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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
its awesome..their parents are so cool😆..
N aww with the fact that MaNan are ready to confess😃
please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
I just love your writings
When are you updating the next part sis
If u don't mind can I call u sis
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rithanya

I just love your writings
When are you updating the next part sis
If u don't mind can I call u sis


Its okay rithanya you can call me whatever you want 😛 and don't be so respectful towards me let me tell you I'm just 16 😆
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Okk I'm 17
I'm just getting mad for ur update
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When are you updating the next part 😊
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wow...awesome update...loved it...
their parents are so cool...
pls continue soon...take care😊😊
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Chapter 11

Manik goes to his home so that he can freshen up and go meet Nandini.

He lays on his bed to relax for a while in this hefty day. Suddenly his phone starts ringing. He sees that its Nandini and picks the call as if he was waiting for her call.

Manik : hello Nandini.

Nandini stays silent.

Manik : what's wrong? Why aren't you replying?

Nandini sadly : manik. She cuts the phone.

Manik gets tensed and runs out of the house and drives to nandu's house.

While driving he tries to call her but she doesn't pick his phone.

Manik : why is she so complicated?

He reaches her house and enters in it is dark. He runs up to her room shouting her name.

He enters her room and sees her Nandini standing near the window.

Manik : Nandini?

He goes and hugs here tight and breaks the hug. He checks about what is wrong with her.

Manik : Nandini why aren't you speaking? Say something what is wrong with you?
And I got a call from u and all I could hear was my name.

Nandini still stays silent and hugs him tight
Nandini : Manik voh mom.

Manik : what happen to mom?

Nandini : she knows... She knows everything about us.

Manik shocked : what!!

Nandini bursts out and laugh.

Manik angrily : seriously nandu? That was hell for me.

He hugs nandini and gets relaxed.

Nandini : sorry. I really didn't wanted to scare you but it mom's idea.

Manik : seriously?

Mrs. Murthy : yes she is right.

Manik breaks the hug.

Manik shyly : aunty.

Mrs. Murthy : now you don't need to lie to me I know everything.

Manik confused : how?

Mrs. Murthy : have you seen your face when you are around her!

Manik and nandini starts blushing.

Mrs. Murthy : aww.. I think I'm disturbing you.

Nandu and Manik shocked, together : no!

Mrs. Murthy smiles and leaves.

Manik gets a lill angry.

Manik : so now you even Gonna play pranks with me?? I mean seriously that was too much!

Manik hugs her and cries out.

Nandini : Manik I didn't mean to scare you but mom told me to do so I did.

Manik still crying : promise me you won't so anything like that kabhi bhi nhi!!!!

Nandini : okay Manik I won't Nandini promise!

Manik hugs her tight!

Nandini : I'm really sorry Manik. Please don't cry.

Manik stops crying and clears his face. He then suddenly breaks the hug.

Manik : are you okay? Voh subhe you fainted. Did it happen before?

Nandini : Manik that's normal if I don't eat properly I will obviously faint.

Manik : promise me you will take care of yourself.

Nandini : I promise. And if I break it you will always be there.

Manik smiles.

Nandini : waise Manik how was your meeting with your dad.

Manik suddenly stops smiling.

Manik : he is still busy. As always.

Nandini : ohh. I'm still here.

Manik suddenly sits on his knees. And smiles at Nandini.

Nandini : Manik what are you doing?

Manik : shh. Now I will speak and you will listen and answer in yes or no.

Nandini : okay.

Manik : Ms. Nandini murthy would you like to go on a date with me tonight?

Nandini blushes : yes Manik Malhotra I will.

Manik stands and starts kissing her slowly.

Nandini breaks the kiss.

Nandini : but Manik what if mom won't let us go?

Manik okay come with me.

They go to her mom's room.

Manik : Mrs. Murthy I would like to take your daughter on a date tonight.

Nandini is shocked.

Manik : would you please give us permission?

Mrs. Murthy smiles at Manik : Manik you already know my answer.. Remember?

Manik then remembers Mrs. Murthy hugging him. Manik smiles and goes And hugs her.

Manik : thank you so much.

Mrs. Murthy : enjoy yourselves. Bye

Nandini stands there confused.

Manik : c'mon I'll tell you everything.

They leave the room and are in the corridor.

Manik : I'm so happy I can't believe I'm gonna go on a date with u at last.

Nandini smiles : but Manik what was that mom was saying you to remember?

Manik : first you go and get ready I'll pick you up in an hour. I'll tell you about that at the date.

Nandini pecks on his lips : okay.

Manik smiles and they leave.

Sorry for the late update.😭

Hope you enjoy it.😳
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
lovely update
loved it
very nicely written
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wow they are going on date..looking forward for next update
N this part loved it..pl cont. soon😃
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Chapter 12

Manik reaches his home. He can't get rid of his smile and freshen ups and takes out a blazer from the wardrobe and wears it. And starts getting ready.

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Nandini is in her room thinking what to wear on her big date.

She then remembers that manik's favorite color is red.

She takes our a beautiful red dress which is short to her knees.

She goes freshen ups and starts getting ready.

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Manik thinks if what gift to get for her.

He then remembers how much Nandini likes drinking and thinks to get a Bailey's bottle which is a ladies drink and as it is mild nandu won't get drunk.

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Nandini starts thinking what to get Manik for the date.

She then thinks of getting him the best think (I'm keeping it a secret).

She then calls Manik.

Nandini : Manik.

Manik : kya hua you can't wait to go in the date?

Nandini : no Manik you know it will take time to me to get ready so can you pick me after 1 more hour. Please.

Manik : okay.

Manik goes and buys the bottle

It have been one hour.

Manik reaches nandini's house and calls her.

Manik : come fast. I can't wait to see you.

Nandini : wait Mr. Manik malhotra. I will be there in two mins.

She cuts the call before Manik could speak anything.

Manik : baa this girl. Why is she so hard.

Manik is waiting and then Nandini comes out of her house in a red lill dress.

Manik sees her and thinks how beautiful just like a doll she is looking in that dress and her hairs half up half down makes her look tall and more cute.

Nandini sees Manik and holds her breath she moved towards him.

She goes and stands in front of him.

Nandini rotates in front if him.

Nandini : how am i looking?

Manik : just like a beautiful doll.

Nandnin blushes.

Manik breaks his gaze : c'mon let's go.

Nandini : ya

They sit in the car and Manik drives her to a breach side where a candlelight dinner is planned with beautiful lights and Flowers around decorated.

Manik : how is it?

Nandu : beautiful. It's like my dream date.

She hugs him.

Nandini starts moving around to see the sea shore and the beautiful decoration.

Nandini : everything around is so beautiful.

Manik is happy to see her so happy.

Manik : there is more let's go in the table.

They move towards the take and sit.

Manik : Ms. Nandini murthy I present to you the Bailey's Irish cream drink your favorite.

Nandini happily : ohh I wanted that so badly. How did you find it?

Manik : for you I can find anything.

He pours some of the drink on the glasses and offers it to Nandini.

I know it's small but will post 10 B tomorrow.

Till then nighty-night.

Chapter 10 B will be full of MaNan romance.

Chapter 13 - page 11

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago

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