about them...they had left for US aur amms ke death ke baad..it's just 2 weeks u realized..and we r there to take care of yours ..and further things..amms ka voh hospital u can take care of it
Nandini: (caressing her belly) mamma is waiting for u..
Falshback ends..

Manan and Manik in car..
Manan: Ice cream!!
Manik: Jerks the car...what!!
Manan: Come..lets go and eat..

Precap: The same...

Thank u for comments [:$] [:$]
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
its awesome...loving this ff a lot...
pls continue soon...waiting for manan and manik's scenes...
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Haye...kya likha hai...matlab u always leave me speechless...mere pas toh words ki kami ho gyi hai jab se ye ff likhna start kra hai apne...plz aj ek part or upload kr do...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
past is painfull..future can be bright..plz cont soon
it's awesome..
plz don't make us wait..cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
yeepeee finally u cleared about my fire works..😉
nice haan... loved it...

manik vs manan... waiting for it eagerly... 😎

update daily yaar plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Fully on nandus side, manik 😡
You are horrible breaking your promise again, after that
Nandu should be careful as she is a mother and needs to protect her son from getting hurt
evil205 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Love ur update..
Plzz update soon
Manik will. Hell shocked. To know manan is his child...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
nandini wow a bold mother
manik is going to be hell shocked and pained when he knows manan is his son
well he deserves it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Wow just love this! If possible please PM me when you update :) continue sooon!

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