MaNan- Coz all of mee Loves all of you!! Note on 153.. New thread strt - Page 6

Hello MaNanholics.. I need ur feedback for my story so please give ur feedbacks.. Ok thanks bye

Part 12..
Its Manik bdae next day n he returned from warrior high to Nandini by 11:30 n Nandini's plan is to be with him coz it's the first bdae of him after their relation n she wants to make it best.. She wants the night to be perfect n then her plans for the day(next day) is awesme...

Manik: Nandini hum kaha jare hai.??
Nandini: Manik tum chup chap chal nahi sakte kya?
Manik: okay Madam...
Nandini brings him to a location where only they both are there and on top of that Manik's favorite thing STARS...
She ties a blindfold on his face and takes a promise he wnt remove it till she says..
Nandini goes to change..
Manik thinking... Yeh Nandini na.. He knows how to make me olright.. I was ol tired n she knows i cn have solace in her arms.. But whr is she? Should i open it? No no i cnt i promised her..
Just then Nandini comes..
She wore a ankle length white dress... A pair of white stone earrings that was glittering... A bracelet that just enhance her beauty.. She applied the kajal n that made her eyes look so bful.. N those eyes were shining... A pair of heels that would make her a bit higher.. It was 11:57. She went to Manik.
Nandini: Manik I'll be opening your blindfold but you have to promise me you wont open your eyes.
Manik: Ok!!
Nandini opens his eyes.. It was 10 secs left..
Nandini: 10...9...8...
Manik: what are you doing..?
Nandini: open when i complete it.
Manik: ok..
Nandini: 5...4...3...2...1
Manik opens his eyes.. Nandini was in front of her..
Nandini: Happy birthday Manik... I love you.. I m madly in love with you.. I wanna marry you.. Make love...Have kids.. Love you.. Protect you.. Be with you.. Grow old with you... And finally wanna die in your arms.. I love you.. Happy birthday..
Manik had tears in his eyes... He went running to her and hugged her...
Manik: Thankyou so much.. I love you too.. I want all the things you said.. But the last one is not possible..
Nandini: Wat?
Manik: yaa coz tumhare pehle ill die..
Nandini keeps her hand on her lips: kabhi yeh mat kehna..
Manik: Tum bhi...
They were hugging again..
Manik: Nandini ek chiz to abhi bhi ho sakti hai..
Nandini: What?
Manik(flirty) : make love n have babies
Nandini(blushing n playfully) sht up Manik..
Manik: You know main mera bdae bhul gaya tha and aisa kuch expect bhi nai kar ra tha..
Nandini: Tum ne sirf mujhe dekha hai.. Piche dekho...

Manik sees at his back and found the place bfully decorated in white.. And white roses were everywhere and there was a white sheet on the floor.. Two pillows... And a short table..
Nandini: Come..
Manik: Where?
Nandini: there... Pointing that place..
She keeps the small food table in the middle n brings the cake...
Manik saw the cake.. "Happy bdae MonsterManik"
Manik: hahaha..
Nandini: What? Aren't you Monster? I love the monster..
Manik: yaa i m only urs...
They cut the cake n Nandini give him a bite and he gave her...
Manik: its yummy... You made it naa? I love chocolate
Nandini: How do you know?
Manik: I know itna acha sirf Meri Nandini hi bana sakti hai...
Nandini: Yahi chalega ya you wanna have your fav pasta and pizza coz kal toh..
Manik: Kal kya,?
Nandini realizing she should not say nethn..
Nandini: Kal toh tum ne mana kia tha banane at farmhouse.
Manik: Oh yaa.. And thnks i wanna have please.
Nandini: ya sure..
She brings the dinner..
Manik gets a cal from Dhruv..
Dhruv: Hi Buddy..
Manik: hello
Dhruv: Acha buddy sun everyone is on line..
Manik: Dhruv everyone together kuch prob? Tell me kaha Ho I'll b right there..
Cabir: Baba Manik Baba asman sir utha liya.. We know you care par itna acha ni hai..thoda shant reha kar...chill hum thik hai.. Guys ready..
Everyone: yes..
Tia: 5
Cabir: 4
Mukti: 3
Alya : 2
Dhruv: 1
Fab4 n Tia: Happy bdae Manik
Manik: Thankyou so much guys.. U remembered?
Cabir: toh tujhe kya laga saale sirf Nandini ko yad hai..
Tia: Han bhai.. Just because woh aapke sath that doesn't mean humein yad nai hai..
Manik: Nandini??? Tumhe kaise pata..
All: Nandini ne humein inform kia tha k hum tere ghar na jaye tu uske sath hoga..
Manik: Ok..
Cabir: Chalo you guys enjoy but don't do anything naughty..
Nandini: Don't worry Cabir we won't without asking you.
Everyone was shocked even Manik with her bold answer..
Nandini: What happened guys? Ab that i m with fab5 i have to be bold right Tia?
Tia: Right my cutie...
Manik: Okay guys bye you are disturbing us..
All: Ohkkk enjoy luv u both..
MaNan: Luv u ol..

Nandini: Manik the food is served..
Manik: okay m damn hungry..
Manik started eating it like a small hungry kid and Nandini was just mesmerizing hum..
Manik: Tum bhi aao?
Nandini: hmmm.. Khilao?
Manik: okay n he makes her eat..
They finish the dinner..
Nandini: Lay down Mr. Malhotra this is not it.
Manik(puzzled): means aur kya hai..
Nandini: Lay down n watch your beautiful thing..
Manik(holding her hands n watching her): okay..
Nandini: i said ur fav bful thing
Manik: yaa its u..
Nandini: blushing.. Sht up..
They were gazing stars and suddenly a white curtain falls at a side.. And music starts..
Manik: whats this now?
Nandini: keep watching...
Yaaro... Dosti... Badi hi haseen hain.. Yeh na ho to kya fir... Music was playing n suddenly an image appeared on that curtain.. It was Manik.. Kid Manik...
Manik: How did you get that?
Nandini: No question just watch..
Manik watches that n the songs keeps on playing and that images changes to fab 5 moments together..band of brothers.. Manik and mukti.. Manik and alya... Buddy together.. Fab5 concerts... Their party... Their moments...schooling.. Warrior high...
And suddenly song stop..
Manik was nostalgic: thanks Nandini..
Nandini:Its not over baby
Song plays tere hone se hi mera hona hai... Tu jo hai toh main hoo .. And its MaNan moment on screen... As she dint had images except the selfie one she kept random image and describes their scene...
First floor kiss when he n harshad fought... Store room locked... Mud fight... First hug... Musicana launch performance.. Their kiss... Their saawli si rat moment.. Their frnship.. First date.. Valentines... Ending with their selfie..
Nandini: Sorry but we dint had photos so..
Manik: This was bful.. He went close to her.. She closed her eyes.. He went to her lips and kept his lips on her.. They had liplock.. They kissed.. It was warm..passionate...intense...filled with emotion.. They broke the kiss and she hugged him.. Lying on his chest..
Manik took her phone and asked her to pose
Nandini was startled with the action.. Yeh kya kar re ho..
Manik: Capturing our moments..
And they captured photos hugging.. Manik kissing her cheeks.. Making funny faces...
Nandini gets a call from cabir..
Manik: your phone na..
Nandini thinks" shit Cabir o god i have to take the phone"
Nandini: Aaa.. Manik its important.. Its Navya.. N she gets a bit away.. Manik thinks of ol the things happened today..
Nandini: Yaa Cabir say.. Manik is still here..
Cabir: we all are on line...
Nandini: Okay guys listen we have to make sure Manik ko pata na chale wat is our plan for tomorrow...
All: Cool par kaise..
Nandini: Tum mese kisiko Manik ko kal busy rakhna hoga till evening.
Mukti: Okay done main rakhungi..
Nandini: Nai mukti i would need gals ki help..
Dhruv: Okay i keep him away.
Cabir: No woh nandini se milne ka try karega I'll take him away..
Nandini: Dhruv i guess Cabir is right he can handle him.. And waise bhi ill need your help..
All: agreed
Tia: par wats the plan..
Nandini explains the plan...
All: Cool awesome..
Nandini: thanks guys.. So guys lets do it..
All: phone hug..
She cuts the phone n returns

Manik: All ok?
Nandini: wat? As Nandini forgot that she gave navya's reason
Manik: Navya?
Nandini: what navya m?
Manik: you were tlkn to navya na?
Nandini remembering: Oh yaa she's fine..
Manik: Nandini all cool na?
Nandini: Manik tum bht baatein karte ho.. Chalo hug me and sleep.. I want to be in ur arms..
They sleep in each other arms...

Precap: Manik's bdae bash continues... MaNan romance too..

This was soooi cute specially when the show is having to much of senti tracks loved it

yaeh ..atlast manik's b'day bash..

wow...so beautiful...awesome...u penned it so perfectly...pls continue soon...take care😊

Lovely manan scenes thank you for the pm

Wow!!! Lovely os

Aww.. Wht a beautiful update.. Just loved it

sweet and cute update

Hello MaNanholics... Thanks for your feedback.. So ready for a new Nandini.. All for Manik... Then enjoy the bdae bash.. Okay thanks bye

Morning...
The birds were chirping and the sky was blue.. The sun was gentle on MaNan this time.. It was soft... Everything was bful.. Nandini was observing all this and then her Manik... And thinking.." Now i feel content being with him... I feel safe being in his arms... Aiyappa thankyou so much.. Aap ne mujhe Manik se milaya warna main kabhi pyar ko samjh hi nai pati.. Khud ko Aur Manik ko sath dekhke lagta hai humara pyar same Maa-Paa jaisa hai.. Fireflies too prove it..." She gently caresses Manik's hairs.. She leans n kiss his forehead... He wakes up and smiles seeing her.. The only thing he wants to see when he gets up.. Her face is so bful it makes a person forget his pain, sorrows, worries...
Nandini(caressing his hair): Gumonin Mr. Malhotra...
Nandini: Gud Morning Miss Murthy..
Both gets up.. Nandini hugs him...
Nandini kisses his cheeks.. Happy birthday Manik.. Manik kisses her nose..
Manik: Thankyou my sunshine...
Nandini watches the time it was 9am..
Nandini: Shit shit shit Manik.. Chikamma's going to kill me.. Shit m late.. You need to drop me fast..
Manik: Chikamma??
Nandini: Aiyooo i meant Chachi.. Ab chalo..
Manik: Okay

Nandini thinking " Sorry Manik i have to tell lies par juth ni bolungi toh tumhara din best kaise manaungi"

Fab 4 and Tia gets a notification.."Nandini created a group.. Mission Monster Bdae"
Everyone smiles and were amused at that little lady who never leave a chance to amaze them...
Text conversation: fab4,Tia & Nandini

Cabir texted Hello sweet little lady.. Gm.. Hope u had amazing night..
Nandini: Sht up Cabir.. Tumne Manik ko abhi tak call q ni kia?
Cabir: I forgot my mission shit..
Mukti: Cabir tu mar khayega..
Cabir: Sorry guys abhi ill do.. By the way nandini where is Navya.. Rat ko bhi ghar ni aai..
Nandini: She's in hospital Minor pain..
Cabir: What you should have said me main jata.. I will go now..
Mukti: Cabir chill.. Checkup hai.. Abhi gaya hai uske sath.. Tu itna hyper q hora hai..
Cabir: Hyper main nai.. Cabir thinking " Main itna q soch ra hun.. Cabir focus on Manik"
Nandini: Cabir call Manik.. Mukti, Alya, Tia u guys come to my place.. And Dhruv tum venue check karo and preparation dekho plz i want that place empty..
All: Olright mam.. Mission monster bdae started..
Nandini: Thanks guys it means alot..
All: Chalo shez again senti.. Shtup n lets start..

Manik: Nandini itna kise text kar ri ho?
Nandini: Woh actually I'm texting on Girls rock group..
Manik: huh what?
Nandini: Nai samaj aaya na fir bhi janna hai.. Its a group of me Alya Mukti navya.. We are talking. now don't ask what? Girls talk..
Manik: Okay baba.. Ghr aagaya..
Manik recieve Cabir cal and he says Nandini he needs to go.. Cabir want to tlk..
Nandini: ya okay bye.. Meet you soon..
Manik: hun what? U gonna meet again
Nandini: Ahh i meant in ur dreams jao na Manik.
Manik: Tum weird behave kar ri ho..
Nandini: Go manik..

As Manik leaves girls come and discuas about the plan.. Dhruv checks the venue which is on beach.. And all the preparation...

Cabir keeps Manik busy oll the day..

Its 6pm.. All were exhausted..
Cabir: Manik yar chal kahi jate hai?
Manik: Kidhar?
Cabir: Chal na kahi bhi.. And then Nandini ko milke aayenge..
Listening her name he got ol mad and went to changes
Cabir: Manik wear party clothes will go out in a club sometime..
Manik: Okay tu bhi change karle i have your clothes
Cabir: Yaa m going down shower leke ready hota u come down..
Manik: Yaa okay..

Here all girls are ready and waiting for Nandini to come out..
Mukti in her crop top and shorts.. Alya in her one-piece
Tia in skirt and top
And our angel came.. Nandini..
She was wearing nice black color dress.. It was so pretty.. It ended to her ankle..but down her knees the dress were tranparent... A pair of red heels.. Black beads earring.. Her wavy hairs.. She was looking wow... Black was Manik's Favourite.. Everyone were dumbstruck..
Mukti: Wow nandini u are looking awesome..
Tia: yaa man u r looking beauty..
Alya: Yaa touch wood kisi ki nazar na lage..
Nandini:(blushing) tum like g bhi na kuch bhi...,Chale guys.. Dhruv must be waiting..
Everyone reaches venue..
Nandini texts Cabir: bring him...
Cabir closes Manik's eyes and brings him to venue..
Manik: Don't tell me another surprise like ssly?
Cabir: Yaa

Cabir removes his hand and make Manik open his eyes.. He saw beach.. The beach was covered with lights.. They were tents to sit.. The water was good.. And he saw his frens standing there.. He saw navya in blue salwar kameez.. He saw abhi... He was searching something.. When everyone wished him.. Happy bdae..
Manik: Thank you.. Still searching
Mukti: tu khus ni hai
Manik: Ofcourse hun..
Mukti: okay toh isse nai milna na?
Manik: Kisse?
And they moved and nandu was standing there.. Manik heart akipped abit.. Her lucky charm was in his fav color.. He was so happy.. He went running to her and hugged her and she wished her..
Akl: ehem ehem..
Lets cut the cake.. They cut the cake and the party started.. They were dancing moving drinking eating... It was loving... Nandini came to Manik and took her away and no one new about this...
Manik: Nandini koi dekh lega.. Yaa yeh bhi pata hai inko..
Nandini: Manik chupke se aane me maza hai..
Manik: and hum yahan kya kar re hai..
Nandini: Hum yahan walk pe aaye hai in the water.. With these she held his hands kept her head on his shoulder and started walking...
Nandini: Manik tumhe pata hai.. Life humein bht moke deti hai pyar ko samjh ne ka par hum usse dekhte nai hai but in our case humne time rehte chize sambhal li.. Manik today its ur bdae i wanna ask something.. Tum apne mom se itna nafrat q karte ho.. Manik suddenly got furious and said: Nandini sabko pata hai nyonika k baare main I don't talk so plz..
Nandini: Okay Manik chill.. And she kisses his hand and sit near the waves on the beach such that only their sole get wet with the water..

Dhruv comes to call them..
They go in the party.. They party hard.. In party there was love.. MaNan love, Mukbhi love, Dhrulya love but another story was coming that was Cavya which din went unnoticed by Tia..

Then Fab 5 discussed their moments and had a song together...
Yaari yaari yaari yaari...

Everyone was so happy.. And they had group hug.. Nandini, Tia, Navya and Abhi felt solace seeing their love happy with their frens the one that matter to them the most.. They were happy.. Nandini played at last the movie she made on Fab 5 and they were overwhelmed by that.. All of them had romantic dance at the end...
It was 11:57pm..
Guys its 3 mins more for his bdae lets do something rocking..
Everyone made Manik and Nandini sit on chair and ask them to propose..
Nandini went on her knees and said.. Monster Manik Malhotra.. I Nandini Murthy wants to tell you that I love you.. I love you so much.. You make me go crazy.. Your care makes me fall for u more and more.. Ur love makes me go alive.. I irrevocably love you..
Everyone were shocked by her step.. Manik went down and said you are the one I always want and i promise i will always protect you.. And be with you till the end.. With this he kissed her forehead and they hugged.. Everyone's expression were like aww.. Mukbhi hugged.. Dhrulya hugged and CaVya and Tia stood their.. Manik was about to kiss her when everyone said: ehem ehme..
And they got conscious...
Guys 5 sec left.. 5..4...3...2...1..
Everyone: happy birthday Manik.. And here ur bdae ends.. It was amazing..
Nandini: without u guys it would have been worse..
Manik: and with u its bful..
With that everyone heads home...
MaNan stay together at Nandini's place As everyone were fast asleep...
And they slept hugging as they were tired..
Manik: Thankyou Miss Murthy..
Nandini: Anytime Mr. Malhotra.. And she gave a peck on his lips he was shocked but replied and they slept.. In each other arms..

Sorry it went so long but have to finish it today so...
Precap:
Manik and Nandini's talk for nyonika..
Cavya...

Wonderful episode
Thanks for the pm