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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow, eshika, that was good... 😃
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Part 23

Angad's room:

Now angad is back into reality……

He is cryin 4 all those past days……

Kripa's room:

Kripa is unable 2 sleep…… she is lookin outside the window……staring at the moon

Kripa 2 herself: aakhir angad chahata kyaaa hai???? Kyun wapas aaya hai meri zindagi…?????? Humare beech kitna kuch hogaya….. in do salo main bhi kuch nahi badla…… tumhare diye huwe zakhaim aabhi tak mere dil ke andar hain…….kash !!!!! Kash angad tumne mere sath woh sab nahi kiya hota……. Kash main tumse kabhi mili hi na hoti….. agar mili bhi toh tumse itna pyaar na kiya hota……

She cries……

Background song:

Dil mera churaya kyun ??? jab yeh dil tod na hi tha

Hum se dil lagaya kuyn ??? hum se mu mod na hi tha

Why did u break my heart??? Why did u fall in love??? Why did u go away… away…

In the morning:

Prithvi n misthy r on the breakfast table when kripa comes downstairs rubbing her eyes still wearing a night suit…. She has tied her hair up n just lookin like a kid……

M: aayeyeh sleeping beauty!!!!! Uthgayee aap….????? Time dekho !!!! kuch pata bhi hai kitne baje hai…????

Kripa feeling little embarrassed : voh actually kal raat ko der se soo gaye thi nah isliye..

M: haan .. haan.. okay…. Whatever!!!!!

Aaur yeh kyaaa pehena hai tumne… aabhi tal night suit main ho??????? pakka school gal lagrahi hooo…..

Prithvi is all smiling n lookin at kripa's innocent face

Plzzzz misthy aab bas bhi karo……. .bahot hogaya !!!!

Aaur haan aaja sham ko maine aapne dost ko dinner pe invite kiya hai… so u both b ready huh!!!!

M: sure bahi…. We'll be there

Now it's evening time…… both kripa misthy n prithvi r arranging 4 the dinner when the door bell rings…..

Kripa goes 2 open da door n is shocked 2 see angad standing in front of her with a bunch of red roses……. Angad smile lookin at kripa….. n is about 2 give her da red roses when misty just bumps in-between n says

M: wow !!!!!!!!!!! red roses mere liye…. How sweet…..

Angad has no other option …… so he had 2 give those roses 2 misthy which he actually brought 4 kripa….

Kripa gets annoyed seeing angad… but as he is prithvi's fren she had 2 tolerate him

Now all of them r sitting together ….angad is passionately lookin 2 wards kripa…. Where as kripa is finding the whole situation awkward ….. .

Now suddenly the light goes off……

P: aarey yeh light ko kyaa huwa????

K: don worry I'll go get the candles frm upstairs….

Then kripa comes downstairs with da candles…. She was wearing a white chooridar…. N the light of the candle was reflecting on her face…….

Both angad n prithvi at da same time says wow!!!!!!

A: prithvi tumne kuch kaha kyaaa

P: nahi toh….. tumne????

A: nahi….

Both of them talk in their mind……

A: bilkul pari ki tara lagrahi hai….

P: itni sadagi….. chehere pe itni masoomiyat!!!!! Kaha thi tum aab tak??????

Then kripa comes closer n places the candle on the table…..

M: ohh no lagta hai…. Aaj raat bhar bijili nahi aayegie... pata nahi kaise yeh light gayeee

kripa softly :sayed kisi ki aane ki wajhe se aadhera chaaa gaya.....

M: kripa .. kuch kaha kyaa

K: nahi ...

But angad hears that n has tears in his eyes😭

okay 2 be continued😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
👏 Poor Angad on TV as well as in the fan fiction... kya ho raha hai... uska janam kundli achha nahi hai... bechara...😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwwww...that was sad n good at same time..thanx..plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

aww, that is so sweet

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Posted: 20 years ago
That was too good, plz continue...
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: phoenixsuns

👏 Poor Angad on TV as well as in the fan fiction... kya ho raha hai... uska janam kundli achha nahi hai... bechara...😭

totally agree...but you are doing an awsome job!! cant wait for the next part!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 24

Angad has tears in his eyes…… he is really hurted by kripa's words….. but still has a fake smile on his face ….

There is still no lights in the room….. but there r lots of candels which is giving light in the dark room…. Angad n kripa r sitting right infront of each other n the candles in between them…..

Angad is continuously lookin at kripa with all those paasion in his eyes n kripa is really getting annoyed by this….she is tryin hard 2 ignore angad's presence…. Misty is finding the whole situation a bit weird n quietly observing angad n kripa's behavoiur… There is a strange kind of silence 4 sometime… but then misty breaks the silence by requesting angad 2 sing a song 4 them………

Angad gives a cute smile 2 misty n agrees 4 da song but kripa excuses herself n is about 2 leave when angad catches her hand frm back………..

Song:

Der se huwa .. par pyaar toh huwa re…..

Der se huwa .. par pyaar toh huwa re

Ohhh dilruba tune dil leliya re hooooo…..

Kripa tries 2 free her hands……. But angad is holding her hand very tight n not letting her go…… while misthy is observing them very closely….

kyaa hai mohobaat hai mujhko bataya…

In dhadkano ko dhdakna sikhaya…

Hooooo!!! becheniya di mere pyaase din ko…

Raato ko tune tadapna sikhaya….

Muskil bada intezaar huwa re…..

Oo dil ruba tune dil leliya re hooooo

Now finally angad leaves her hand n lets her go….. kripa looks at anagd with all those pain n hatred in her eyes……

Angad gets flashes of the scenes when he insulted kripa's love……. N closes his eyes in tears…..

Mere khayalo main aawaragi thi..

Chahat main naa koi deewanagi thi……

Hooo!!!! kagaj ke phoolo main khoosboo nahi thi….

Veeran khabo si yeh zindagi thi…

Mujheko tera aatebaar huwa re…..

Oo dil ruba tune dil le liya re….. hoooo….

Now he quietly wipes off his tears but misthy notices this n now she is sure that there is something going on between angad n kripa…..she gets more suspicious but suddenly she claps her hand n hugs angad…

M: wow!!!!! Wow !!! wow… anagd I love u…. I am just goin crazy 4 u….

Kripa is not soo happe 2 see misty hugging angad….. however she tries 2 ignore this….. but misthy can very clearly see that she is getting a bit jealous….

2 B continued…

next part is comming with few mins😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
GR* Eshika, do it fast before I doze off...
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 25

Now finally the light is back!!!!!! Angad n kripa looks into each other's eyes as if they have not seen each 4 years…..

It's late night n prithvi insists angad 2 sleep at his place.... angad knows that kripa would not like this so he denies…

A: nahi prithvi…. Phir kabhi…

M: ohhh common angad….. plzz ek hi raat ki toh baat hai….kripa tum hi kaho nah.. sayed tumhari sunle…

Kripa sarcastically : sab insists kar rahe hai toh plzzz ruk jao nah…

Angad has a smile in his face n finally agrees…

P: okay gr8!!!!!!

Kripa angad ko upar wala guest room main le jao…..

Kripa giving a cold look at angad : chale????

Angad just nods n follows her…

Misty getting more suspicious: in dono ke beech main kuch toh hai….. par main yeh nahi janti ki kyaaa….????

Guest Room :

kripa opens the door 4 angad n without sayin anything is about 2 leave when angad grabs her hand……

K( angrily): angad mera haat chodo!!!!

A: mujhe tumse baat karni hai kripa…

K: aaba hamare beech baat karne ko kuch nahi bacha….sab kuch khatam ho gaya hai!!!!

dekho angad mujhe yaha koi tamasha create nahi karna. So plz let me go….. she tries 2 free her hand but angad instead pull her closer 2 wards himself…..

he pushes her 2 wards the wall……. N comes closer…. He has soo much pain in his eyes….

A: kyaaaa kaha tumne????? Phir se kehena????

Sab kuch khatam hogaya?????? Yese kaise sab kuch khatam hogaya kripa????

Kripa pushing angad away!!!! : haan thik suna tumne…. Sab kuch khatam hogaya.. aab kehene sunne ko kuch nahi bacha…. Jo kuch bhi tumhe kehena tha voh toh tum kehechuke ho…… aab aaur kyaaa kehena baki rehgaya hai????

Main tumhari sari yaad aapne dil se nikalchuki hoon….aab mere dil main tumhare liye kuch nahi bacha hai siwaye nafrat k…. samjhe tum??????

A: huh!!! Tumhe toh jhoot bhi nahi bolna aata kripa!!!!!! Tum chahe aapne aap se jhoot bolsakti ho lekin mujhse nahi….

Meri aakho main dekh kar kaho ki tumhare dil main mere liye koi jaga nahi…..look into my eyes damit!!!!!

Kripa finally breaks down into tears n cries….

K: kyun angad kyun!!!! ??? tum kuyn wapas aaye ho meri zindagi main?? Y r u doin this 2 me again n again???? Kyun har bar tum mujhe hurt karte ho angad kyun????

A: main tumhe hurt nahi karrah hoon kripa!!!! Main toh sapne main bhi tumhe hurt karne ki nahi sooch sakta…. Mana ki maine pehele tumhara dil toda tha .. tumhari pyaar ki beejati ki thi….lekin aab main badal gaya hoon kripa… main who pehele wala angad nahi raha……

Tumhare jane k baad mujhe ehsaas huwa ki tum mere liye kyaaa ho???? kitna tadpa hoon main tumhare yaad main janti ho tum????? Kaha kaha nahi dhooda maine tumhe…..

Aaur meri kismet dekhko .. jab tum mujhe mili ho toh tumhe mere pyaar pe aatebar nahi raha….

Kripa's heart wants 2 believe angad but her ego comes in between….. she suddenly gets flashes of the scene where angad insulted her love….

Kripa cries n without sayin anything further just leaves 4rm there… but misthy who was standing near the door listens everything n has tears in her eyes…..

Angad is cryin in the room when misthy comes in….. he quickly wipes off his tears….

M: aapne aasu mere samne chuparahe ho?????

Angad is little confused

M: main sab janti hoon angad… maine sab sunliya …… main toh soch bhi nahi sakti ki tumhare ander itna dard chupa hai……. Kitna pyaar chupa hai kripa k liye

A: misthy woh kripa!!!.....

M:: main janti hoon angad… i know her very well.. woh bahot ziddi ladki hai…. Voh chahe ander kitna bhi tadpe tumhare liye .. magar voh yeh nahi kahegi ki voh aaj bhi tumse bahot pyaar karti hai…. She still loves u …. Uski aakhen dekhi hai maine…. Usse main aabhi tak tumhara intezaar hai…. Lekin woh yeh admit nahi karna chahati ki woh tumse pyaar karti hai….

Lekin tum phikar mat karo….aab sab kuch misty pe chod do….. main bahot aachi tarah se janti hoon ki aab hume kyaa karna hai…..

Angad( little confused): kyaa karna hai…???? main kuch samjha nahi….

M: main ek khel khelne jaa rahi hoon aaur ish khel main tumhe mera saath dena hoga…..

Main tumhare saath pyaar ka natak karongi aaur tumhe meri help karni hogi !!!!!! okay????

A: but misthy main aab kripa ko aaur hurt nahi karna chahta ….. r u sure u wana do this????

M: tum phikar mat karo angad…. Just do as I say…..

A: okay misthy … aagar yesa karne se kripa mere pas wapas aayegi toh main kuch bhi karne k liye tayar hoon…. Anything….

Both of them smile n shakes hand!!!!!!!!!!

2 B continued😃

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