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wow awsm updates
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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its interesting..continue soon😃
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Just typing chapter 5 will post it soon... 😉
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Originally posted by: macy99

Just typing chapter 5 will post it soon... 😉



will wait...😉
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Chapter 5

It was already evening.
Nandini and Manik were still sleeping. Suddenly manik's phone rang. They got up looked at each other and nandini started blushing. Manik got up straight and picked up a call which was from his dad

Manik : hello.

Mr. Malhotra : hello manik.

Manik : Dad it's you.

Mr. Malhotra : ya it's me. How are you beta?

Manik : I'm fine dad how are you?

Mr. Malhotra : I'm okay. Right now I am in town so thought of calling you.

Manik happily : really dad that's great I'm just coming home.

Mr. Malhotra : no Manik I'm not at home..

Manik : okay you are at airport then I'm coming to pick u up.

Mr. Malhotra : no Manik I'm in palace hotel And if you are free tomorrow noon let's have lunch in the hotel. Cause I wont be able to come home this time.

Manik sadly : ya sure dad why not.

Mr. Malhotra : fine beta now I have to go for a meeting bye!

Manik : bye.

Nandu was listening to his conversation. She got sad seeing him like this.

she got a call. It was Cabir.nandu picks the call.

Cabir : hello nandu.

Nandu : hello Cabir say what's up?

Cabir : nothing just was calling Manik to invite him for the party but uska phone nhi lag rah tha. So called you.

Nandini : ya he is talking to someone on his phone.

Cabir : how do u know?

Nandini realized what she just said.

Nandini : voh...

Cabir : voh kya?

Nandini : voh abhi yahi that you know for the practice (she gives a relief sigh) so when he was going out I saw him talking in the phone. Haan so that is why I know.

Cabir : okay chill hyper kyu ho rahi hai!

Nandini : hyper mein? Nhi toh bilkul nhi.

Cabir : okay so you be at my home by 7 pm okay?

Nandini : ya sure Cabir.

Manik laughs seeing Nandini talking to Cabir that way.

Nandini stares at him.

Nandini : okay Cabir I'll be there bye (she stares angrily at Manik) I have some work to do.

Cabir : bye.

She cuts the call.

Nandini : Manik you are so mean! You were making fun of me!

Manik again laughs!

Nandini moves towards him : you..!

Manik still stands there as soon as Nandini comes near him he pulls her towards him.
Nandini bangs into his chest. They share a eye lock. And nandini breaks it and sees down to the ground. Manik lifts her face up. So that they can see into each others eyes.
Manik bends down to kiss her and Manik's phone starts ringing! Manik gives a angry sigh and lifts the phone.

It's Cabir

Manik : hello.

Cabir : hello Manik.

Manik : what yaar Cabir u must have called one minute later.

Nandini laughs silently.

Cabir : sorry to disturb you but you have to come to my house at 7 okay?

Manik : ya bye I have some work to do.

Cabir : okay bye

Manik sees Nandini laughing.

Manik : so now u r making fun of me.

Nandini : no ! (Still laughs)

Manik (grabs nandini's waist and pulls her towards himself) : so were wore we?

Nandini smiles.

She lifts her face up And pecks on manik's lips.

Manik gets turned on and her again grabs her waist tight and gives her a deep passionate kiss. Nandini kisses him back with same passion.

They go out of breath and break their kiss.

Manik's and nandini smile and hug each other as if they are made for each other.

Nandini and Manik together take each others name and break their hug and look at each other and smile.

Manik : let's go it's already 7.

Nandini blushing : ya I need to freshen up!

Manik ya even I want to but u go first.

Nandini smiles.

She goes in the bathroom.

Manik tries hard to stay out but can't resist to go in. He enters the bathroom and sees nandu standing in front of mirror smiling and lost in her thoughts. Thinking about her kiss with Manik.

Manik hugs her from behind.

Nandu : Manik what are you doing here?

Manik : I tried to stay out but I was out of control so came in.

Nandini blushes. she takes him to her wardrobe.

Manik : why did you bring me here?

Nandini : choose one dress for me.

Manik sees and chooses a one piece dress which Nandini was wearing when he first started having feelings for her.

Nandini smiles and tells him to go out.

She wears the dress and comes out.

Manik just keeps looking at her and goes near her and tells her to close her eyes. Nandu closes her eyes and Manik gives a love bite to her on the side of her neck. She moans with pleasure and smiles at him. She covers it up with her hair and they leave for cabir's house.

So guys tell me if you like it..😊

And comment your thoughts for this update...😉

Will upload the next part soon..😳

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Wonderful start and nandini is manik's first love superb writing
Plz pm for the next update if you can 😃
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Chapter 6

They reach at cabir's house together they enter looking at each other happily.

Cabir : guys you are late.

Nandini : sorry but , voh actually..

Cabir : voh kya nandu?

Manik (naughtily smiling) : ya tell Nandini voh kya?

Nandini gives an angry look to Manik and continues.

Nandini : voh Manik usne muje call kiya told that he will pick me up but he came late that's why I got late. (Nandini naughtily) Ask Manik why he was late?

Cabir : Manik?

Manik : what.

Cabir : why did you get late?

Manik turns to Nandini and looks at her and give her a 'what the' look. And again turns to Cabir and tells.

Manik : voh main..

Cabir : voh main what?

Manik : I was stuck somewhere. (And he tries to change the topic) aaj suddenly party what's so special?

Cabir (turns to navya and says) : I and navya , we want to share something with all of you.

Navya blushes.

Manik : so tell us , what?

Cabir : so bhai log I and navya we now officially declare our self girlfriend and boyfriend.

Everyone is happily shocked.

Mukti : that's great news Cabir. But how did this happen?

Manik : ya how did you guys reach till gf bf relationship?

Cabir : we are just trying to get our self's suitable for each other.

Nandini : that's great news guys. This calls for a party!

Manik looks at her but he didn't notice him.

Manik tries to stop her but before he can she goes catches the new couple of the group i.e. Cabir and navya and runs to the bar counter.

Manik does not want Nandini to get herself drunk.

Manik messages nandu to not drink a lot but Nandini does not check her phone.

Manik : guys let's go to the pool side as you know summer hai haha garmi ho rahi hai. (He goes towards Nandini and splits the drink on her)

Nandini sadly : Manik tumne meri achhi wali dress kharab ker di.

Manik : sorry Nandini let's me help you. (He turns to everyone and says guys u all carry on I'll help her.

Cabir and Mukti : okay.

Everyone goes out.

Manik turns to talk to Nandini and sees her walking to the room he runs behind her

Manik : Nandini!

Nandini turns with her sad face : what?

Manik : why is your face so down? What happen ?

Nandini : you spoiled mah dress Manik!

Manik : its just a dress. why are you so sad for that?

Nandini : for you it's just a dress but actually it's the dress which rishab gifted me before going to USA.

Manik : oh sorry I didn't know that. Actually wait (he takes out his phone and takes a photo oh her dress)

Nandini : Manik what was that?

Manik : nothing! come I'll help you to clean it.

Nandini angrily : I don't need your help. I know u did it intentionally.

Manik is speechless.

Nandini starts to push him : why did u do it.

Manik sadly starts moving backwards.

Nandini angrily : bolo.

Manik jerks out : cause I didn't wanted u to get drunk.

Nandini : why? So that you can come with me and continue romance?

Manik sadly : no it's not like that. It's just ki tomorrow you south Indians have your new year (ugadi) and as always you have get ready with the preparations of pooja and all.

Nandini : ohh shit! I just forgot that I have to prepare for the pooja! Thanks Manik.
I just forgot about this.

She sees his face , he is sad that she was angry at him.

Nandini with a cute pout on her face : sorry Manik Malhotra , sorry I was wrong!

Manik smiles.

Go get freshen up I'm waiting. she goes.

After some time she comes out. She is wearing a long shirt of Manik which is long enough to reach her knees. Manik then remembers that it is the shirt which he forgot here at the last party. He smiles and they go down.

Hope you guys like it.😊

Plz keep me updated with your thoughts through comments

Chapter 7 - page 6

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Chapter 7

They reach were everyone is sitting i.e the pool side.

Cabir teasingly : nice dress nandini .

everyone laughs.

Nandini joins the girls and Manik joins the boys.

Girls :

Mukti : Nandini you remember we were going for dance classes last summer.

Nandini : ya!

Alya : ya dance class was fun!

Mukti : so let's do something new.

Nandini : like what?

Mukti : let's dance and show boys what girls can do.

Nandini : yeah let's have some fun!

Alya : let me go get that song till then you announce here.

Alya goes. nandini and Mukti goes to boys and says.

Nandini : what yaar Cabir see Teri gf KO bore ho raha hai so let's have some fun.

Mukti : yeah!

Cabir and Manik are shocked : but what?

Mukti : we girls have some item number to perform. You guys might get shocked after seeing it.

Manik : no no Mukti we will love to see you gals dance.

Nandu and Mukti smiles.

Mukti to navya : hope u'll like it and enjoy.

Navya smiles : I will.

Nandini : Manik do take the video I will like to send it to abhi.

Manik's starts to take the video.

The gals take their positions. Nandu in the center and Mukti and Alya are on each side of nandu.

They start and its the song...

Chittiyaan Kalaiyaan...

(The song starts)

Kalaiyaan... Kalaiyaan...

(The gals start dancing and that to hip hop + bollywood style dance)

Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke..
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke (x3)

(Cabir and Manik are shocked to see the girls dance like this , but they enjoy)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho..) (x2)

(Manik wants to go and tell nandu that she is dancing just like a doll)

Yeah
You're my darling angel baby
White kalaiyan drives me crazy
Shiney eyes say glitt glitt glittery
You're the light that makes me go hazy (x2)

(Nandini's eyes are on Manik smiling and dancing in happiness and she starts to imagine Manik around her dancing with her)

Oh mainu chadhiya hai rang rang
Main khwabaan de sang sang aaj ud'di phiran

Main saari raat ud'di phiran

Oh badle jindadi de rang dhang
Meri neendein bhi tang tang, aaj ud'di phiran

Main saari raat ud'di phiran

(She comes out of her dreams and smiles)

Mann jaa ve... gulabi chunni diva de

Mann jaa ve... colourful chudi pavaa de

Requestaan paayiaan ve..
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho)

Ghumde phirde saare chitiyaan milgiyan
Chittiyaan kalaaiyan ve (kalaaiyan ve..)
Tere hathaan nu chumda rehnda
Kam tu lai laiyaan, oh chittiyaan ve
(oh chittiyaan ve!)

(Suddenly Cabir notices the mark left by Manik on nandini's neck and gets rest less but ignores it)

Mann jaa ve... mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve... romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve..

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve (ho..)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve (ok ok!)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve.. (ho)

(the song ends And Manik Cabir and dhruv are left with open mouths)

The dance ends and the girls come to the boys and close their mouths.

All gals laugh and the boys starts praising them.

Manik : that was , that was...

Mukti : chuk chuk chuk...bechara Manik uska much khula ka khula reh gaya he isn't able to speak.

Manik then finally co.es out of the gaze and speeks.

Manik looking at Nandini : that was just sexy...

Cabir : ya it was.

Nandini : okay it was all fun n now I have to go home

Alya : so soon?

Cabir : yaa Nandini its just 12:00 am

Nandini : I know guys but kal its ugadi n like always you have to come t mah home for the rituals.

Everyone : cool.

Cabir : we will be there and if you need any help let us know.

Nandini : ya sure I will.

Cabir : guys so we will end the party kal Jana hai na .

Mukti : ya sure let's leave.

Cabir : Manik Tu nandu KO jaate jaate ghar chod de I will drop navya n Mukti Aur Alya KO dhruv drop ker dega.

Manik : Okay let's go nandu (they leave).

Manik and nandini are near the car.

Nandini : Manik today I want to drive.

Manik : Are you sure? I mean just look at your clothes it won't be comfortable for to drive I'm that shirt.

Nandini : Manik its not the first time I'm wearing something like this so don't worry.

Manik : fine as you wish.

Nandini : good boy.

Manik smiles . they get I to the car Nandini drives and Manik just keeps looking at her.

Nandini : Manik you know that you can stop staring at me and speak.

Manik : beautiful.

Nandu blushes

Manik just can't resist her seeing blushing.

Manik : stop the car!

Nandini shocked : why?

Manik : just stop na!

Nandu : okay!

She stops the car and looks at Manik confusedly.

Manik : goes near her happy new year nandu!

Nandini smiles and gives a peck on his lips.

Nandini softly : come closer.

Manik comes near her and nandini gives him her mark by give a love bite to him in his neck.

Manik smiles and pecks on her lips.

Nandini : let's go I'm tired.

Manik : sure chalo.

They drive to nandini's house.

Nandini : can you stay with me to night?

Manik gets happy but remember that he has something improtant plan to fulfill.

Manik : no Nandini I can't I have to know about my dad's hotel and everything. But I promise I will come early in the morning to help you.

nandu is sad but she knows how much Manik loves his dad and agrees with him.

Nandu : okay.

Manik pecks on her lips : bye. Nighty-night

Nandu : bye nighty-night.

Please update me guys and tell me if you like onlymanan romance or should I post cavya's romance too?

Sleep tight nighty-night 😉

And happy new year to all the south Indians (ugadi) 😃

Chapter 8 - page 7
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Wonderful update
Happy yugadhi (new year)
Thnk so even ur south Indians
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Yeah rithanya even I'm a south Indian😉
And thanks for the lovely comment..😛

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