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Chapter 3



In the morning.

Nandini is the first to wake up. She wakes up and sees that manik's arm is around her belly. She blushes and tries to move his arm. But by fault Manik wakes up he sees that his arm was on her so he suddenly moves his hand in his heart he blushes but gets up and wakes everyone up.

Everyone have their breakfast and go to their houses saying that they will meet at college.

Cabir daily picks up nandini for college even today he picked her up.

Cabir to nandini : so do you wanna talk?

Nandini : talk about what?

Cabir : Manik !

Nandini trying to stop her smile : Manik?

Cabir : I noticed u tomorrow. What's going on with u and Manik.

Nandini still tying to stop her smile : nothing is going on between me and Manik.

Cabir : okay

They reach college and are in the canteen.
Navya comes to the canteen and everyone asks her to join them. Manik enters the canteen and is coming towards them nandini again starts blushing.

Cabir whispers yo Nandini : wow nandini tum kal raat se kitna blush kyu ker rahi ho!

Nandini gives him a angry look

Manik happily : hello guys and gals good morning!

Cabir : kya baat hai Manik u looking very happy subhe subhe kuch hua kya?

Both manik and nandu look at each other like romeo and Juliet

But Cabir interferes and break their sight from each other.

Cabir : javab nhi Dena chal koi nai!

Manik : no nothing like that had a great sleep after a long time so feeling good.

Cabir : achha Aisa hai!

Manik hmm's

Manik again starts to speak : so Cabir kal tune navya k liye Jo song gaya tha that was just awesome you never told us about the song.

Navya : yes Cabir the lyrics were just amazingly beautiful.

Cabir to navya : not more than u.

Navya blushes : thanks for the compliment.

Cabir : I wrote this song during school time its old.

Manik : but its beautiful. (Manik suddenly observes that nandini is looking at him n smiling) you know what Cabir. Let's make a music album on this song. And upload it on YouTube.

Cabir : yea that's a good idea.
Cabir cheers his voice a little up : The official music video of give love a try, staring Manik Malhotra and Nandini Murthi , music by Alya saxena and Mukti vardhan , directed and produced by Dhruv vedant , lyrics by Cabir thakur and dedicated to Navya naveli.

Everyone claps but Manik and nandini are in shock hearing the staring.

But they go with the flow.

Cabir : okay so let's go and practice the song .

So Manik And nandini u guys need to practice and day after tomorrow we go for recording.

Both manik and nandu nods.

They practice and during the practice nandu and Manik again have eye lock.

After the practice they go to nandini's house. Nandini lives in a big mansion and has her own recording studio.

Cabir : guys I think u n Manik need more practice so u both talk to each other n practice whenever u are free.

Manik and nandini look at each other.

They again have a eye lock .

Everyone goes to their houses.

at night nandu is in her bed. She closes her eyes and sees Manik she gets up and is shocked why she is thinking so much of manik.

As usual she thinks of calling abhi but stops as he is in foreign country and he must be at his college. She then thinks of calling Cabir but thinks that Cabir must be busy with navya.

She then thinks of calling Manik for asking about practice she calls

Manik sees that it is nandini so late.

Manik : hello

Nandini : hello Manik

Manik : ya say what's wrong u called me so late at night everything alright?

Nandini : ya everything is fine I called u to know that if u are okay for practicing at my house. As u know kal Sunday hai college nhi hoga.So let's practice at my house what say?

Manik : yea sure sounds great ! I will be there at 10 okay?

Nandini : okay sure 10 is fine. I even want to talk to u about something.

Manik : ya say what?

Nandini : that in the morning...

Both blush

Nandini : u know what Manik let's talk tomorrow. Bye nighty-night.

Manik : bye nighty-night.

Both of them can't stop blushing and are trying to sleep.
But keeps on thinking about each other.
Finally they sleep.🥱

So guys Hope u like it 😊

Comment below 😉

Chapter 4 - page 4

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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mind blowing...so they are doing a music video...wow 😉
eagerly waiting to read more,...pls continue soon dear...take care😊
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Superb..
It ws great.. Cont soon
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Just typing the 4th chapter will post it by night. 😛
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Update fast !!
marvelously written👏👏
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When r u updating ? Waiting !
Fast please!🥳
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CHAPTER 4

In the morning as usual Nandini sleeps till late. It is already 10.
Manik enters into nandini's house the made tells Manik that Nandini is still sleeping up in her room.

Manik goes to her room.

There he sees nandini sleeping like a sweet little baby her long silky hairs open and down. Her blue teddy bear which she always hugs and sleep is in her arms.
Manik smiles and gets up and moves the curtains the bright sunshine falls on her face. Her face glows and she frowns her eyebrows Manik smiles and goes near her.
She opens her eyes and smiles at him

Nandini : good morning.

Manik happily with a big smile on his face : good morning sleeping beauty.chalo get up we will have breakfast
And then we even have to practice .

Nandini : haan.

Manik : I'm waiting for u down.

Nandini : Manik yesterday night my lappy got hang so can u just stay and check ?

Manik : okay sure.

Nandini : okay I'll just get a bath and come.

Manik : okay.

Manik was seeing what was wrong with the laptop and suddenly Nandini came out of the bathroom running and shouting in her towel.

Manik was shocked to her like that but got up and went to help her.

Manik : what's wrong?

Nandini : cockroach!!

Manik : kaha?

Nandini : in the bath room. Come I'll show u she takes his hand in her hand n takes him in the bathroom see voh raha.

She turns to call Manik and sees that Manik looking at their hands.

Nandini leaves his hand : Manik see its there.

Manik some how manages to put the cockroach out of the bathroom.

Manik : see gaya now chill and take a bath.

Nandini blushing : thanks.

Manik goes out and sees what was wrong with the laptop.

Nandini comes out with her wet long hair down till her waist and still rapped in her towel.

Manik was not able to move his eyes of her.

Manik : beautiful.

Nandini blushes and turns around.

Nandini : I thought u went down.

Manik : ya I will go down.

Nandini : no problem sit I'll change in the bathroom.

Manik keeps on smiling and keeps the laptop aside.

Nandini comes out f the bathroom in a beautiful blue one piece which was matching with manik's blazer.

Nandini blushing : let's go down and have breakfast.

Manik : sure let's go.

Both come down and have breakfast.

They go to nandini's music room.

Manik : let's start.

Nandini : yea sure.

They start to practice they sing the song beautifully looking into each other's eyes.
The song ends but they have a eye lock.

Nandini breaks the eye lock.

Nandini : wow Manik I think we are perfect at this song.

Manik : yea we are perfect if we sing together.

Nandini blushes and Manik sees it.

Manik naughtily : so yesterday you told me u wanted to talk to me about something.

Nandini blushing : yes.

Manik blushing : so tell me.

They look at each other.

Nandini innocently : I wanted to know that whether you like me or not?

Manik smiles : I wanted to ask if you like me or not? (He starts walking towards Nandini)

Nandini : I asked first (she starts moving backwards towards the door)

Manik : but I want to know first.

Nandini : that's cheating Manik Malhotra. (She turns and runs out)

Manik : Nandini (he runs behind her)

Nadini slips and falls and gets hurt on her forehead.

Manik shouts her name and runs towards her.

As blood flows from her head tears flow from manik's eyes.

Nandini was in pain so was Manik , seeing her injury.

Nandini : Manik why are u crying its just a little wound it will disappear in some time.

Manik crying : I promise you Nandini this will never happen again. I will never let you fall down. And I will never hurt u! I will always protect u.

Nandini hugs manik seeing this much love in his eyes. Tears flow down from Nandini's eyes.

Manik : you don't cry please.

Manik lifts her up in his arms and takes her to her room. He keeps her in the bed

Manik : where is the first aid box?

Nandini : in that drawer (she points)

Manik goes and gets the first aid box. He was not able to stop his tears. He cleared the wound and band -aided it. Nandini came close to his face and kissed his eyes

Nandini softly : stop crying please.

Manik huged her

Nandini thinks : I love you manik.

Manik in pain hugs her tight.

Manik thinks : I love you more.

They talk heart to heart.

Nandini moving her hand points Manik to sit beside her on the bed.
Manik sits and nandini keeps her head in his lap and lays.
Nandini smiles.
Manik keeps her head on the pilow and lays beside her hugging her belly.

They sleep feeling relaxed in each other's arms.

Hope you people like it.
Comment down.
And nighty-night sleep tight.!😳

Chapter 5 - page 5
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Awesome ! Great!
Pls continue tmrw! Good night !👏😃

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Awww such a beautiful update :') !! Continue soon n PM me pls? :)

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