**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update soon... I just can't wait...ahh m just loving it...!! Plz update it...!!
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Part 6
Nxt morning,
In saxena villa...
Cabir: All ready...chalo line banao bacho...(pointing everyone)
Mukti: Chal ne dongi...(and leaves towards the car)
Sameer:manan and cavya come fast
Manan and cavya : We have surprise for u and (they move aside)
It's manayata (Sameer's bf)
Sameer : Manayata...
Kavya: Lets go

OLD FAB5 WATCHING THIS
Cabir: Ley Dhruv tere bahu aagagi
And everyone laughs

Abhi: So decided...dhruv alya and children go together
And secondly me mukti and Navya and Dhruv in other car
And nandini and Manik with or saaman in other car...lets leave
Nandini:par..
Everyone: Bye bye nandu
Manik arrives as he was busy inside...
Manik: Baki sab...
Nandini: Chaley Gaye...let's go

It's long journey...
It's evening on high their car's tyre gets puncture and car is about to slip
Nandini: Manik!!! Holds his arms tight...
But they r safe...
Manik pov : If doesn't feel anything why is she so concerned about me...(looking in her) why it depicts the same pain and concern abt me..does she still...
Pov end
Nandini: Manjk kha kho Gaye..
Manik and nandini out of their car...shi no signal...
Nandini: Ab kya karey...
Manik: Dumb yeh kuch nahi kar saktey...
Nandini: Duffer...stepney use karo...
Manik: Wow itna brilliant idea tumhe Kasey aya..(and check no stepney) hogaye tasle...
Nandini: Ab let ask for lift...
Nandini is sitting in car..manik is asking for lift...no one helps finally a truck halts..
Truck person: Kha Jana hai...
Manik : Voh BAs panchgani...
Tp: Ha..chalo ji..bheto...
Manik: Voh mere biwi bhi hai...and she's pregnant..plss thank u
Tp: Ha ..ji le so
Nandini is about to climb
Tp: Madam ji aaram se...(she gives questioning look to Manik)
Manik: Ha Sambhal Ke...
While travelling she slowly slid her head on his shoulder and he noticed she is asleep...

They reach with load with them...
Cabir : Arey yaar kha rahege they...kahi honeymoon banane ka plan toh nahi tha...
Nandini: Shut up cabir ...
They r resting in their room and Manik's room is front of her...
Nandini: Manik mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai...come in my room
(entering her room)
Manik: Wow..Nandini direct room mey bulay..
She turns
Nandini: Stop it Manik(he gives what..look) I m talking ur behaviour...manik u can fool ur friends abt not me..tumhare bina boley hi tumhare words samjhate Hu...don't hide ur pain behind this laughter
Manik: Itna samjhte Ho..why don't u come back...i know mujhse Galati hogaye..and I regret it..plzz come back..(kneeling down a tear rolls down through his eyes)
She benda down and cups his face
Nandini: Manik we r not destined to be together...hum humesha sath hotey par kuch Ho jata hai and we separate..and now I don't have potential to break my heart once again ...
Manik: Ab sab thik hai...we can be together if tum chaho...nothing will go wrong...
Nandini: Agar Mai chahu toh bhi..main wapas kahi as Sakti..kuch toh hai tere mere daarmiyaan...
Manik: U mean theirs hope...
Nandini: Manik don't...
Manik: U will be back...main bhaut galatiya Ki hai...time to make peace with them...Nandini (she looks at him with her eyes filled) kahi tum mujh se uss raat Ki Galati keliye...gussa toh nahi Ho na...( she leaves his face...and stands up and turn)
Nandini: Voh galti ...tumhe lagti hai...par it was best thing has ever happened to me...in our life..
Manik: Means hope..hai.(in thoughts I'll get u)
And She leaves
Manik: I'll find out and break the wall which comes between us...
And leave for downstairs

Precap:Manik singing and manan sings with fab 3camp fire...nxt day..bonding
Hope like it...and thanks for pm and comments
And do comment plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's too good 😊
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fab update!!!
waiting for d next part!!!
Continue Soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Of course She is hurt because of that night
How can She be sure that he will choose her instead of his Friends Like before? They need to talk, he willingly walked away from her
ThAn only After he got permission, he Went After her

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jus read dis..
Amazing concept👏
Beautifully written😳

Update soon n do pm me

Ps- Plz make an index
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soon
jsut lvoe it
table turn this time
now manik is going to use hope to winnandain back

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Awsum loved d writing waiting eagerly for further updates

Post asap😃...n thanx fr d pm
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fab one..
waiting for manan and manik bonding..
cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 6b

All are sitting in garden having bonfire in middle...
Surrounding it...
Positions as follows
Sameer alya and Dhruv together cavya cabir and Navya together and mukbhi together and nandini and manan(his lying his head her lap and she's caressing his hairs)
Manik comes there...
Mukti: Tu kha bhetega...
Alya : Nandini Ki seat Khali ha..go
She moves aside ...and Manik and manan playfully gives angry look
Abhi: Kya bhetheo let's sing...manik..(hands over guitar)
He walks in center...
(looking at Nandini Manik keeps on seeing)
Ye raatein ab nahi dhadakti
Din bhi saans nahi lete
Ab toh aa jaao mere soneya
Baatein reh gayi adhoori
Mere labon pe zaroori
Aake sun jaao mere soneya

Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa..

Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi hai
Baarishon mein pehle jaisi baatein nahi hai
Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi hai
Baarishon mein pehle jaisi baatein nahi hai
Sookhe sookhe alfaaz, khali khali mere
haathon ki laqeerein bulaave soneya..

Tere bin.. nahi lage jiya
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piya
tere bin..nahi lage jiya

Ho..
Chaand bhi wahin hai, wahin hai sitaare (she remembers their stars watching scene)
Tere baad pheeke pheeke lagte hain saare
Chaand bhi wahin hai, wahin hai sitaare
Tere baad pheeke pheeke lagte hain saare
Aaja leke tu savere kar ja door andhere
Teri doori tadpaave soneya
(Nandini's eyes r full of tears who wants ooze out...manan watches it)
Tere bin.. naahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa..
Tere Bin..

Everyone is quiet and have pin drop silence..
Manan: Mom!!! I also want to sing ...
Nandini: Okay...
Manan: I m the best...(holding guitar)
Cabir: Manik is best...dude
Cavya and Sameer joining him: Manan is best..
Mukti: Voh...lets start...

NEW FAB 3 TAKES POSITION
cavya in centre with mic and Sameer and manan with guitar
Cavya: Chocolate boxes..men on horses
. valentine's day...parties on Saturdays
. yeh toh sab 4 on ten...ache lagte hai now then...
Manan and Sameer : Par tere jaisa koi kaha ten on ten
. Kaise tu kiski KO dede 10 on 10
And they end song with their grp hug
Alya: Aww...
It's night lets go...
While entering inside Manik and manan enters the door together and stuck up
Manik: Back off dude...
Manan: Manik(the way Nandini pronounces his name in senti mood the same way)
Manik:(bends and his heart melts watching his cute face) what??
Manan: Let me go..na..plzz(Manik is abt yo think and he pushes him away and turns) Manik is a fool
Manik gives his smirk and smile and remembers Nandini's drunk scene where ahe called him fool

In morning,
Nandini: Manan!! Manan!! (searching him every where) ..alya tumne manan ko dekha hai..kya
Alya: R monsters r outside in garden
She walks and sees ..manik is doing push-ups and manan is standing over there watching him
Manik: What???
Manan: U like my mom right...
Manik: (abt 2fall and stands up rubbing his hand) what do u mean?
Manan: Don't lie...waise I warn u my dad's very possessive about her..and me too
Manik: Aacha ..how do u know...(cabir enters the scene and hears their convo)
Manan: Mom once she told me ...vaise tum itne burey bhi nahi dikhtey(catching his chin and checking him)I'll think...
Nandini: Manan chalo...lets have breakfast
Manan: U also can join us..manik(and smiles)
Nandini:(in his ears) why u r so sweet to him...what r u upto...
Manan: Nothing mom(pulls her cheek) be happy..and kiss her
After breakfast
Manan Sameer and cavya...
Sameer : Lets play cricket
Cavya: Budhu..(hitting his head) v r only 3
Manik: V r there na...let enjoy...
Manan: Lets make team..
Sameer: Dad..
Manan: Abhi uncle,
Sameer:cabir uncle
Manan: Manik...
Cavya: Toss the coin and Sameer choose to bat..
All ladies r watching their match...
Alya: I know...manan he jeetaga..
Nandini: Early judge mat karo...i cheer for Sameer ( and laugh)
Game is on
Manan: Manik...i don't like to lose...get it
Manik: Same here..
Game starts and Sameer's team is about to win(I m sorry for not describing the match)
And for last ball manan and Manik r batting..and they need 4runs
Cabir throws ball towards Manik and whole stadium in watching it carefully
Manik hits a six...but Dhruv is abt to catch it and misses it
Manan leaves his bat..
Manan: We won Manik (and hugs him and they fall in ground)
Alya: I said na..manik manan ko haar ne nahi dega...just like a dad does...and leave to greet them
Nandini: Ya alya..main ussey voh nahi de sakte..jo Manik can do...(in thoughts and hides her tear and smiles)
Cabir: (comes towards her) best dad and son scene
But she goes to congratulate them...
Manik gets up..
Manan: Friends(makes his hand forward and Manik accept it)
Manan:a winning selfie..(cabir pushes Nandini on Manik she falls a slight in him and they r looking at each other and manan takes selfie with them )
And they leave for lunch
Manik: I got it Nandini..r hope..MANAN...(and smiles at her she turns to see him)

Precap: Manan and Manik discussion and Manik teaches manan to swim..

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