**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 12

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Manik & manan bonding iz awsum
Plzzz cabir spill d beans r giv sme hints 2 manik abt manan being hiz son
Family selfie manik nandini & manan
Lovely it iz
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Part 6c
Next morning,
Manan and Sameer and all the boys were enjoying in swimming pool...
Actually manan was just sitting lying his legs in water...and ladies watching them and having gossips
Sameer sitting beside
Sameer: Manan jab hum Mumbai jayegena ...we'll go to Manik chachu's house unke pass bohut baadawala pool hai..bigger than me also...
Manan: Seriously..
Sameer: The Malhotra mansion...
(Manik comes towards them)
Manik: Wats up..I heard Malhotra mansion
Sameer:yes u heard it...hum apke ghar iss trip ke baad ayege..
Manik: Why...
Manan: For ur pool..swimming..a question why it's called mansion
Sameer: Because it is...
Manan: Then Manik is...king of it..soon u ll have queen and a prince ...
(Manik looks at Nandini)
Manik: Chali lets swim...(Sameer jumps in)
Manan: I can't swim...
Manik: What??? Come I'll teach u...
Holding his hand manan enters water..
Manik: Just let go ur fear...calm down...
Manan:Vo...(panting...)
Manik : Catch hold this (holding a wall beside) and now try to float..
Manan: Okay..phew..(sigh) (and slow his floating..but he looses he control and removes his hands from support) shit...(and is abt to drown and Manik catches him)
Manik: Hey dude..not so fast...(his shivering) calm down...agar nahi Ho raha toh leave it..it's fine..
Manan: No!! I'll try..jab tak main nahi kar leta..
Manik: Okay..now try to kick water..and wave ur hands like this...
(manan follows his instructions and now can swim properly)
All ladies inside..gossiping
Manan shouting: Mom!! Mom!!
Nandini: Manan..
Alya: Why his shouting? Lets go guys..(and they run out)

Outside
Manan: Mom see I can swim
Nandini: R u mad..manan tum ne mere Jaan he nikala de..
(and her eyes fall on Manik whose shirtless..and they have eyelock)
Nandini: Calm down(to herself and breaks eyelock) he still looks...stop it
Manan get out now...chalo
Mukti : And u all too..
All come out
Manik: Buddy...tuj se kuch baat karne hai..
Dhruv: Bol na
Manik: Tuney ball purposely chodi..ya u missed it..
Dhruv: Tujhe kya lagta hai...
Manik: Purposefully
Dhruv: Yes..kyuki..manan is ur hope aur tum dono ke new relation keliye it was imp..chal ab..


Afternoon..
All girls come dressed up and boys are lying lazy in living room
Dhruv: Tum sab kaha ja rahe Ho..
Alya: Yes baby..shopping..
Cabir: Kk..good..aur ha..dhruv Ki baby..plzz bacho ko bhi saath le Jana..
Navya:tumhe yeh baat batna Ni nahi chahiye thi ...jaan
Dhruv: Navya Ki jaan Navya sahi keh rahi hai..(all have a laugh)
Manik is busy in his phone
And nandini is coming downstairs wearing a red simple saree which igives a official look
Manik raises his head and all turn
Abhi: Wow!!
Cabir: Manik mu toh bandh kar..(closing his jaw..which is dropped seeing her)
Nandini: Guys...i can't join u mujhe kuch kaam hai so I have conference call I have to attend..so...sry
Cabir: So tum Mumbai laut rahi Ho..
Nandini: No..I'll access from here..bye

It's more than 3hrs all girls left
Abhi: Mujhe bhok lag rahe hai
Dhruv: Alya kab ayege...
Cabir: Alya..khana baneyge..(and laughs)
Manik: Shut up cabir..lets go out
Abhi: Par Nandini...
She comes downstairs
Nandini: Bhok lage hai...
All them nod their heads...
Nandini:main kuch banate Hu..
Dhruv: U r our saviour now
Nandini is cooking
She puts cooker on gas and stands make back to it ...and as the whistle blow's she gets burns due hot vapour
Nanndini: Ahhh(shouts)
All of them come running
Manik:r u fine
Nandini: Ya..woh mey BAs busy thi aur aachnak aeethi bachi to I got scared
Cabir: U scared us...chalo(and leave but Manik comes to know theirs something wrong)
Nandini goes upstairs and Manik slowly too sneek out
He opens the door and finds she trying to apply ointment
Manik: I'll help u..
Nandini:no thanks..I'll manage
Manik:stop it(and takes ointment from her hand)
Nandini: Do mujhe...
Manik: Nandini(gives her angry glare to which she sits quiet)
He slowly removes her hairs from back..she closes her eyes..and he removes her dori of blouse
Nandini:Manik..(breathing heavily)
And they look at mirror who shows their reflection
He applies ointment
Nandini: (controlling herself) thanks
And Manik is abt to walk off and he turns and sees she is trying hard to tie her dori
He walks towards her and place his hand on her assuring her that I'll do it with his eyes she leaves her hand and he ties it at same time her back hits his chest and she can feesl his breath on her shoulder as leans down..breaking the trance
Nandini: U r hungry na...everyone is waiting
And they leave and girls reach at night
Cabir: Navya..time kya Hua where were u?
Dhruv: Tumey humare parva he kahi hai
Abhi : I missed ...my baby Mukti..
Alya: Arey this Mukti wanted to see movie so late hoga...

Precap: Everyone in Mukti 's room..and manan calls Manik dad
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