**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138

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<font size="5">Chap 1</font>
One year has past , nandini left Manik
Everyone were enjoying at Dhruv's house as it was alya has just arrived with their son from hospital
Everyone was enjoying with baby Navya was also with them as she also had a daughter which cabir and Navya named Kavya...
Manik was sitting alone aside playing his guitar. Dhruv comes towards him
Dhruv: Buddy!!
Manik: Hmm..
Dhruv: Kya Hua...sab vaha enjoy kar rahe hai and u...
Manik: Nothing bus...just.
Dhruv: U miss her..na
Manik: Whom?
Dhruv: Main nandini ki baat kar raha Hu...actually I am sorry..what I have done...u spoilt ur life
Maink: Shh..asa kuch nahi

***flashback***
Dhruv:BAs hoga buddy...u were always right nandini was the reason for our break up.
Manik: Buddy ..tu kya bol raha hai...u know nandini from 1st ..voh essa kuch Ku kareyge
Dhruv : I don't know...
Nandini: Dhruv..(she had tears in her eyes)
Dhruv: Jab Mai aur mera buddy baat kar rahe Ho...no one talks in middle..
Manik: Dhruv..just listen
Dhruv: Stop ...it lets be clear..u have choose between me and nandini
Manik: Dhruv m.tu kya kahe raha hai
Cabir: R u gone nuts Dhruv
Dhruv : Select between friendship and love
Nandinu starts walking..
Alya: Nandini were r u going...manik ne apna decision nahi sunaya
Nandini: I know what his decision is...
And she walks off
Multi: Happy Dhruv
And he also leaves.
Cabir: Ussey baat toh kar..
Manik runs towards nandini..and he watches going towards gate
Manik : Nandini!!;
And comes and hugs her
Breaking hug
Nandini : I have to go...
Manik: I m sry..main humari promise fulfill nahi kar saka
Nandini: It okay..manik...will u fulfil this promise
Manik: Yes...
Nandini: Never blame dhruv for my going.., no need to tell u but still.take care of fab 5 and Ho sake toh nyonoika ma'am Ki galti bula kar..call her..
Manik hugs her tightly again
Nandini: Manik chodo..
And she leaves
***flashback ends ***
Manik: Uss cheez ko ek saal Ho Gaya hai.. It's late
Dhruv : It's never late..chalo
Dhruv dragging him towards the car..
Cabir: Hey m.kaha ja rahe Ho
Dhruv : Nandini ko lene...to get her back in buddy's life
And leaves..
They reach Murthy house and it's locked
A women passing by: Kon Ho..aur kya chahiye..
Manik: Yaha..Murthy's rahte they..aap Bata sakte kaha Gaye..
Women: Oh..they voh toh chaley Gaya Bangalore...bhaut hurry mey they..ha.yaad aya unke ghar me voh Bangalore vale auntyki death Ho gayi issliye
Manik:amms...shit
Dhruv: Aapke pass unka Bangalore ka address hai
Women: Ha...wait
Afterwhile she hands over them..

Precap:cabir , Dhruv, Manik reach Bangalore..and r disappointed
6yrs later leap..(at saxena villa)

Guyzz I hope u like it...if u want I should continue u can pm me and add to buddy list..
And do reply...
New here..and its my first ff on manan..
Thank you

. INDEX
Chap 1-1
Chap 2-2
Chap 3-4
Chap 4-6
Chap 4b-9
Chap 5-11
Chap 5b-13
Chap 5c-14
Chap 6-16
Chap 6b-18
Chap 6c-21
Chap 6d-24
Chap 7-27
Chap 7b-30
Chap 8-33
Chap 9-36
Chap 10-40
Chap 11-44
Chap 11b-47
Chap 12-50
Chap 13-53
Chap 14-56
Chap 15-59
Chap 16-62
Chap 17-64
Chap 18-67
Chap 19-71
Chap 20-75
Chap 21-78
Chap 22-82
Chap 23-86
Chap 24a -91
Chap 24b-96
Chap 25- 102
Chap 26 - 106
Chap 27- 111
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Thank...thank u...so much..for accepting me..and such a wonderful replies
And likes..too...here I go with my nxt update
Chap2

Manbiruv...pack to leave for Bangalore
Manik pov...
Nandini...i miss u...thodi der aur and our differences will finally end

They reach at place..
Cabir: Manik ...what?...we r here..chal nandini se kahi milna..
Dhruv: Ha..chal buddy
They walk..in and find it to be closed.
Dhruv: Shit..yaar ab kya karey...it's locked
Cabir: Wow...dhruv u can see it..hum dikh raha..hai
Manik is busy searching her here and there
Manik: Kidhar hogi...
Cabir: Arey..buddy sham hogayi..she must have went for praying..ki tu ussey mil jaye
(and they laugh)
A women passing by
W: Aap log yaha...kiskeliye rukey hai
Dhruv: Aap ??
W: Main Murthy's neighbour..
Cabir: Where r they??
Manik is looking at her with hope
W: U don't know..they left.. After Kishore aunty's death.. They left and Mr.Murthy mein US transfer hogaya...he left with his family and rishabh
Manik: Aur..nandini
W: Voh...she came on funeral..but she didn't go..voh apni friend sujata ke saath chali Gaye..further studies
Manik: Kaha..any idea
W: I don't know..she didn't turn back
Cabir pats his shoulder
Cabir : Lets go..


6 yrs past...
Dhruv: Aliya...what do think which suits me the best..( showing her shirts)
A small 6yrs kid come running..
Sameer(alya and dhruv's son): Mom...which suits best..( showing pair of uniform)
Aliya: U both will drive me crazy one day..u wear this (pointing towards a shirt) and come my little Dhruv
A maid: Sir..manik sir is waiting for u down
Sameer: Manik chachu...(and runs with his towel downstairs)
Everyone gather at living room
Manik: Hey champ..missed me
Navya and cabir arrive with their daughter
Manik: Hey..beautiful Kavya
And again they all fab5 have grp hug
Cabir: Hey..guys..mukti on video chat
Fab5 : Hey..
( mulkt's pregnant..and with abhi in US)
They all have chat. And busy getting his son ready..
Sameer: Mom...aaj..manik chachu is leaving us..and ha..don't send driver to pick us up..
Dhruv : Why??
Sameer : Because...main aur Kavya..manan ke ghar Jane waley hai..his mom will pick us up..and party and his place as finally exam finish
Cabir: Beta...sabko bhararwali..hi pasand ati hai..
And everyone laugh
Navya: Stop spoiling them
Aliya: What's his mother's name??
Sameer: Nan..., u come to meet her..bye..I'll call after we reach..let's go chachu
And leave

At Murthy villa
Nandini: Manan...jaldi..u will be late
Manan: Here's ur love mom...mom aaj school ke baad u r coming and
Nandini: Ha..ha..I'll pick u and ur friends and party at our place
And he plants a kiss on her cheek and leaves

At school.
Unknowingly Manik and nandini are standing parallel
Nandini: Manan..it's ur last day..plzz for mom's sake..don't bully anyone wid ur friends
Manan: Yes !! Mom(annoyingly agree)
And they leave
Nandini ( ti sit in car and she feels a breeze ..dedicating his presence..she takes deep breath) Manik...
And Manik turns but she sits in car..and their cars cross each other

Precap: Manan meets Manik and cabir..nandini and Manik come front of each other..


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plz continue soon
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it's amazing..
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