MANANBIR OS:Lessons we learn from each other-fnl prt updd n nt on pg25

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piyu008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

the ending is perfect...jz loved it..

u have to write more yar u r too good with damn interesting concepts ..

Manan aww.. their part was so cute😳

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

aww thanks Ann for the shoutout.i have told you before and telling you again this is one the best manan fanfics and the BEST mananbir fanfic

thank you dear.please please please do write more manan and mananbir fics

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: filter.coffee
aww thanks Ann for the shoutout.i have told you before and telling you again this is one the best manan fanfics and the BEST mananbir fanfic

thank you dear.please please please do write more manan and mananbir fics

Thanks rez , but i think my best work was chalk and cheese..I would like to hear your take on that one too😳https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4279636/os-chalk-and-cheese-last-part-updated

I will try rez..Par meine apni pair par hi kulhadi maar di masters join karke..It is eating up all my leisure time

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: piyu008
the ending is perfect...jz loved it..
u have to write more yar u r too good with damn interesting concepts ..
Manan aww.. their part was so cute😳

Thanks piyu😳..I'll try my best😃

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: apardh_ba
Poor manan both climbed trees to hide their vulnerability.
Cabir is d one saccha dost.
Such an emotional part. I hope for reading more of ur stories.
I really liked this ss. I cant pick one fav moment bcoz d whole journey was wonderful. Manan romance, cabir's comments, manbir friendship, cabini bonding and both of them teasing manik. Very nice. keep writing.
Thank u for d pm.

🤗..apu big hugss to you..I am glad you liked it so much😳

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: ishneetb
It was beautiful!!!
Promise you'll write more, bcz you are brilliant in it.

And yes a big hug for writing such a nice OS 🤗

🤗..Thank you isneetb..I'll try for sure

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: navk
wonderful update
loved it

Thanks yaar😳

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zyra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Oh My God! This story comes to an end. :'(

I hate endings but thank youu it was a happy one.

I would really really miss your updates. I wish you could continue this for some more time. But, it's okay. You have to give time to everything in life. So, it's okayy!! :D

I loved the storyline. Mananbir <3

The driving lessons to the Forest scene to the climbing of trees and obviously sharing the deep secretes. All of this would was so good, lovely and pure. All the viewers are dying to see such bonding between these 3. And then YOU came like a star in our lives with such a beautiful idea and wrote beautifully that we could actually see all this happening in front of our eyes.

So a big big big thank you.

Hope that we could reaf more from you. Pen down things whenever time permits.

And I finally end this long comment which has now turned into an Essay. :P

Keep Smiling and Keep Writing :')

Lots and lots of Love

Zyraaa

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

awww Ann its just beautiful ending.though i never wanted it to end.

you wrote manik's past beautifully.and added nandini's too.these were the best part.

cabir was love.you write cabir so well.

i could imagine all the scenes like i m watching it on tv!that's how good you wrote.

that manan talk AWWW melted my heart.i was so angry and furious but your fic calmed me down

Thanks for this beautiful beautiful fic.

and i must say thr character stayed in character in your fic.and its a must for me while i m reading a fanfic.thanks again. <3