**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
I jzt loved ur story...It's amazing..
Plzz cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anytime dear...I just hope u dint feel bad dat I pointed dat out...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum update...when will u post d next part?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5c

Nandini in cabin
Cabir:knock!!knock!!(opening the door and peeping) Dr. May I come in
Nandini: Cabir (she is shocked and tensed) Nandini pov(kahi cabir ne sujata ko dekh toh nahi liya)
Cabir:(waves his hand infront of her) kaha kho Gaye...if didn't like toh mey chala jata Hu..
Nandini: Nahi!! Sit
Cabir: Nandini why did u lie??
Nandini: Abt what??
Cabir: Don't act Nandini..main kiake baat kar rahu u know...and I have proof Ki marey Hua log zinda nahi hote
Nandini: So..tum ne dekha..yes manan Manik ka beta hai
Cabir: What!!
Nandini: Asa reaction kyu de rahe Ho...
Cabir: Main tumhe sirf tease kar raha tha...and I saw ur friend...btw sab Kaise ..kab ..aur Manik ko Kaise kuch pata nahi ...wait I'll call him
Nandini:cabir ..plzz no...u not tell Manik abt this
Cabir:par kyu..u r his life and manan uska beta and he doesn't even know..
Nandini: Cabir I m scared
Cabir: Manik..se
Nandini: Uske gussey se..
Cabir : Voh...be clear
Nandini: When I got the news that I am pregnant...main daar Gaye the...I thought of informing Manik first mainey ussey call liye aur msg bhi us ne ek ka bhi reply nahi kiya...and top of that ussey msg padha ...i got seen mark...and he didn't even bothered...main ne decide kiya I'll abort but sujata and Samarth said...and manan was..and my life changed...aur uss din tum aachanak aagaye...aur Manik didn't have any idea about manan...i was shocked and lied.. Agar useey ab batane jau toh he will take manan away from me...
Cabir: Manik ka kya...uske life...uske family
Nandini: Manik ko manan ke barey Mai kuch nahi pata so..forget it...and promise me u will not tell anyone about it...
Cabir: Fine ...vasey yeh fireworks kab hue...(teasing her)
Nandini: Voh fc ke baad ...
Cabir: Tabhi toh main sochu...(she hits him...shut up)
Nandini: Tum ghar ja raheo...i mean dhrubv ke ghar..
Cabir: Ha..kyu
Nandini: Drop me too..manan ko saath lekar Ana hai...manik mere gaadi leke Gaya that's why...

And they leave


Saxena villa
Dhruv : Kya decide kiya...
Manik: Ya u have to help me...mere aur Nandini ke vajh se tum sab Ki stories hue hai...now payback time
(cabir and Nandini enter..but goes to check manan)
Cabir: So what's up??(yaar mera Kaise chupau yeh sach..it's killing me...agar mey usey Bata nahi sakta..but hint toh de sakta..(and we know if Manik has doubt he goes to any limit to clear it)
I got an idea lets go on a trip
Mukti: Tu pagal hai. ...main aur iss halat main(showing her tummy)
Alya: I m wid cabir..we'll get free time and Manik and Nandini will get space
Dhruv: She's right!!(and kiss her forehead)
Mukti: Tu toh chup bahte...dinbar alya ke saath he reh..
Abhi: Ya...but cabir us right(mukti gives a angry look)
Cabir: Vasey bhi Hum Manik ke farm house ja rahe hai...
Manik: Fine...par
Everyone in unison: Now what???
Navya: Nandini ko kon patayaga...right
Manik: Thanks madhubala...
Kavya: Mom what's going on???
Cabir: Kuch nahi..baby..pic nic Ki baat Ho rahe hai
Mukti: Ja Manik Nandini se baat kar
Dhruv: Voh nahi manyege..agar tu Gaya toh
Kavya: Main jate Hu...Nandini aunty se baat karne...
Cabir: Voh kyu??
Kavya: Because dadaa (pull his cheeks) voh mere bf Ki mom hai so
Cabir:(spits out water he is drinking) bf...(and look towards Manik)
Kavya: Manan..my best friend
Navya: Okay fine..jao..
Mukti: Tera daamad mil Gaya cabir..congrats...aur Kavya ka saasur Manik hai ..wow
Cabir:what?? Manan Manik ka beta
Mukti: I mean after their patch up ..manan Manik ka beta Hua na...
And everyone laughs (Kavya holding Nandini and manan's hand)
(Manik hits him with his elbow...and shows him Kavya holding manan's hand)
Cabir: No!!
Manik: Chill cabir(controlling his laughter)
Nandini: So kaha Jana hai...
Navya: Manik ke farmhouse par...
Nandini: Fine..(looking at Kavya..) ab Kavya wants manan to be there toh main aur manan bhi ayeyge
And everyone 's happy
Nandini: Main chalte Hua..bye !!(and they leave and Kavya says bye to manan...(which irritates cabir)
Cabir: Baby..manan Gaya
Abhi: Abhi se saas ke saath bonding..wow
Cabir pov
Manan ke sath mere bete no...impossible that little monster..
Manik tera beta...(he remembers their first encounter)..god...kavya baby ..why not Sameer
Pov end
Kavya: Dad u said something
Cabir : No...
Kavya: Sameer!!

Precap: Manik and Nandini sitting together..she sleeps on his shoulder and camp fire
Hope u enjoyed it...
Thanks ANJITHA_232
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
finally..
loved it..
eagerly waiting manik to know the secrets..
lovrd the sas bahu wala thing
plz cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
He slept with her and than left her, broke all the promises and nandu is scared, she should be pissed
How can she be sure that he wont leave her AGAIN and again? Now she has her son to consider

Manik doesnt seem to be really understanding what he did, he doesn't really seem remorsefull

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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
It was awesome
Is history is going to repeat
Manik- nandini-dhruv
And now
Manan-kavya-sameer
Is destiny playing with them
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Cabir said Kavya why not Sameer :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Its so nyc...i wait for ur update actually...great work...please pm me next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Wow...
Amzing one...Loved Cabi a lot..<3
update soon and thanks for PM..

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