MANANBIR OS:Lessons we learn from each other-fnl prt updd n nt on pg25 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Zyra

Oh My God! This story comes to an end. :'(

I hate endings but thank youu it was a happy one.

I would really really miss your updates. I wish you could continue this for some more time. But, it's okay. You have to give time to everything in life. So, it's okayy!! :D

I loved the storyline. Mananbir <3

The driving lessons to the Forest scene to the climbing of trees and obviously sharing the deep secretes. All of this would was so good, lovely and pure. All the viewers are dying to see such bonding between these 3. And then YOU came like a star in our lives with such a beautiful idea and wrote beautifully that we could actually see all this happening in front of our eyes.

So a big big big thank you.

Hope that we could reaf more from you. Pen down things whenever time permits.

And I finally end this long comment which has now turned into an Essay. :P

Keep Smiling and Keep Writing :')

Lots and lots of Love

Zyraaa

Originally posted by: prati_25

wow what a beautiful ending to an amazing story..👏

u are really an good writer so keep writing such interesting stories more..😃

A Big Thank u for shoutout..I really enjoyed reading your stories..😊

will be waiting for next soon..😛

Thanks for PM:)

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

awww Ann its just beautiful ending.though i never wanted it to end.

you wrote manik's past beautifully.and added nandini's too.these were the best part.

cabir was love.you write cabir so well.

i could imagine all the scenes like i m watching it on tv!that's how good you wrote.

that manan talk AWWW melted my heart.i was so angry and furious but your fic calmed me down

Thanks for this beautiful beautiful fic.

and i must say thr character stayed in character in your fic.and its a must for me while i m reading a fanfic.thanks again. <3

Originally posted by: Forever19

Thanks rez , but i think my best work was chalk and cheese..I would like to hear your take on that one too😳https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4279636/os-chalk-and-cheese-last-part-updated

I will try rez..Par meine apni pair par hi kulhadi maar di masters join karke..It is eating up all my leisure time

Originally posted by: rima4ever

so the story ends
what a beautiful end
i loved it
will miss the story

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hi dear it was lovely reading your OS

loved how u potrayed cabir manik and nandini relatioship

about faviorite part i cant say as the entire fic is my fav

at last part was too emotional but yes loved the driving episodes. cabir commentary was really funny

please do continue

bye sumi

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

study comes 1st.no denying that.but whenever you find time and feel like it do write.cause i will be waiting for your next one.cause dude the way you write manan,mananbir is perfect.its like watching the show like i said before

i read chalk and cheese.and may be your other fics too cause i loved your writing.but this one is my most favorite.i loved all of your writing but this is just ...love