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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..very awesome update..
plz cont soon..
n happy ugadi to u all😃
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Chapter 9

They are coming down the stairs and nandini faints. Manik catches her and is really worried about her. He shouts out nandini's name loud and everyone down sees towards them.nandini's mom comes to Manik.

Mrs. Murthy : take her to the room.

Manik : call the doctor right now.

Mrs. Murthy is shocked to Manik so much worried for Nandini.

Mrs. Murthy calls the doctor.

Manik takes nandu to her room. He continuously tries to wake Nandini up. He takes some water ad puts on her face she gets a little conscious and takes manik's name again and again.

Mrs. Murthy sees this and comes to Nandini but Nandini is still taking manik's name. The doctor comes and checks nandu.

Manik eagerly : what's wrong? Why did she faint? Is she alright?

Dr : she is fine. Its just that she is weak.

Dr to Nandini : have eaten anything this morning?

Nandini nods in no.

Dr to manik : see. This is why she fainted.

Manik to nandu angrily : how can you be so careless Nandini ?

Nandini doesn't speak at all.

Mrs. Murthy noticed the concern Manik is having for Nandini and so did everyone. It was the first time Manik would have got so self tempered.

Mukti : Manik calm down it was just usko pooja n all ki wajah se time nhi mila hoga.

Manik is still angry.

Cabir : Manik mukti is right. And I think we should let her rest and go down.

Mrs. Murthy : ya you all go down I'll just put her in her casual clothes and come down.

Everyone starts moving. Nandini's mom wants to make her self clear about manik's feelings towards Nandini so she starts.

Mrs. Murthy : Manik can you just sit here for a minute I'll get her clothes.

Manik : yea.

As soon as Mrs. Murthy turns Manik bursts into tears.

Mrs. Murthy turns back and sees him crying and gets sure that Manik loves her so much that he can't stop his tears.

Mrs. Murthy smiles and goes to get her clothes. She comes back with a dress and Manik hears her footsteps and clears his tears and goes down.

Manik reaches to the living room where fab5 and navya are waiting.

Cabir : how is she?

Manik : she's fine.

Cabir : how are you?

Manik : what happen to me ?

Cabir : that's what I'm asking!

Manik : Cabir I'm in no mood to answer you. Its late you guys please go home I have to stay here till she gets up.

Mukti : okay.

Alya : update us if she gets up!

Manik : ya I will!

Everyone leaves.

Manik sits down on sthe sofa sad.

Its been hours and waiting there for nandu manik sleeps.

I know its very much short.

But wasn't able to right beacase I got sick

Will try to update chapter 10

Chapter 10 - page 9

Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely update
loved it
cont soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wish real story would have been like this really amazing
Take care
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Wow.. Awesome it ws.. Update soon
Get well soon
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WOW..
MANIK IS MADLY N DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH NANDANI..
CONT SOON
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Just typing chapter 9 B will update it today.
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Update fast na plzzz!
Eagerly waiting !
Great job !👏
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Waiting eagerly plz update soon
Want to see how Mrs.murthi's react
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Chapter 10

Nandini comes down and sees Manik sleeping on the sofa.

She first thinks of waking up but then she thinks that he mist have slept late and in the morning he was here.

She goes up and sleeps.

Manik wakes up after sometime and sees the time its already noon and he suddenly remembers that he has to go meet his father. He gets up.

Mrs. Murthy : wait. I want to talk to you about something

Manik : Aunty actually I need to go. I have to meet dad n I'm already late.

Mrs. Murthy hugs Manik.

Manik : aunty are u alright?

Mrs. Murthy : I'm fine. And soon you will know why I hugged you.

Manik smiles : okay. Now bye aunty will come here again at eve to see nandu. By the way nandu , how is she?

Mrs. Murthy : she is fine she came here to see you but you were sleeping so she didn't wake u up.

Manik sadly : okay. Bye

Mrs. Murthy : bye

Manik leaves and Mrs.murthy goes to check nandu. Nandini is resting and hears her mom's foot steps and gets up.

Nandini : maa

Mrs. Murthy : how are you?

Nandini : I'm fine.

Her mom comes and sits with her.

Mrs. Murthy : nandini I wanted to know something from you.

Nandini : ya mom say what you wanna ask.

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Manik is with his dad in the hotel room.

Manik : sorry dad I got late actually voh nandini she fainted so I was there.

Mr. Malhotra : about that did you tell nandini that you love her?

Manik shocked : dad! How do you..

Mr. Malhotra : how do I know? Have seen ur face she you are around her? And by the way let me remind you baap noon me tumhara.

Manik smiles : dad actually I haven't told her about my feeling yet but for sure soon I will.

Mr. Malhotra : why soon why not now?

Manik : you no dad how she hates commitments. And now if I propose to her or tell her I love u she'll again faint.

Both father and son laughs.

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Mrs. Murthy : what do you think of Manik?

Nandini shocked : what mom he is... He is my friend.

Mrs. Murthy : ohh plz... Stop lying nandini. I know I'm your mother but I'm also your friend so do not hesitate to speak to me.

Nandini smiles : mom I know that. But.

Mrs. Murthy : no but just tell me what is up with you n Manik?

Nandini speedly looking at the floor : mom I love him

Mrs. Murthy normally : I know. That you love him and I even know that he loves you.

Nandini shocked : mom? How do.. How do you know about him loving me? how are you so sure? He hasn't even told m anything about it.

Mrs. Murthy : its clear I can see in his eyes. The way he reacted when you fainted I can surely say that he is in love with u.

Nandini blushes.

Mrs. Murthy : do you really love him?

Nandini again blushes : ya mom. Don't know how did that happen but ya I really love him.

Mrs. Murthy smiles and hugs nandu.

Nandu : you know mom before Manik happened. I was afraid of the word "I love you". And even commitments but now I'm not.

Mrs. Murthy smiles : that's good.

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Manik and his dad are laughing and talking.

And suddenly Mr. Malhotra's phone starts ringing. He picks the call talk and keeps.

Manik : what's wrong dad?

Mr. Malhotra : there is an urgent meeting I have to go for. Sorry beta

Manik sadly : its okay dad.

Mr. Malhotra leaves so does Manik.

Will try to update chapter 9 C

Hope u all like this.

Chapter 11 - page 10
Edited by macy99 - 10 years ago

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