'MaNan's Fear'--Part 32 on pg 111updtd on 26th feb - Page 25

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Nice update..

Continue Soon

Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

loved it
very nicely written
continue soon

Originally posted by: 8seetha

superb part 👏

cintunue soon please dude.
Love u

Originally posted by: sal_aphrodite

Great !! Nice to know that now mukti also knows about MaNan other than Cabir !! Do continue !! 😃

Thanks to everyone
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Posted: 10 years ago

MaNan's Fear --Part 9

Recap:

Cabir confess everything to Mukti abt MaNan

Mukti joins hands with Cabir to save Nandini.

Dhrulya in Canteen...

Dhrulya tries to spend alone time but Manik enters there...

Manik:Tumlog bhi yaha ho...

Dhruv:Haa just now we came

Manik:Chalo then we have to practice n wind it up ASAP...let me take anything to eat then we ll head towards Jam room

Aliya:Manik...Mukti will come cum now she was also hungry ...so u go we ll join u

Manik:K...i m taking something for Cabir also...Mukti keliye bhi leleta huna na...what a big deal

Aliya wanted to spend sometime with Dhruv so :No Manik...She said to wait ...n she ll join us here only...

Manik:K ...no problem...but join us soon

Aliya.:Ya sure

Manik takes stuff n leaves from there...

Dhruv:Tumne aisa kyu kaha ki Mukti said she ll um here...usne toh aisa kuch nahi kaha

Aliya:Usne nahi kaha but u wanted to spend time with me na...

Dhruv smiles:Yes...

Chudail cums out of her dream...n self talk:I ll have to make Nandini cum to college

As she hears sound at the door she gets alert n behaves normal...

Cabir n Mukti enters Jam room...

Chudail:Where were u ppl...do u know main kabse wait kar rahi hun

Mukti:Haa woh...canteen gaye the bhook lagrahi thi...but I forgot my cell so came back

Manik enters jam room:Mukti ...they both r still waiting for u

Mukti:K...then I ll go n eat something n unko bhi bula lati hun

Manik:Cool...

Cabir:Ms.Khurana...wud u like to have something...

Before Chudail accepts anything to eat...Cabir interrupts

Cabir:Waise Manik tune sirf Humdono keliye laya...

Manik:Haa...woh Aliya ne bataya Mukti will join them so...

Chudail gets angry:No thanks I m not hungry...

Cabir:Really...thank God...mujhe laga share karna padega...

Mukti reaches Canteen n notices Dhrulya holding hands but gets scared n leave hands as soon as they see her

Mukti thinks:Ab in dono ke beech kya chalraha hai...

Aliya interrupts Mukti's thoughts:Mukti ...u wanna eat something

Mukti:Haa yaar...jaldi se khake nikalte hai...Manik n Cabir r waiting for us...aur woh nayi Manager bhi

Everyone back in Jam room n finishes there rest two songs till evening...one they finished at Farm house itself

Chudail was not at all interested in their practice instead she was thinking how to make Nandini come to College,so she dint even realized that they finished it

Manik tells Chudail that they ll record the songs tmrw in early hours n hand over to her.

Chudail agrees...

Everyone leaves Jam room n heads towards home...as all were tired ...

Mukti,Aliya n Dhruv leaves

Manik n Cabir heads towards Car...

Manik:Cabir...main tujhe ghar chodke Nandini se milke aata...

Cabir:No...even I want to meet that fighter ...toh chal yahi se chalte hai

Manik smiles:K chal...

Chudail sees everyone leaving n calls Nandini...

Chudail:Hi Nans...how r u

Nandini:Hi Chudail...i m fine...

Chudail:U dint cum to college...so I though of calling u

Nandini:That's so nice of u Chudail

Chudail:I m ur friend Nans...

Nandini:I heard u r the new manager n so how is the practice gng on

Chudail gets a chance to trap Nandini:Ya it was good infact they completed the songs...but

Nandini:But...what Chudail

Chudail:Woh...Manik got hurt in his hand bcz of lot of practice

Nandini gets shocked n worried n in hurry she cuts the call...

Nandini thinks he was angry morning n that's y he finished his songs by harming his hand n decides to go n meet him...

Nandini gets ready even after being in somuch pain in her leg...as soon as she heads towards her bedroom door...Abhi enters...

Abhi:Ohhoo Baby doll yeh itna tayyar hoke kaha jaarahi ho...

Nandini:Abhi let me go ...i have to meet Manik

Abhi:Nandini ...who said that he is hurt

Nandini:Chudail...

Abhi:R u mad...agar aisa kuch hota toh tumhe nahi batata kya...n in afternoon I went to college he was fine...so just chill

Navya enter the room along with soup:Ohh behna itna sajdhaj ke kaha chali...Nandu tumhe apni parwa bilkul bhi nahi hai chalo baitjao...varna pair ka dard badjayega...

Nandini:Navya samajne ki koshish karo Manik got hurt his hand again...so I have to meet him...woh aaj subah bohat gusse me tha...

Navya:Nandini tum samaj nahi rahi ho Chachi bhi ghar par nahi hai...hum tumhe nahi jaanede sakte woh aayengi toh hum kya bolenge

Nandini:Plz Navya...tum ruko yaha Chachi ko samjha dena ki main Abhi ke saath chali gayi

Abhi:What...maine kab kaha main tumhe leke jaraha hun...

Nandini:Abhi plz try to understand

Abhi:But what the need to go n meet him...u can call him na

Nandini:Abhi...maine kaha na he was angry so he ll not take my call now

Door bell rings

Navya:Hum dekhte hai...lagta hai Chachai aagayi tum unse puchke jana

Nandini continues pleading Abhi...but he refused

Navya opens the door n finds Manik n Cabir...

Navya:Shukar hai Maata Rani ka ke tum aagaye...

Manik gets worried:Kyu...Nandini theek hai

Navya:Haa woh theek hai par achanak tumse milne ki zid kar rahi thi...usne kaha ke tumhe chot lagi hai

Manik:What...

Cabir:Ye kisne kaha usse...

Navya:Pata nahi par...Abhi ne rok kar rakha hai use

Manik:Theek hai ...main dekhta hun

Manik takes the stairs n heads towards Nandini's room...

Manik stands near the door n watch Nandini pleading Abhi to let her go...

Abhi spots Manik:Thank God u r here...n cums near Manik n murmurs...how u manage to handle her ...n goes downstairs...

Nandini turns back n spots Manik...n feels relieved

Downstairs

Navya receives Cabir n ask him to sit along with Abhi...n goes to kitchen

Abhi slowly tells Cabir so that Navya cud not hear

Abhi:Chudail ka call aaya tha Nandini ko ki Manik got hurt

Cabir gets shocked:That means she can do anything to make Nandini cum out of house

Upstairs

Nandini tries to come running to Manik even after the pain...but Manik cums near too n both hugs...

Nandini:Manik tumne gusse fir kya kiya...tumhare haath me chot kaise lagi...

Manik breaks the hug...n shows his hand to Nandini...

Nandini gets confused n thinks that Y Chudail this to her...

Manik makes her sit n asks...

Manik:Kisne kaha tumse...

Nandini:Chudail ne...

Manik understands that it was her plan to make Nandini to step out of House...

Manik:Ye sab jo bhi horaha hai...woh sab that psycho is doing...that Chudail...

Nandini gets a shock...:What...

Precap:

Fab5 records album n hands over to Chudail

Nandini cums to know abt Chudail.

Chudail blackmails Nandu.


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Will update next part tmrw mrng

Edited by kresham - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awome... ur updates r quick n interestin to read. loved it a lot.. 😛😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb
Nice reunion Manan 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update dear loved it ... But I can't stop laughing the way they all call soha chudail is too funny ... Nandu when said chudail am fine I was cracking up ... Amazing update 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update Kresh...waiting for the next one...
when will Manik and gang take action against this chudail??she has to taught a lesson ASAP


and LOL when Nandu and Chudaill was having convo over phone, Nandini addressed her as chudail...its so funny!!

great going darling👏
Edited by dushturain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan58

awome... ur updates r quick n interestin to read. loved it a lot.. 😛😃

Thanq...actually i want to finish this Chudail track ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kresham

Thanq...actually i want to finish this Chudail track ASAP

I understand ur feelings man.. I hv mutual feeling..😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dushturain

fantastic update Kresh...waiting for the next one...

when will Manik and gang take action against this chudail??she has to taught a lesson ASAP


and LOL when Nandu and Chudaill was having convo over phone, Nandini addressed her as chudail...its so funny!!

great going darling👏

Originally posted by: sana.1990

Superb update dear loved it ... But I can't stop laughing the way they all call soha chudail is too funny ... Nandu when said chudail am fine I was cracking up ... Amazing update 🤣

Haa still i m not liking to take her name in my story also
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb kriti
Chudail is a bitch... i want manik to kill chudail..
lovely update

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