MANANBIR OS:Lessons we learn from each other-fnl prt updd n nt on pg25

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

fab ending

loved it

very beautifully written

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

love you Ann.i had to say it.your fics,writing is awesome but more than that you are awesome

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Thankyou for both Pm's 🤗

It was such a cute story. And I liked the end :))

All the best for your masters!! :))

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

It was a very nice journey with u too dear i really enjoyed the os to the core n i love ur chalk n cheese also
for me the best moments was maman hug manik's flashback though i have choose two but u knw very well that every part of dis story was beyond awesome n perfectly written so its very much tough to choose one but for me these two moment r extra special
going to miss u dear promise me u will be back soon n nxt time u have to pm me love u dear n take care 🤗

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harshitha2398

@harshitha2398

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Superb yaar!!

the best part of the OS was Manik consoling Nandini

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kresham

@kresham

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

awww that was a beautiful end yaar...

dint expect two different scenarios of climbing trees in MaNan's life...

that was awesome...

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#177

awesome part...emotional and beautiful...👏
feeling sad becoz its the final part...any way...thanks a lot dear for writing such a wonder story...it was really beautiful ...from part 1 to the last part...was an amazing journey...u r an awesome and blessed writer...will miss u and ur story a lot...i will always keep this story in my favorite collection.
coming to the update...

beautiful...especially cabir's dialogue...
do you know when it is true love?"
Cabir asked her
Nandini could never share her fireflies secret with cabir..it will be like jumping off a cliff ..being the blabber mouth he is,he could tease her using that on every opportunity he gets..
Nandini stayed mum and kept on looking at manik
"it's when someone takes you as an equal and trusts you with everything he has got..it's when you can show your most ugly and vulnerable side...that's why it can be only you for Manik.."

i loved it yaar...
and two different scenarios of climbing trees...in manan 's life wow...its mind blowing...👏

thanks a lot for the pm...😊
pls do write more stories like this ...would love to read more from u.

take care and all the best wishes for ur future.
may god bless u & ur family.
with lots of love & prayers
aavani...

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Tanvi

@manan58

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Awesome os..

This ws one of my fav os..

Keep writin such a gud stuff😃😆

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dushturain

@dushturain

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Awww this is such an emotional update Ann...really wonderful..

Poor Manik...such a lonely boy he is...My heart is going out to him...

He is so lucky he got his star Nandini in his lifee...

And as usual Cabir is a sweetheart...I want to marry him...why is he gay?? and I loved the bonding between Nandini and Cabir...

my favourite part was when Cabir was explaining how Manik goes all meek infront of Nandini...it was really cute..

Thank you Ann for mentioning my name alagse...that was so sweet...and my journey with this OS been wonderful...I loved it and enjoyed it thouroooughly..and the best part is you kept it sooo real and close to original characters...loved it...

I hope you will give us another OS real soon!! love you muwahh...