MaNan : Love Birds (updated part 38 pg40)

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Just trying it for the first time..
I have read many FF of MANAN n really wanted to right mah own FF ...
So let's start

It's just introduction..

Nandini : she is not so interested in love She is all nautanki. She likes to party hard.
Manik and nandini are of one group but nandini is not a part of fab 5. Nandini is alya n mukti's best buddy. The only guy nandini is close to and it was dhruv who was manik's buddy. Nandini some how knows about dhruv's attacks and that is why she is concern to him as because if that attacks her brother rishab is in US for treatment away from nandini. Nandini has only her mother. Her mother is a classical singer and is one of the best known artist of India.

Manik : handsome hunk of the college. Every girl in the college wants to be his girl friend but there is only one girl manik admired and it was nun other than nandini murthi. But manik has a confusion that nandini loves dhruv. He just has a rich father who is the trustee of the college. And manik is very much attached to his father.

Cabir : He is not gay. He always likes navya. Nandini n cabir are always there for each other as brother sister. Cabir always is overprotective for nandini. Cabir lives with his mother as his father died a long back. He even has a twin brother ranbir who lives in USA and has one of the best music company.

Mukti : she is the H.G. of the college. As her responsibility she is the one who checks on all the girls of the college. But she is not at all interested in this H.G. post. She is also afraid of commitments. She is not attached to her mom or dad she only likes to be with fab 5 and nandu.

Dhruv : He is kind of cool guy. He likes Alya but alya is always nuts on him but only as friend. Dhruv is fashionable and son of a business man.

Alya: one of the most beautiful girl of the college and also miss 2014 of the college. She has no family left her mom and dad died and left her lots of money but no family.

Abhi : he is nandini's saviour when ever nandini needs help or is in an emergency she always calls abhi. Abhi always wants to get close to mukti. Even multi wants to get close to him but every time they try something goes wrong or mukti freaks out. Abhi has no family and lives alone.

Navya : she is sweet,simple but still a fashionista and is a new friend of nandini. Navya is a daughter of a dress designer. Her mom and dad lives in Delhi.

If needed more intro will add in stories.

Hope you guys like my story and if you need a new change comment below will try to add a change! 😛

Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page 2
Chapter 3 - page 3
Chapter 4 - page 4
Chapter 5 - page 5
Chapter 6 - page 5
Chapter 7 - page 6
Chapter 8 - page 7
Chapter 9 - page 8
Chapter 10 - page 9
Chapter 11 - page 10
Chapter 12 - page 10
Chapter 13 - page 11
Chapter 14 - page 13
Chapter 15 - page 14
Chapter 16 - page 15
Chapter 17 - page 16
Chapter 18 - page 17
Chapter 19 - page 18
Chapter 20 - page 19
Chapter 21 - page 21
Chapter 22 - page 22
Chapter 23 - page 23
Chapter 24 - page 24
Chapter 25 - page 25
Chapter 26 - page 26
Chapter 27 - page 27
Chapter 28 - page 28
Chapter 29 - page 29
Chapter 30 - page 30
Chapter 31 - page 32
Chapter 32 - page 33
Chapter 33 - page 33
Chapter 34 - page 34
Chapter 35 - page 35
Chapter 36 - page 37
Chapter 37 - page 39
Chapter 38 - page 40
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cont soon dear seems interesting if possible pm me whenever u update
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Just trying it for the first time..
I have read many FF of MANAN n really wanted to right mah own FF ...
So let's start

It's just introduction..

Nandini : she is not so interested in love She is all nautanki. She likes to party hard.
Manik and nandini are of one group but nandini is not a part of fab 5. Nandini is alya n mukti's best buddy. The only guy nandini is close to and it was dhruv who was manik's buddy. Nandini some how knows about dhruv's attacks and that is why she is concern to him as because if that attacks her brother rishab is in US for treatment away from nandini. Nandini has only her mother. Her mother is a classical singer and is one of the best known artist of India.

Manik : handsome hunk of the college. Every girl in the college wants to be his girl friend but there is only one girl manik admired and it was nun other than nandini murthi. But manik has a confusion that nandini loves dhruv. He just has a rich father who is the trustee of the college. And manik is very much attached to his father.

Cabir : He is not gay. He always likes navya. Nandini n cabir are always there for each other as brother sister. Cabir always is overprotective for nandini. Cabir lives with his mother as his father died a long back. He even has a twin brother ranbir who lives in USA and has one of the best music company.

Mukti : she is the H.G. of the college. As her responsibility she is the one who checks on all the girls of the college. But she is not at all interested in this H.G. post. She is also afraid of commitments. She is not attached to her mom or dad she only likes to be with fab 5 and nandu.

Dhruv : He is kind of cool guy. He likes Alya but alya is always nuts on him but only as friend. Dhruv is fashionable and son of a business man.

Alya: one of the most beautiful girl of the college and also miss 2014 of the college. She has no family left her mom and dad died and left her lots of money but no family.

Abhi : he is nandini's saviour when ever nandini needs help or is in an emergency she always calls abhi. Abhi always wants to get close to mukti. Even multi wants to get close to him but every time they try something goes wrong or mukti freaks out. Abhi has no family and lives alone.

Navya : she is sweet,simple but still a fashionista and is a new friend of nandini. Navya is a daughter of a dress designer. Her mom and dad lives in Delhi.

If needed more intro will add in stories.

Hope you guys like my story and if you need a hange comment below will try to add a change! 😛
Got a problem guys as I'm new I don't know how to post the continue of this I that is chapter 1
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Chapter 1

Everyone is in the college enjoying like they daily enjoy

Cabir to the whole group : kya yaar roz roz hum aise hi kerte hai aaj kuch naya kerte hai..

Nandu : u know what Cabir you are right let's do something new..

Cabir : per kya?

Nandu : I have an idea aaj college me koi na koi naya toh zarur ayega right?

Cabir : haan toh?

Everyone is listening to nandu.

Nandu : Toh aaj let's make a new friend.

Everyone confused.
Everyone at once : what?

Nandu : aaj let's do a scene of main hoon na as Cabir told ki he wants to do something new toh voh hi karega. Hai na cabir?

Cabir: meri maa Tu kya marvana chahti hai?

Nandu : stop being a baby Cabir be sportive.

Cabir : chal Tu kehti hai toh let's start. So tell me nandu what do I have to do.

Nandu : chalo guys let's go out side and have some fun

Cabir : per bol toh sahi kya kerna hai.

Nandu: bahar chal bolti hoon

Everyone goes outside.

Manik to Cabir : aaj tuje maza aane wala hai.

Cabir to manik: dost hai ki dushman Dara Matt!

Manik laughs

Nandu : so Cabir abhi vaha gate k pass se Jo bhi ladki pehle andar ayengi u have to sing a song for her.

Cabir shocked: are u crazy voh ladki agar muje mardegi to Marne k baad meri atma tuje nhi chodegi nandu.

All laugh

Manik : Cabir a girl is coming here!

Nandu : all the best Cabir.

Manik to nandini : aaj toh tumne iss Cabir KO achha phasaya!

Nandu laughing: haha maza ayega!

Alya : let's hide and see Cabir getting a slap!

Everyone laughs and hide behind a car.

Cabir looking at the girl thinking that she is so beautiful and then he sings a song that he had written years ago for his girlfriend in school!

Cabir singing : You, you like driving on a Sunday
You, you like taking off on Monday
You, you're like a dream, a dream come true

(Girl shocked : are u singing for me?)

Cabir (nodding his head in yes continues singing) : I was just a face you never notice
Now I'm just trying to be honest
With myself, with you, with the world

(Girl impressed with his voice and song keeps smiling at him)

Cabir more happily sings : You might think that I'm a fool
For falling over you
So tell me what I can do to prove to you
That it's not so hard to do?

And your eyes, when I saw 'em for the first time
Knew that I was gonna love you for a long time
With a love so real, so right

Well, you might think that I'm a fool
For falling over you
So tell me what I can do to prove to you
That it's not so hard to do?
Give love a try one more time..! (Song ends)

Everyone after seeing the whole seen were shocked and were with open mouths!

Nandini to manik : I didn't knew ki yeh ek hi baar me ladki KO patta lega

Manik (still in a shock) : muje bhi!

Mukti : I think ki Cabir us ladki pe flat ho gaya hai that's why he used his own lyrics!

Cabir to the girl : ohh sorry for wasting..

Girl cuts his sentence : wow you are really good at singing and I just loved the way you sing so maybe we can have coffee later on now I have to go for some college formalities see you later bye...!

Cabir (all blushing and happy) : bye

Everyone comes to Cabir

Nandu : wow Cabir Tu toh masstt nikla. I thought ki Tu kuch ajeeb sa song gayega !

Manik : by the way Cabir who was she uska naam toh bola hoga na usne ?

Cabir still waving to that girl in pleasure..
Suddenly gets that he didn't ask her what was her name !

Nandu : Cabir are u even listing to us !

Cabir : I just forgot to ask her that what was her name !!

Manik: happy realization!

Cabir : gtg will meet u at your house. Aaj raat party at manik's house bye!

Everyone laughing : bye!

Got it how to post now will post chapter 2 soon 😛
Till then share you views comment plz! 😳

Chapter 2 - page 2
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Tht girl must b navya..
Super 😛
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Wonderful story line seems very interesting
Can u plz pm me fr the next update 😃
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awsome start...loved it...pls continue soon...take care...😊
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Chapter 2


At night

Nandini is the first to come at manik's house. Manik welcomes nandini. They both sit and as usual nandini starts to drink.

Manik : nandini if u drink like this sab k aane se pehle only u will sleep here unconscious.

Nandini : don't worry I won't.

Manik : oh really u always say (in a girly voice) i wont ! (Again in his actual voice) But u actually always drink a lot.

Nandini : did u just make my fun? (In a angry voice she runs towards him) you (because of the carpet she falls on him)

They have a eyelock and Manik thinks that how beautiful she is. While nandu tries to stand up but was not able to as she had drunk a lot of alcohol.

Manik : let me help you!

He first keeps her a side and stands up and lifts her up and keeps her on the sofa still looking at her like a Romeo.

Cabir just enters with the girl he hand sung a song for.

Cabir : Manik Tu usse itna pyaar kerta hai toh why don't u tell her.

Manik (still looking at nandini) : what ?

Cabir : Zara uspe se nazar hata Aur yaha dekh toh pata chalega what !

Manik breaks his sight and turns around and sees Cabir with the new girl.

Manik goes to him

Cabir : Tu usko bolta kyu nhi that u love her!

Manik (changes the topic and asks Cabir) : muje teri nai friend se introduce nhi karvayega?

Cabir : wait let all of the come fir I'll give everyone her intro.

Till then dhruv comes he sees nandini sleeping on the sofa and says

Dhruv : I'll go and keep her in the guest room haha usko disturb hoga sone me.

Manik with sad face : okay

He keeps on looking up and waits for dhruv to come down as soon as he sees dhruv he gives a relief smile.

Everyone comes.

Cabir : so bhai log meet NAVYA. She is from Delhi and she is here to join space

Nayva : hi everyone

Everyone says hi to her

Dhruv : so navya what's your speciality. Space join ker rahi ho any dreams?

Navya : yea I like to sing solo. Dehli me every year I used to take part in competitions . so I got to know k space is a big name and I can make my name through space!

Dhruv : that's nice!

Manik : that's true navya u can make a big name through space.

Mukti to navya : I'm impressed !

Navya smiles

It's hours they are talking.

Manik : guys you all must be hungry so let's have dinner.

Alya : ya I'm really hungry. Let's go to the dining room.

Manik to everyone : you guys go I'll try to wake nandu up and bring her there.

Cabir whispers to Manik : haan chance marle .

Manik gives Cabir a not so funny look .

Everyone goes to the dining room

Manik goes to the guest room to bring nandini down as she was asleep in the room.Manik enters the room and sees nandini sleeping on the bed like a baby.
He whispers to himself that how beautiful she is and how lovely she looks in her shorts and top which she was wearing right now.

Manik went toward her and moved the thin strip of her hair which on her face.

Manik thinking : control yourself.

He then tries to wake nandini up but she catches his hand and hugs it as if it's her teddy bear and turns towards him.
Manik smiles and speaks out her name loud so that it wakes her up.

Nandini wakes up and sees that she has rapped her self around his hand. She leaves his hand.

Nandini : why did you wake me up ?

Manik : let's go down everyone is waiting for u at the table for dinner.

Nandini : OK u go I will be down in 2 mins

Manik moves out of the room and again remembers the whole scene that just had happened with him. He miles and goes down.

Nandini in the room just thinking of what just happens she blushes and goes down

Both Manik and nandu looks at each other and smile

They enter the dining room and sit.

Cabir : so finally you both are here!

Manik stares at Cabir and Cabir gives a winky smile

Nandini notices navya n smiles at her Cabir notices that and introduces navya to nandini and nandini to navya

Navya and nandini say hi to each other.

Manik : common let's start I'm really hungry.

Both nandini and Manik look at the salad plate in front of them and both at a time goes to pick the cucumber accidently they touch each others hand and both blushing look at each other they both move their hands.

Manik was talking to navya and nandini was continuously looking at him she was thinking how beautiful his smile is and how come she never noticed it before. Cabir notices nandu continuously smiling at Manik and laughs silently.

Manik turns and sees nandu smiling at him to break her sight he waves his hand before her face. Nandini realizes what she was doing and looks down in her plate and starts acting as if she was eating.

Everyone is done with the dinner and they go out in the hall and again start drinking.

They talk about each other and college to navya as she is new.

Nandu is still observing and smiling at Manik.

They all get a lot drunk n fall asleep in the hall.

Enjoy and comment your thoughts now tomorrow I'm gonna post.. Till then buhbyee 😛😉
Nighty-night


Chapter 3 - page 3
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oho so nandu drinks...hmmm😉

awsome part loved it...pls continue soon dear...take care😊
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Aww.. Manan r feelin fr each othr..
Cabira the Cupid..
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