MaNan : Love Birds (updated part 38 pg40)

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

loved both the updates

very nicely written

cont soon

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Sharmilaraparla

@Sharmilaraparla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: macy99

Chapter 7

They reach were everyone is sitting i.e the pool side.

Cabir teasingly : nice dress nandini .

everyone laughs.

Nandini joins the girls and Manik joins the boys.

Girls :

Mukti : Nandini you remember we were going for dance classes last summer.

Nandini : ya!

Alya : ya dance class was fun!

Mukti : so let's do something new.

Nandini : like what?

Mukti : let's dance and show boys what girls can do.

Nandini : yeah let's have some fun!

Alya : let me go get that song till then you announce here.

Alya goes. nandini and Mukti goes to boys and says.

Nandini : what yaar Cabir see Teri gf KO bore ho raha hai so let's have some fun.

Mukti : yeah!

Cabir and Manik are shocked : but what?

Mukti : we girls have some item number to perform. You guys might get shocked after seeing it.

Manik : no no Mukti we will love to see you gals dance.

Nandu and Mukti smiles.

Mukti to navya : hope u'll like it and enjoy.

Navya smiles : I will.

Nandini : Manik do take the video I will like to send it to abhi.

Manik's starts to take the video.

The gals take their positions. Nandu in the center and Mukti and Alya are on each side of nandu.

They start and its the song...

Chittiyaan Kalaiyaan...

(The song starts)

Kalaiyaan... Kalaiyaan...

(The gals start dancing and that to hip hop + bollywood style dance)

Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke..
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke (x3)

(Cabir and Manik are shocked to see the girls dance like this , but they enjoy)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho..) (x2)

(Manik wants to go and tell nandu that she is dancing just like a doll)

Yeah
You're my darling angel baby
White kalaiyan drives me crazy
Shiney eyes say glitt glitt glittery
You're the light that makes me go hazy (x2)

(Nandini's eyes are on Manik smiling and dancing in happiness and she starts to imagine Manik around her dancing with her)

Oh mainu chadhiya hai rang rang
Main khwabaan de sang sang aaj ud'di phiran

Main saari raat ud'di phiran

Oh badle jindadi de rang dhang
Meri neendein bhi tang tang, aaj ud'di phiran

Main saari raat ud'di phiran

(She comes out of her dreams and smiles)

Mann jaa ve... gulabi chunni diva de

Mann jaa ve... colourful chudi pavaa de

Requestaan paayiaan ve..
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho)

Ghumde phirde saare chitiyaan milgiyan
Chittiyaan kalaaiyan ve (kalaaiyan ve..)
Tere hathaan nu chumda rehnda
Kam tu lai laiyaan, oh chittiyaan ve
(oh chittiyaan ve!)

(Suddenly Cabir notices the mark left by Manik on nandini's neck and gets rest less but ignores it)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho)

(the song ends And Manik Cabir and dhruv are left with open mouths)

The dance ends and the girls come to the boys and close their mouths.

All gals laugh and the boys starts praising them.

Manik : that was , that was...

Mukti : chuk chuk chuk...bechara Manik uska much khula ka khula reh gaya he isn't able to speak.

Manik then finally co.es out of the gaze and speeks.

Manik looking at Nandini : that was just sexy...

Cabir : ya it was.

Nandini : okay it was all fun n now I have to go home

Alya : so soon?

Cabir : yaa Nandini its just 12:00 am

Nandini : I know guys but kal its ugadi n like always you have to come t mah home for the rituals.

Everyone : cool.

Cabir : we will be there and if you need any help let us know.

Nandini : ya sure I will.

Cabir : guys so we will end the party kal Jana hai na .

Mukti : ya sure let's leave.

Cabir : Manik Tu nandu KO jaate jaate ghar chod de I will drop navya n Mukti Aur Alya KO dhruv drop ker dega.

Manik : Okay let's go nandu (they leave).

Manik and nandini are near the car.

Nandini : Manik today I want to drive.

Manik : Are you sure? I mean just look at your clothes it won't be comfortable for to drive I'm that shirt.

Nandini : Manik its not the first time I'm wearing something like this so don't worry.

Manik : fine as you wish.

Nandini : good boy.

Manik smiles . they get I to the car Nandini drives and Manik just keeps looking at her.

Nandini : Manik you know that you can stop staring at me and speak.

Manik : beautiful.

Nandu blushes

Manik just can't resist her seeing blushing.

Manik : stop the car!

Nandini shocked : why?

Manik : just stop na!

Nandu : okay!

She stops the car and looks at Manik confusedly.

Manik : goes near her happy new year nandu!

Nandini smiles and gives a peck on his lips.

Nandini softly : come closer.

Manik comes near her and nandini gives him her mark by give a love bite to him in his neck.

Manik smiles and pecks on her lips.

Nandini : let's go I'm tired.

Manik : sure chalo.

They drive to nandini's house.

Nandini : can you stay with me to night?

Manik gets happy but remember that he has something improtant plan to fulfill.

Manik : no Nandini I can't I have to know about my dad's hotel and everything. But I promise I will come early in the morning to help you.

nandu is sad but she knows how much Manik loves his dad and agrees with him.

Nandu : okay.

Manik pecks on her lips : bye. Nighty-night

Nandu : bye nighty-night.

Please update me guys and tell me if you like onlymanan romance or should I post cavya's romance too?

Sleep tight nighty-night😉

And happy new year to all the south Indians (ugadi)😃
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Sharmilaraparla

@Sharmilaraparla

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Story is awesome... Happy ugadi to everyone...

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Tanvi

@manan58

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome story.. Yar cont soon.. I to love manan romance only😆😃

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

part 5 6 and 7 was awsome...loved it...manan awww so cute and am loving this romance...would love to read more abt navya and cabir...
pls continue soon dear...

thanks a lot for the new year wish dear. and same to you...😊
.. am also a south Indian...😉 ( Kerala )

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: aavani
part 5 6 and 7 was awsome...loved it...manan awww so cute and am loving this romance...would love to read more abt navya and cabir...
pls continue soon dear...

thanks a lot for the new year wish dear. and same to you...😊
.. am also a south Indian...😉 ( Kerala )

Thanks for the comment aavani

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Madhvi Bhatt

@macy99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Chapter 8

Nandini enters her house. It's dark and she suddenly hears a female voice.

Lady : you are so late!

Nandini : maid is that you?

Lady : why are you so late?

Nandini switches on the lights and sees her mom sitting on the sofa.

Nandini happily : maa. (She runs to her mom and hugs her. Mrs. Murthy hugs her back)

Nandini : maa I thought you won't be able make yourself come here. Thank you mom.

Mrs. Murthy : how can I miss my ugadi with you. So I had to come.

Nandini : happy new year maa.

Mrs. Murthy : happy new year beta.

Nandini : let's go to my room and talk c'mon.

Mrs. Murthy : no beta its late night and we have to wake up early so we will talk in the morning. Okay?

Nandini : okay maa bye good night.

Mrs. Murthy : good night beta.

Nandini goes to her room. She then thinks of telling Manik about her mom's arrival or else Manik will be home in the morning and can get caught by her mom.

Nandini calls Manik.

Manik : missing me already ?

Nandini : yea. But wanted to tell you that my mom is here for ugadi so you don't come early in the morning. Cause she might get doubt okay?

Manik : okay. But tell me how is she?

Nandini : she is fine was just waiting to meet me now she went to sleep she is tired because of the travelling .

Manik : that's good.

Nandini : okay Manik even I'm feeling sleepy so bye gn.

Manik smiles : bye gn.

Next day early in the morning.

Nandini gets up hearing her mom.

Her mom being a cassical singer was doing reehaz of her music.

Nandini smiles after hearing her mom singing after so time.

Nandini gets a bath and gets ready in traditional and comes down.

She sees everything already prepared and ready for pooja.

She goes and hugs her mom.

Nandini : good morning mom.

Mr. Murthy : good morning beta.

Nandini : how are you?

Mr. Murthy : I'm fine how are you?

Nandini : if you are here I'm more than fine.

And mom did you go to see rishab ?

Mrs. Murthy : ya I visited him he is fine and recovering he started to talk and interact with new people.

Nandini : that's great mom (she hugs her mom)

And both Nandini and Mrs. Murthy hear Manik.

Manik : that's just great that rishab is recovering.

Nandini and Mrs. Murthy turns to see him.

They see Manik standing there with the rest of fab5 and navya.

Cabir comes first and hugs Mrs.murthy and wishesh her happy new year.

Then comes Manik and the rest.

(Mrs. Murthy trusts Cabir a lot for looking after nandu and Cabir thinks of her as she is his mom. Mrs. Murthy is a cool mom she never judges the fab 5 and is friendly with them)

Then Manik comes to Nandini and hugs her as if wishing her new year.

(Mrs. Murthy notices it but ignores as she has saw Manik hug Nandini before)

The pooja starts they all sit but Nandini getting bored looks at Manik. Manik is already looking at her and she feels shy and looks down then she again turns and doesn't see Manik there. As soon as she hears the pandit say "pooja sampan Hui" she runs to her room looking for Manik she enters the room and hears the door get locked.

She turns and sees Manik with a gift rapped box in his hand.

She runs to him to hug him but Manik stops her

Manik : open it!

Nandu : okay

She takes the box and starts to open it.

She sees the same dress which Manik ruined last night as it was a best gift of Nandini from rishab she gets happy and hugs Manik

Nandini : how did you manage to do this?

Manik : I took you photo last night in that dress remember?

Nandini : haan.

Manik : I passed the pick to my friend dress designer and told him to stitch a same dress as that one and here it is in front of you.

Nandini hugs him tight

Nandini: thanks manik. I thought that I lost that dress. (Tears flow from her eyes)