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This story iz very interestin itz lyke im actully watchin a show!!!!!😃u deserve a round of aplause👏

Part 20:

Angad's room

Angad is not able 2 sleep…. Keeps thinking about kripa….

A: meri zindagi main bahot se ladkiya aaakar gayee hai… lekin maine aajtak kisi k liye ish tarah feel nahi kiya jis tarah main aab karrahaoo…. Yesa kuyn ho raha hai mere saath….. kyun main tumhe miss karraha hoon. ….. ( he is still not able 2 realise the fact that he is in love)

Then he calls kripa…….

K: hello

Angad is silent

K: helooo!!!!!

Still silent…..

K: kaun hai..????

Angad is not able 2 speak just closes his eyes in pain…….

Now kripa can feel something…. She feels that it is angad… then she has tears in her eyes…..

Both angad n kripa r cryin silently…..

Then kripa again says heloo…..

Angad is still silent….

Angad can feel the pain in her voice n tears in her eyes…..

Now kripa is about 2 take angad's name when she remembers angad words….

Mere liye pyaar sirf ek commodity hai…… ek phisul ka jasba…… … yeh pyaar mere liya koi manye nahi rakta….. did I ever told u that I loved u????????????? kyaaa maine kabhi tumse kaha hai ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon??????? mujhe sirf ek cheez se matlab hai…….. …………….

Then she bangs the phone angrily……. N cries…..

Angad on the other hand is also cryin……

Background song 4 angad

Main bewafa…. Main bekadar…..

Maine tera dil toda….

Mera bhi dil tuta magar….

Tujhko nahi uski khabar…..

Teri yaad main dil tham kar

Tadpunga main sari umar…..( movie Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohobbaat)

Dadi's home….

In the morning…. Angad goes 2 dadi's place….

As soon as dadi sees angad she says duniya ka sab se pyaarra bachha n kisses angad on his forehead….

Tears roll down angad's eyes as he meets dadi…

Dadi( sounding really worried): kyaa huwa beta???? Sab thik toh hai nah??? Chalo ander chalo… Aao mere saath ….

She takes him inside n makes him sit down….

Angad is silent… he rests his head in dadi's lap n cries….

A: kyaa main ek bura insaan hoon dadi?????

D: nahi beta!!!! Koi bhi insaan bura nahi hota… haalat usse bura banata hai….

A: dadi maine zindagi main jo kuch bhi chaha voh mere maang ne se pehele hi mujhko mila hai…. Kabhi bhi kisis cheez ki kami mehesoos nahi huwi…. Kabhi bhi kissi cheez ko khone na daar nahi laga…… bachpaan se lekar aajtak…. Main yehi soch kar jeeta aaya hoon ki jo angad khanna chahega woh usse hasil karke rehega…..

Lekin aaj!!!! aaj najane kuyn….??? Dil main ek khalipan sa lagraha hai…. Kisi ke nahoneka khalipan…. Kisie cheez ko kho dene ka daar…. Peheli bar … zindagi main peheli bar dadi… main aapne aap main kuch aalag sa feel karraha hoon… ek yesa ehesaas jo maine pehele kabhi mehesoos nahi kii…

Maine kabhi bhi pyaar main vishwas nahi kiya…. !!! yeh pyaar kyaa hai main nahi janta…. Main hamesha rishto se bhagta raha hoon….. mujhe koi bhi risty main bandne se daar lagta tha…. .. yesa lagta tha ki… ristey insaan ko kamzor banata hai… woh usse badh kar rakhta hai….. lekin aaj .. mujhe ussi ristey ko khone ka daar lagrahai dadi….. main nahi janta main yesa kyun feel kar raha hoon…. Mujhe kyaaa hogaya hai main khud nahi janta dadi!!!!!!

Dadi smiles at wat angad just said n lovingly makes him sit in front of her….

D: beta rishta chahe kaisa bhi ho… woh kabhi bhi insaan ko kamzoor nahi karta.. balki usse jeene ka maksad deta hai…. Main janti hoon ki tum jo yeh kasmakash se gujar raheho woh kyaa hai…..!!!!! lekin angad main yeh chahati hoon ki tum khud usse mehesoos karo….. aapni aakhein band karo aaur jo cheez tumhe sab se pehele dekhayee deti hai… wohi tumhari manzil hai…..!!!!!!!!! kabhi kabhi jo hum khuli aakhonse na dekhsake woh band aakhonse dikhayee deti hai…..

Then he closes his eyes n the very 1^st things he see is kripa's smiling cute innocent face……… .he sees all those cute moments spend with kripa…..

Kripa is sayin I can blindly trust on u angad….

A smile spreads over angad's face…..

Then suddenly he sees kripa cryin n sayin tumne mera bharosa tod diya nah angad….. mera vishwas tod diya nah…..!!!!

Main tumhe kabhi maf nahi karoongi … aab main tumhari zindagi main kabhi wapas nahi aaongee…. Kabhi nahi….. then kripa goes away…..

Now suddenly angad opens his eyes n shouts KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad is all in tears n is sounding really worried…..

A: dadi kripa …. Kripa …. Jaa rahi hai…. Woh jaa rahi hai mujhse chod kar… main usse khona nahi chahata dadi….. I love her dadi I love her!!!!!

Now angad realizes what he just said… he realizes that he just told he loves kripa…. He looks up 2 dadi n says…

A: dadi I love kripa… yush I love her…. Main usse pyaar karta hoon…he smiles with all those tears in his eyes ( khusi ke aasu hehehe…)

Now angad realizes how much he loves kripa… he realizes that he cannot live without her….. n says dadi that….

Maine ussko bahot rulaya hai dadi…. Lekin aaba mujhe aapni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai….. kitni khush hogi woh yeh jankar ki main bhi usse pyaar karta hoon……. I gotta go dadi…. i gotta tell her how much I love her… .

Dadi smiles n says him…

jao angad…. Jakar kripa ko batao ki tum usse kitna pyaar karte ho…. Jaldi jao isse pehele ki kahi der na ho jaye…

okay 2 be continued…..

Originally posted by: happe

awww it was awesome. Angad finally realized his love but my angu made one mistake, he shouts Kripa's name when he truly is in love with me. He is suppose to shout HAPPE, HAPPE, only HAPPE 😳

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thanks for another awesome part

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Originally posted by: eshika

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aarey !!! i am not laughing at u yar.... it's just that i found it funny yet cute....😳 mujhe tumahre andaz pasand aaya..😳 Mrs angad Khanna😆

Originally posted by: eshika

aarey !!! i am not laughing at u yar.... it's just that i found it funny yet cute....😳 mujhe tumahre andaz pasand aaya..😳 Mrs angad Khanna😆

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plz cont

it was fantastic as usual

esha

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Too Good, plz continue...